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View Full Version : Texcellence 2-2 Vs Lotto Smirk 4-5 -LOTTO WINS


Allen Knight
02-10-2014, 03:16 PM
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Texcellence Lotto Smirk

Both -3 votes for not voting on the title match

Texcellence
02-13-2014, 12:21 PM
Check.. I've got 10.

Lotto Smirk
02-13-2014, 12:36 PM
Will drop tonight man

Texcellence
02-15-2014, 04:47 AM
I can edit my verse in but I don't think Lotto is gonna show....

Allen Knight
02-15-2014, 05:55 AM
I have his verse so drop

Lotto Smirk
02-15-2014, 07:33 AM
Yo ill go first then man

AK hard on dudes when it comes to rules, so i guess ya pretty fucked
I mean we both -3 votes, difference is u'da been anyway once 3 votes went up
he being cheated,its me his gf's fucking, to her he means nothing
claiming to me she wants to leave text more than ill nika posts up in discussion
u got no chance, cos yo tramp n its inside my pants she's wanting matey
cuz u dirty text n ironically thats the reason she's sending me them on the daily
Easy to insult his sexuality,a weapon given to me to pronounce him dead
It's obv which way he swings when he's had more bi's than masaii's leaving thread
Guy's a fag who'll end up dead n his missus is bad we all give her a necklace made of pearl
So Right after i laytech in the ground, we all gonna put one on n take it in turns t fuck his girl

Texcellence
02-15-2014, 01:36 PM
I share facts and your fictional tales aren’t looking too rigid
Bitches? Even poor chicks aren’t interested in Lotto’s digits
With this heat I’ll make u stand froze, your concepts - past old
Lotto may be here to enrich text but im’a Powerball his ma’s asshole
It’s going to be a lonely valentine, Lotto prays for a one-night stand
But fools himself, nig Left some roses on his bed.. for his Right hand
The irony in your name, tires me to pain, here let me help you figure
See every week we check Lotto in hopes for better but you rarely deliver
I be telling rookies it’s easy to hold a piece but harder to hit the target
And I’m just pissed Lotto doesn’t have a chick I can christen my new car with

Clash
02-16-2014, 03:11 AM
Nothing

Vs

I share facts and your fictional tales aren’t looking too rigidBitches? Even poor chicks aren’t interested in Lotto’s digits



Mvgt tex, had one more hit, close battls, tex had some more good ideas,
Wording off on some.

CtrlF4
02-16-2014, 09:28 AM
Yo ill go first then man

AK hard on dudes when it comes to rules, so i guess ya pretty fucked
I mean we both -3 votes, difference is u'da been anyway once 3 votes went up
ok opener
he being cheated,its me his gf's fucking, to her he means nothing
claiming to me she wants to leave text more than ill nika posts up in discussion
maybe u shud of she's left text more than strikta cuz he left the battling thing once a week lol...but this was kind of awkward
u got no chance, cos yo tramp n its inside my pants she's wanting matey
cuz u dirty text n ironically thats the reason she's sending me them on the daily
ok
Easy to insult his sexuality,a weapon given to me to pronounce him dead
It's obv which way he swings when he's had more bi's than masaii's leaving thread
the punch wasn't dope enough to make up for the old wp
Guy's a fag who'll end up dead n his missus is bad we all give her a necklace made of pearl
So Right after i laytech in the ground, we all gonna put one on n take it in turns t fuck his girl
Kevin hart voice - pineapples...but nah this wp is older than bi/bye one

I share facts and your fictional tales aren’t looking too rigid
Bitches? Even poor chicks aren’t interested in Lotto’s digits
not hard hitting
With this heat I’ll make u stand froze, your concepts - past old
Lotto may be here to enrich text but im’a Powerball his ma’s asshole
ok..but the heat stand froze part collides if u look hard enough
It’s going to be a lonely valentine, Lotto prays for a one-night stand
But fools himself, nig Left some roses on his bed.. for his Right hand
no
The irony in your name, tires me to pain, here let me help you figure
See every week we check Lotto in hopes for better but you rarely deliver
very nice concept delivered decent
I be telling rookies it’s easy to hold a piece but harder to hit the target
And I’m just pissed Lotto doesn’t have a chick I can christen my new car with
nah


V/Lotto...2 quotes to 1...thought both had some misses but Lotto pulled it out

Tic
02-16-2014, 03:01 PM
Lotto had the opener and dirty texts. Definitely improving man. Tex's opener was ok, and the 2nd bar wasn't bad otherwise I thought most were misses.

Vote - Lotto

God Of War
02-16-2014, 03:15 PM
he being cheated,its me his gf's fucking, to her he means nothing
claiming to me she wants to leave text more than ill nika posts up in discussion
u got no chance, cos yo tramp n its inside my pants she's wanting matey
cuz u dirty text n ironically thats the reason she's sending me them on the daily

vs

The irony in your name, tires me to pain, here let me help you figure
See every week we check Lotto in hopes for better but you rarely deliver

those was dope and i go tlotto winning the battle

v/lotto

Sicc
02-16-2014, 08:17 PM
u got no chance, cos yo tramp n its inside my pants she's wanting matey
cuz u dirty text n ironically thats the reason she's sending me them on the daily

vs

The irony in your name, tires me to pain, here let me help you figure
See every week we check Lotto in hopes for better but you rarely deliver

Quote, nice nape flips. Felt Lott's verse was more consistent, IMO. Tex had some ok'ish concepts that he failed to execute on for more of an effective impact.

v/Lotto

KwaL!ty
02-16-2014, 11:31 PM
AK hard on dudes when it comes to rules, so i guess ya pretty fucked
I mean we both -3 votes, difference is u'da been anyway once 3 votes went up

vs


With this heat I’ll make u stand froze, your concepts - past old
Lotto may be here to enrich text but im’a Powerball his ma’s asshole
The irony in your name, tires me to pain, here let me help you figure
See every week we check Lotto in hopes for better but you rarely deliver


Tex def starting to shake some of the rust off I see .. that's whats up ..

Vote- tex

Sharp
02-17-2014, 02:12 PM
he being cheated,its me his gf's fucking, to her he means nothing
claiming to me she wants to leave text more than ill nika posts up in discussion
u got no chance, cos yo tramp n its inside my pants she's wanting matey
cuz u dirty text n ironically thats the reason she's sending me them on the daily

almost quoted lay tech



The irony in your name, tires me to pain, here let me help you figure
See every week we check Lotto in hopes for better but you rarely deliver


at this point most 'lotto' stuff is played, the one I quoted was dope but the rest not so much. Good stuff guys, I got lotto in a close one

v/lotto

King Karaoke
02-17-2014, 04:27 PM
Hi...

The irony in your name, tires me to pain, here let me help you figure
See every week we check Lotto in hopes for better but you rarely deliver

this was cool...
some of your lines were a bit too simple...

AK hard on dudes when it comes to rules, so i guess ya pretty fucked
I mean we both -3 votes, difference is u'da been anyway once 3 votes went up
he being cheated,its me his gf's fucking, to her he means nothing
claiming to me she wants to leave text more than ill nika posts up in discussion
u got no chance, cos yo tramp n its inside my pants she's wanting matey
cuz u dirty text n ironically thats the reason she's sending me them on the daily

Opener was a bit played but wording was cool...
u used two current event lines with similar concepts but only the nik one was good...

LS was more consistent....

Vote- LS...

Bye...

Plot
02-17-2014, 04:42 PM
Lotto had this all over Tex, every bar I would give an ok, with the 'left tex' bar getting a good. Didn't like any of Tex, played lotto nps, and a 'delivery' concept, all old.

V-Lotto

Allen Knight
02-17-2014, 04:53 PM
lotto wins 7-2