Defiant vs. namix {namix wins}

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Defiant namix

[namix]

check - somewhere between 24-48?

[Defiant]

It'll never get voted on

12-16 or il match if u drop first

[namix]

hey fellas im going to need a 24hr ext, but will hit this up tomorrow

[namix]

it’s okay to look up to me – but please, close ya eyes as I’m bustin
as I shake my ass ‘n the last of my rust off from several levels above him
I can kick it solo in the dojo… um wait.. eyo admins, hold the grin
thanks for putting me against the name we use to give away no-show wins
if not I’ve got a demodulator, built to expose a bitch when its spotted;
‘n GOWs gotta demodulator, built on the idea ya shouldn’t be modded!
when kids see vs. me, some do a 360, others flip gracefully
but the second that I said I said Hi Def, this kid did a damn 1080p
but yo, on the cupid tip - if he met my last opponent, it’d be funny son
cuz on the town or in the casino, he’d be the only playa hittin on 21
this kid was even named after a night I took his mom backwards in bed
ya’ll want nameplay? put Defiant in a mirror ‘n reflect on the t-n-a i feD
the hour is neigh, hop off that high horse and on down to my sack
or be on the ground, hands down -like a throwback powerpad match!
and what the hell is that?i if 5-5 is his record, he has no chance
if its poker, it means he got a small pair in his hand AND his pants! ;)

[Defiant]

these kids your meant to be teaching are wack, but u cant deny none
ironic u offer a cross trainer service, but id have you tied to tracks and ran over by one
apprentely u was decent, but now you've spat in every fans face
cause when i say namibia poor excuse, its not a opinion of the african place
heard the old names but never u, so now im colder than december
that even w/ a 'kungfugrip' we dont 'oneduh' why your a 'username' we'l never remember
no bitch is gonna find you attractive, even ya lover lie
i mean the way your such a down and out, ya girl does it to every other guy
ya ideas are pathetic, its crazy how dark they've got
ya career now is so still n ineffective it came with its own disabled parking spot
every concept is forced, the type to make the site view n plea
ya fake flips'll get hit w/ so many aggressive counters, it'd explain why wrestlers join UFC
ive not cared recently, but now im around to win
ive been saving this battle for a rainy day, just 2 find a puddle to drown you in
i grab 2 broke girls in a club, but w/ nam here you'll see
thats his nights end differently, he grabs 2 broke girls to watch the dvd

[Dominate]

it’s okay to look up to me – but please, close ya eyes as I’m bustin
as I shake my ass ‘n the last of my rust off from several levels above him
'as I shake my ass' kinda needs a 'no homo' appended to it lol... that kinda cancelled with the rest of the line which I thought was good, making me feel neutral about this overall
I can kick it solo in the dojo… um wait.. eyo admins, hold the grin
thanks for putting me against the name we use to give away no-show wins
good, especially given he almost no showed here lol
if not I’ve got a demodulator, built to expose a bitch when its spotted;
‘n GOWs gotta demodulator, built on the idea ya shouldn’t be modded![/B]
nice wp, original
when kids see vs. me, some do a 360, others flip gracefully
but the second that I said I said Hi Def, this kid did a damn 1080p
that np gotta be done on him, too obv
but yo, on the cupid tip - if he met my last opponent, it’d be funny son
cuz on the town or in the casino, he’d be the only playa hittin on 21
cool, not bad
this kid was even named after a night I took his mom backwards in bed
ya’ll want nameplay? put Defiant in a mirror ‘n reflect on the t-n-a i feD
little bit of a reach - "feeding" tna... but flip is roflz so overall I still liked
the hour is neigh, hop off that high horse and on down to my sack
or be on the ground, hands down -like a throwback powerpad match!
cool
and what the hell is that?i if 5-5 is his record, he has no chance
if its poker, it means he got a small pair in his hand AND his pants! ;)
ehhhh

Not bad but seen better from you. had expected more

these kids your meant to be teaching are wack, but u cant deny none
ironic u offer a cross trainer service, but id have you tied to tracks and ran over by one
trainer/train ehh I feel you need to do something with the 'er' to make it work
apprentely u was decent, but now you've spat in every fans face
cause when i say namibia poor excuse, its not a opinion of the african place
cool. Gotta pronounce it a bit weird for it to work but against namix you can get away with that
heard the old names but never u, so now im colder than december
that even w/ a 'kungfugrip' we dont 'oneduh' why your a 'username' we'l never remember
OK/decent, had the personal aspect which was cool
no bitch is gonna find you attractive, even ya lover lie
i mean the way your such a down and out, ya girl does it to every other guy
I think this needed a bit more set up on what his girl doing a 'down and out' to guys is
ya ideas are pathetic, its crazy how dark they've got
ya career now is so still n ineffective it came with its own disabled parking spot
I thought this was lulz, I liked it
every concept is forced, the type to make the site view n plea
ya fake flips'll get hit w/ so many aggressive counters, it'd explain why wrestlers join UFC
decent bc of personal aspect
ive not cared recently, but now im around to win
ive been saving this battle for a rainy day, just 2 find a puddle to drown you in
ehhhh
i grab 2 broke girls in a club, but w/ nam here you'll see
thats his nights end differently, he grabs 2 broke girls to watch the dvd
ehhh 2 broke girls flip was a bit uninspired

Diso from IHH right? You've gotten much better over the years, this verse was a lot better than I was expecting tbh


Battle is closer than I thought it would be, but looking back on my breakdown Namix had maybe 1 more bar I was feeling but also 1-2 bars more that I thought were standouts


v/ Namix

coo battle

[~RustyGunZ~]

but yo, on the cupid tip - if he met my last opponent, it’d be funny son
cuz on the town or in the casino, he’d be the only playa hittin on 21
and what the hell is that?i if 5-5 is his record, he has no chance
if its poker, it means he got a small pair in his hand AND his pants!

shake rust was to simple. no show wins the same, no meat to it. demod was not working for me. 1080p is a stretch. i'll give u a 21 assuming it's a chick i don't think so though. that nameplay line was a reaaach. nah @ powerpad match. closer was kind of corny but okay.

vs

apprentely u was decent, but now you've spat in every fans face
cause when i say namibia poor excuse, its not a opinion of the african place
ya ideas are pathetic, its crazy how dark they've got
ya career now is so still n ineffective it came with its own disabled parking spot
ive not cared recently, but now im around to win
ive been saving this battle for a rainy day, just 2 find a puddle to drown you in
i grab 2 broke girls in a club, but w/ nam here you'll see
thats his nights end differently, he grabs 2 broke girls to watch the dvd

trainer on train was a reach. onedudh kung line was eh. seen down and out. parking spot okay. puddle was cool. 2 broke girls was a cool concept so i'll give u that but worded kind of poorly.

v/def

[ill nik-A]

namix had no show, demodulatorand 21 was aight

defi had African place and drown u in was aight but generic

this was close but namix squeezes by

[Cashius]

21

Vs.

Fake flips

Maybe being a little stingy with the quotes but those were the only stand outs for me. The 21 line was lotb and compared to that the fake flips line didn't really stand up. So, I got namix here.

Namix.

[Sharp]

21 was cool, no show was alright
Hi def and demodulator were okay but a little predictable

V

Nambia, fake flips, handicap was lolz

Felt like this was pretty close, but I thought what I quoted from defiant hit harder than namix's. Cool battle guys, gotta edge it to def tho

V/ defiant

[bleak]

21, no show

vs.

fake flips, handicap

Not generous on quotes. Could have quoted one or two more from both. I liked what Def dropped here, it had an effortless feel that I usually get from nam. Nam could have made this drop worlds better wit just a few tweaks here n there. Def also could have worded some of his punches differently for the full effect. Close one here, but I like Nam's 2 a tad better than Def's 2, so I'll have to base it on that.

v/Nam

[Sn00p]

4-2, namix. First to 5 wins, must win by 2.

[Orc]

it’s okay to look up to me – but please, close ya eyes as I’m bustin
as I shake my ass ‘n the last of my rust off from several levels above him
NOTHING REALLY HERE..NICE SWAG TO IT BUT NO VENOM
I can kick it solo in the dojo… um wait.. eyo admins, hold the grin
thanks for putting me against the name we use to give away no-show wins
SAME AS ABOVE..TOO SIMPLE
if not I’ve got a demodulator, built to expose a bitch when its spotted;
‘n GOWs gotta demodulator, built on the idea ya shouldn’t be modded!
THIS WAS NICE TO ME
when kids see vs. me, some do a 360, others flip gracefully
but the second that I said I said Hi Def, this kid did a damn 1080p
CLEVER BUT I DIDNT REALLY LIKE IT IF IM HONEST..POINTS FOR CREATIVITY THO
but yo, on the cupid tip - if he met my last opponent, it’d be funny son
cuz on the town or in the casino, he’d be the only playa hittin on 21
DIDNT REALLY LIKE THIS ONE BUD
this kid was even named after a night I took his mom backwards in bed
ya’ll want nameplay? put Defiant in a mirror ‘n reflect on the t-n-a i feD
COOL AND CREATIVE..ON SOME ARSONAL OR DNA SHIT HAHA
the hour is neigh, hop off that high horse and on down to my sack
or be on the ground, hands down -like a throwback powerpad match!
SIMPLE HERE
and what the hell is that?i if 5-5 is his record, he has no chance
if its poker, it means he got a small pair in his hand AND his pants! ;)
NOT FEELING THIS BUD

these kids your meant to be teaching are wack, but u cant deny none
ironic u offer a cross trainer service, but id have you tied to tracks and ran over by one
U SHOULDA USED CROSS TRAIN AS THE REFERENCE & WORDED IT AROUND THAT. CROSS TRAINER IS JUST TOO MUCH OF A REACH FOR THE CONCEPT TO WORK
apprentely u was decent, but now you've spat in every fans face
cause when i say namibia poor excuse, its not a opinion of the african place
DOESNT WORK CUZ IF YA SHORTENED HIS NAME YOU'D SAY NAM NOT NAMI
heard the old names but never u, so now im colder than december
that even w/ a 'kungfugrip' we dont 'oneduh' why your a 'username' we'l never remember
NOTHING HERE REALLY. I SEE WHAT U DONE BUT NO STING TO IT
no bitch is gonna find you attractive, even ya lover lie
i mean the way your such a down and out, ya girl does it to every other guy
THIS WAS A COOL FLIP
ya ideas are pathetic, its crazy how dark they've got
ya career now is so still n ineffective it came with its own disabled parking spot
REACHING WITH THE CONCEPT AGAIN
every concept is forced, the type to make the site view n plea
ya fake flips'll get hit w/ so many aggressive counters, it'd explain why wrestlers join UFC
THIS WAS AN OK UFC LINE
ive not cared recently, but now im around to win
ive been saving this battle for a rainy day, just 2 find a puddle to drown you in
OKAY I GUESS
i grab 2 broke girls in a club, but w/ nam here you'll see
thats his nights end differently, he grabs 2 broke girls to watch the dvd
ITS NOT DOPE TO GRAB TWO BROKE GIRLS ANYWAY, COULDA SET IT UP BETTER

OVERALL NAMIX DIDNT REALLY TRY THIS WEEK..NOT UP TO HIS STANDARDS SOME OF THE PUNCHES LACKED ANY GUSTO..DEFIANT YOU NEEDS TO WORK ON YOUR SET UPS THEY'RE LAZY AND THE RHYMING CAN THROW ME OFF ALSO..SOME GOOD IDEAS BUT THE SET UPS BEING REIGNED IN A LITTLE MORE COULD HELP YOU IMPROVE IMO..PRETTY CLOSE HERE BUT I GOT DEFIANT CUZ HIS IDEAS WERE BETTER

[Strikta]

I must be the only one who thought the demodulator line was fire. All in all tho I feel like Def's ideas didn't get executed properly enough to have the more effective verse. This was still a cool ass battle. Def's down & out line was nice.. but nam had the modulator line which was lotb to me, iono why.. just how it came off. The mirror line was also on another level. Def was cool here tho, but namix took it off creativity & consistency. I can elaborate on my vote more if need be. Props guys.

Vote- namix