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Geno
03-29-2013, 06:54 PM
Eyo..


From the dust was stones created in shades of grey
I've walked through those walls unscathed or fased
Cause genocide paves the way through detours in roads
I'm a wrecking ball you cant stop from important goals
Drink poison, grow, and survive despite the odds
I'm the prophet you can turn to when christ is not
My life, the block, the rugged spots I'm welcomed at
The faith I used to have in my heart, I fell from that
Selfish acts, sound the alarm in my wake til the bells destroyed
Ill talk to my demons til every single one in hell deploys
I felt the void collapse, the strength of my pride restore
Went to bat for my sins and stood alone in the violent war
What you think I've been so silent for, consumed at work
Cause broke niggas don't get paid til they prove their worth
Ruthless jerk, who's berserck when you tell me I won't win
With confidence and leadership that makes you follow this
Hollow tips, grenades, or bare hands on balls and knuckles
Swing til I've burnt all the strength from my largest muscles
Til I fall and buckle, you can't fuck with the passion inside
The cry, My fury can't be held back until the last of it dies
need a casket the size of the grand canyon to bury my pulse
and the whole entire fucking world just to carry me off

Geno
04-03-2013, 09:56 AM
Can I at least get a hello, clearly not my best work, but damn.. long time no see gen

KennyCerealBowl
04-03-2013, 10:05 AM
Can I at least get a hello, clearly not my best work, but damn.. long time no see gen

wassup gen

zygote
04-03-2013, 10:10 AM
Greetings, welcome back. Precise almost methodical rhyme scheme combined with aggressive emotion driven internal thoughts, your last two lines were a perfect illustration of it.

Split
04-03-2013, 10:11 AM
Genocide I will give you the best feed I can once I finish revitalizing Swag and Flow

i don't need feed (too economic) but if you either hit up Me vs Pancake Topical in the BA or got to me, Nigma, and Vlgar's collab it'd be appreciated... I feel kinda plateau'd atm and could use some harsh criticism


Either way I got you soon

Just Write
04-03-2013, 10:16 AM
lol this was pretty cool man. i liked the whole dark feel to it, like gruesome but still mellow toned if you get me. liked the grand canyon part and a few other lines. just came off smooth as fuck. nice job uce.

Geno
04-03-2013, 11:37 AM
I got yoju tonight. Gonna drop a lot of feed in different areas/votes. Ill be there.

Hi cereal

Zen
04-03-2013, 04:27 PM
Definatly not your best piece but it seems like it could be your most emotionally driven piece I've read from you. You feel like you're carryin the world on your shoulders, stressed out, etc. Still a great piece because of the emotional impact imo. Welcome back Geno

Geno
04-03-2013, 06:07 PM
just how we do bruh, emotion is 50% of my stiggity lol. thanks peoples, nice to be back, lets see if the kid can crack some heads in the league now.


later

Frank
04-03-2013, 06:25 PM
2 TAME

GET YOUR FEET WET

Split
04-03-2013, 07:32 PM
Cause genocide paves the way through detours in roads
I'm a wrecking ball you cant stop from important goals
>>hm...
Til I fall and buckle, you can't fuck with the passion inside
The cry, My fury can't be held back until the last of it dies
need a casket the size of the grand canyon to bury my pulse
and the whole entire fucking world just to carry me off

ended on a high note...

this was a bit strange, felt like it was really slow to get rollin. usually your rhymes are smooth and unstuttered. the content was rough around the edges but also methodically honest, seemed real and built into reality... i can tell your stories/ concepts are gonna be fire as fuck this first match. GL

WELCOME BACK DOE

Vulgar
04-05-2013, 09:15 PM
Genocide

Solid keystyle. A bit clunky but you got your point across, at least tone-wise. You made it seem like unfinished business has the tendency to make others pay interest in the form of suffering, while you maintain your rise to the top in civilized life.

Keep doing you