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Hush
02-12-2014, 09:29 PM
Bags

Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds



Allen Knight


Anthony aka old dirty bagstard aka jim blaze aka sharted while working out


Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars
Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag

Sicc
02-12-2014, 09:48 PM
Eats her heart out was lol. String of dudes was alright, played concept tho. Rest was ok'ish - opener was funny too, tho.

Vs

Gym membership was lol, casey anthony was dope, IMO. Grave yard was eh, photo bomb could have been executed better. Concept dope but execution dissappointed me. Closer was cool too.

V/AK - consist, IMO. Think his punches landed effectively. Bags verse was pretty good tho, definitely a cool battle. Was actually impressed by Bags. Dude actually pretty nice with it. Props to both!

Destroyer
02-12-2014, 10:01 PM
Bags

Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts
haha nice
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
ok
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
hilarious
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
nice
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording
very nice. dig the wordplay. some people will say it's forced. it's not
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds
nice closer

Allen Knight

Anthony aka old dirty bagstard aka jim blaze aka sharted while working out

Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
lmao. dope personal
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
ok
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
when that K see anthony? I like this one. it's a little forced, because I've never heard it called just a K, but it's creative
We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars
Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard
lol
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
eh
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag
bhahahaba. nice closer

fuuuuuuuck this is close. I went back and read it again. the only bar I wasn't feeling at all was the naked pics one from Allen. So, I'm gonna vote for bags even though blah blah des votes for bags blah blah, fuck off. it's bullshit. I vote for who I think was the winner so suck a dick.

v/bags

Alphabet
02-12-2014, 10:14 PM
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording

vs

Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene

3 v 3 for the quotables imo, yet ak had the lotb with gold gym that shit was hilarious and tbh nothing else really missed from ak, photo bomb n the dirt on top of men were both good and if tweaked a bit would've bin quotables for sure..custody/record a mag was a pretty direct hit as well. bags verse was consistent as well but just didn't have the same impact ak did through out so for that i have ak getting the dub. dope battle

Tettris
02-13-2014, 02:30 PM
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds

vs

Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag

excellent battle gentlemen...I think Allen had a stronger verse here...bags had good lines but AK had that fire in his writing...

v/AK

tyler
02-13-2014, 03:06 PM
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds

Vs.

Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag



Man this was a dope and close battle and could really go either way depending on preference bags had a string of hard hitting lines but damn that closer from ak was funny as fuck and hit for me, I like those kinda direct hits tho hence y this is based on preference close but..

Vote is for Ak

Seyance
02-13-2014, 09:29 PM
Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts
float rent/ joe metts? barely. punch is funny though nice concept
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
"u ain't about that life" isn't that a miley cyrus line? creative angle for a decent hit
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
funny shit, made me laugh but the flip was pretty obvious
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
naa, just didn't connect.. both the flip and wording was prety weak
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording
seen far too many alkaline flips before for this to have an impact, tad stretched
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds
didn't like it.. wording wasn't great and the concept was weak

started off really strong, went pretty creative.. a couple of good together but seemed to tail off towards the end, might of run outta inspiration.. but some good clowning in there

vs

Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
hahaha funny shit, good way to open the verse..
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
oh jeez, your going in like that? very direct personal
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
nice flip on concept, creative and it worked well good setup too
We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars
Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard
funny, but there's just no impact from the punch, obvious really
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
made me laugh out loud, rhyme could've been smoother but it didn't matter
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag
hahaha, truuee.. probaby not really. i'd hope not anyway. kinda obvious flip tho

went off straight from the start, strong momentum and kept it interesting with a few different angles and creative flips, the verse was mostly well worded.. with a few low points also but came off the stronger of the two verses to me

v/allen

Bender
02-14-2014, 12:40 AM
Bags I liked the eat your heart out line and time capsule lines. Most of your verse was pretty funny I thought it was pretty good.

Ak I liked the hitches explode in laughter line...was prob the lotb to be honest record the mag was ok...ww2 line was kinds tucked up lol..

I thought this was a good a battle and even though Ak had the lotb I was feeling bags a little bit more I'm not sure why but I think he made me laugh more with that eat her heart out line..

Good job fellas

Vote bags

Orc
02-14-2014, 07:05 AM
first read i thought allen won it clearly but i read again and changed my mind. the alkaline was creative and fire and so was the fire cracker. time capsule was ill too. allens verse was funny tho and photobomb was lotb. i liked the closer too. i thin Bags's verse was a little more creative and technical & im swayed towards that. ill battle tho best i've read in a while. i think Bags got it. dope shit gents

Witty
02-14-2014, 12:52 PM
Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts
lold
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
didn't like it
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
lmao
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
Nah
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording
Dope
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds
Cool


vs

Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
saw it coming but still lold
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
Damn lol
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
Cool wordplay, kinda old concept but it was cool
We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars
Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard
nah
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
not bad
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag
lmao

Allen's last bar was probably my favourite of the battle, but bags had two (the eat your heart out & alkaline bars) that made me lol irl. Both had some nice personals, which isn't surprising cuz they are used to insulting each other, but I got bags taking it, barely.

Hush
02-14-2014, 01:50 PM
Allen- 5
Bags- 4

Hush
02-16-2014, 12:35 PM
Up

CtrlF4
02-16-2014, 12:44 PM
Bags

Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts
ok
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
ok
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
nah
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
nah
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording
cool
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds
kind of seems like destroyer bar vs kar but I don't like this his was a lil better


Allen Knight


Anthony aka old dirty bagstard aka jim blaze aka sharted while working out


Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
ok
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
decent
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
nice
We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars
Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard
ehh
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
thought this was dope
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag
nah


V/ak...Both came with some stuff but Allen had harder hits but this was Def a nice battle props

StarFaggot
02-17-2014, 12:15 AM
Bags had shadow puppet, time capsule... Cash McDs was good current event flip, alkaline was ok, firecracker had great creativity. One of the better, cleaner verses I've read from Bags. Good stuff

AK had Casey Anthony, gold gym was ok but I'm picky in certain instances and it's golds gym, rest of verse was cool concepts but reminded me of concepts I would have on a throwaway verse.

Good battle, Bags wins here.

Ghost1
02-19-2014, 07:52 PM
Bump

Sharp
02-21-2014, 07:16 PM
Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording


Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag


close as fuck... same number of quotes but I thought aks were just a little harder hitting overall but this could totally go either way

v/allen

Hush
02-22-2014, 09:48 AM
Bags

Bitch u dont work on bmws.......u suck dicks to float rent
Only time youll EVER see cash is in a mcdonalds parkin lot....oh shit ur joe metts
---u know this ain't a punch. Wasted


And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
---fire
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out
--like it
All jokes aside i kno u love her. So ill make her my damsel
Then flip & put ur most prized posession in the ground quicker then a time capsule
--nah light
But as far as skillset? 5yrs and still This pussy isnt learning
Alkaline up all his concepts, hed still get charged w/ battery 4 butchering the wording
--seen it to much ok flip tho
An ur nc2 champ list dont matter. Hope u dont think it does.
Ull never be fire, cracker. U wont blow wen u only known 4 beatin a string of duds
--dece



Allen Knight


Anthony aka old dirty bagstard aka jim blaze aka sharted while working out


Ull neva get verse of the torney & ima slam the subject
Only time u drop gold gym, u canceled ur membership for shittin ur pants in public
--ok
Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
--lol dig it
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
--- dayum fire
We all kno u fuck w/ dudes & pick'em up at gay bars
Cuz Dirt been on top of more men than a WW2 military graveyard
--light
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
--lotb
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag
--straight foward dig it



V/ Allen

Certain
02-27-2014, 09:41 PM
Allen Knight, I just got to reading this. Definitely the best verse I've read from you (not that I've read that many). How long were you sitting on some of these concepts, though?

KwaL!ty
02-28-2014, 04:05 AM
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out



vs


Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag



not that close of battle & Allen ended it with the Casey Anthony line was fucking sick ... good shit fellas .. Allen came with some sick fucking concepts .. while bags on the other hand was trying to be funny and use statement bars instead of swinging.

Certain
02-28-2014, 04:09 AM
And man U dont fight u aint about that life fam ur frontin
If it come to hands in the spotlight u turn n duck on sight like a shadow puppet
But V day is comin. Ur chick? ... simply...shes a large cow.
An if lifes like a box of chocolates i hope that fat bitch literally eats her heart out



vs


Ur failin as a father faggot, ur girls gonna be a big slut
Closest that bitch'll ever be to daddies lil angel's her stage name at a strip club
AK w/ the clip loaded, spraying at ur eyes mean
when that fuckin Casey Anthony it'll be another dead kid at the crime scene
U always try to take pics naked, thats a gay motion bastard
Ur idea of a photo bombs whipping out ur dick an bitches explode in laughter
Ur a fucking deadbeat dad and ill scorch u fag
only dude to win custody of his kid,
...come home from court lock her in a room & record a mag



not that close of battle & Allen ended it with the Casey Anthony line was fucking sick ... good shit fellas .. Allen came with some sick fucking concepts .. while bags on the other hand was trying to be funny and use statement bars instead of swinging.



This battle is closed.