View Full Version : Shadow Boxing rnd1 Destroyer vs Alphabet -ALPH WINS
Alph
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
Destro
word corn starch works better for gravies tho imo
i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
veritas
02-15-2014, 10:00 AM
or faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
LOL THATS A GOOD CONCEPT. AINT SEEN THAT DONE YET. PLUS HAD A GOOD FLOW.
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
BURN. ORIGINAL WORDPLAY AS TO HOW DES IS THE BIGGEST WHORE ON THE SITE.
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
DAMN SON. ETHER. POSSIBLY LOTB.
& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous
I LIKED THE IDEA BUT THE WORDING WAS A LITTLE AWKWARD
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
DAMMMMN. I AM IMPRESSED OVERALL WITH THIS VERSE. DOPE ALF.
Destro
Quote:
Originally Posted by Alphabet View Post
word corn starch works better for gravies tho imo
i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to
WHAT? NO PUNCH.
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
NO FIRE. YOU PROBABLY THOUGHT THIS HIT HARD, ALPHA=ALF THE...EH.
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup
THIS WAS COOL, BUT THE NEAR RHYME WAS A LITTLE STRETCHED.
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
LAME.
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
zzzzzz....
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
SO NOW YOU END BY BIG UPPING YOUR DRUG USE. DOPE DUDE. SWIDT?
MVGT ALPHABET....HIS PUNCHES HIT MUCH HARDER. PLUS HE HAD THE OBV LOTB WITH THE SOUL BURN INFERTILE PUNCH.
GOOD BATTLE GUYS STAY UP
Ghost1
02-15-2014, 10:17 AM
[QUOTE=Hush;275482]Alph
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
Boring
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
Anything bags/grocery store is played into oblivion.....this was worded clean tho
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
Every punch u thro is infertile? Who wouod ever say that....? This is a reach just to use the personal about his wife. The personal is strong on its own.....but u dont get credit just for mentioning it.
& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous
This is ok
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
This is fire.
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
Kar/car nameplays are played since 2010. The audi/rings play was fresh....but....it was a text battle....not a fight? I dont like the reaching....
Destro
i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to
This is ok
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
Its alph a male....not alf the male....veritas is illiterate. Punch is average.
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup
Dope
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
Flappy bird punches r played at this point
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
Tgis is dope to me
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
Ok
Alroght.....so my issue w alphabets verse is this.......hes creative....and his concepts r dope.....but most of the concepts only work for the punch.....they dont actually make sense both ways.....ur reaching and the actually msg of the diss is lost just so u can execute the punch..... des punches r straigjtforward....concepts rnt spectacular....but they landed .....wording was succinct per usual....wouodnt kill des to go outside rhe box a bit in the future......but id say he did enuff here i just wasnt feelin alphabets verse as much with the reaching.
V destroyer
KwaL!ty
02-15-2014, 12:07 PM
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
^ouch
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
vs
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
Damn this was a dope battle lots of lines quoted def battle of the first round .. Alpha surprised the hell out of me w/ some nice lines .. But Des showed up w/ some short simple effective and accurate lines .. the Straight bet was dope flip ..
Vote- Des
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
Eh, pretty cool.
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery
This was dope. All though I think the final executing punch could have been executed differently, but still nice, IMO.
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
Personal, I assume. But wording isn't sitting well with me. Infertile concept there, think could have went in a different direction. Plus Stagnant/Pregnant don't rhyme well.
& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous
Lol, cool wording's weird tho. Felt like I read "Drive" way to many times.
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
Personal, I take it.
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
I think this was a dope concept but a bit of a reach. What does a test dummy have to do with the grill of an audi? See what I'm saying. I think you could have executed that concept differently for more of a smoother transition.
vs
i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to
NO real harshness/diss here. Lacks sting.
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
Not sure what this means, tbh. Most likely a personal?
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup
Played concept that I've seen flipped on him many times. Also predictable considering his name is Alphabet, it's almost guaranteed some ones going to flip an Alphabet soup punch.
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
What do you mean by a pipe dream? Not sure what you were trying to deliver here but I've read about 5 Flappy Bird concepts this week alone, played, I'd say.
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
This was dope, but the execution or transition of the concept could have been worded differently. Like the closing punch but the set up to get there is what through me off. I think you could have said something like "And if anyone's ever seen him spread" or something to that effect. IDK, just my opinion.
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
Nah, played.
Overall, pretty close battle, IMO. I think it was struggled execution of concepts vs basic concepts that lacked proper execution. I think ABC's helping hand concept was straight fire vs D's spread/straight bet concept. I'd say I'd have to vote for Alpha for the simple fact, he had less played material that I feel out weighs some of the concepts D dropped. So punch for punch, jab for jab, I got Alpha edging this one. Good battle fellas.
v/ABC-XYZ
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
Vs.
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
I think this was a relatively easy battle to call. I didn't really like Destroyer's verse, none of the lines really stood out to me. Even the quotes were reaches IMO. Alphabet probably your best verse I've seen man, good shit. Your wording was on point and your concepts were pretty good as well.
V/Alphabet
Unfukwitable
02-15-2014, 11:51 PM
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
vs.
i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
One had a stronger start , One had a stronger finish ... v/Destro
tyler
02-16-2014, 01:22 AM
Both of you had some solid lines alpha had the oldboy and Audi lines that i thought were dope while des had the gravy spread and wax lines that I thought hit pretty well overall I think des won slightly cuz he had the lotb for me which i thought was the straight bet line good battle but overall mvgt destroyer,
I got Des here too, thought the Oldboy thing was semi-predictable but okay, the bags and infertile lines didn't hit for me, the triforce line was Alph's best. Des had me liking the gravy line and alphabet soup, I could maybe have edged him the flappy bird line too but it was just okay.
Des got it.
CtrlF4
02-16-2014, 10:28 AM
Alph
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
nicely worded
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
nah
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
he did get her pregnant though she just lost it
& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous
OK but didn't like the drive drive thing but it prolly wouldn't have worked if u didn't say he didn't have the drive
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
cool
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
didn't like this
Destro
i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to
decent
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup
[B]ok..but I hate these kind of punches cuz it really only works for audio Imo
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
ok
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
ok
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
wack
V/destroyer.. alphabet started strong and finished off...Des started off and finished better...I like des flappy bird line it's the best one I've seen out of the ones I've seen here...I hated des wax line it threw his whole verse for me I was like noooo...alpha had old boy which was cool n the tri force was lotb...This was a good as battle tho...props to both of you..Des for consistency
Tettris
02-17-2014, 09:46 AM
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
vs
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
decent battle here gentlemen...alpha just seemed a little fresher...fewer alphabet soup/flappy bird lines...
v/alpha
Alphabet
02-18-2014, 05:20 PM
up
Sharp
02-21-2014, 04:40 PM
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
close one, I saw triforce as lotb... des had better misses but nothing too major, n while alph had worse misses he had harder hits. barely edged it for me, great battle guys
v/alphabet
Alph
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
--dece
what u quote is poor so it’s no doubt u dick ride w/ votes u whore
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
--so played
ur ancient as fuck n lack impact, the verses u drop are quite stagnant
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
--horrible setup no punch
& u know ur not pleasing that young slut, she’s down for bangin fellas
des doesn’t have the drive, so I’ll drive one into her that’d make miss daisy jealous
--old concept light
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
-dope
i’m only spittin what’s real.. & in that champ match u aren’t bringing the skill
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
--nice flip
Destro
Quote:
Originally Posted by Alphabet
word corn starch works better for gravies tho imo
i make mad loot. the kind that allows me to bang porn stars fool
meanwhile, the only gravy u make is the kind that u can add corn starch to
--light
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
--super light
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
i'll pull out ur i's & toss em in a bowl... that's alphabet soup
--ok better still light tho
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
--ok
how u on so many rap sites & no one knows that ur gay yet?
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
--eh
des stays blazed, with concentrates of strains u can't handle
only time this kid ever sees wax is on q-tips & scented candles
--ok
This was weak
Alph got it cuz Des never hit his stride
alpha got this
will breakdown soon
for faggots like u I have supreme hate, ur washed up and indeed fake..
ur such a pathetic Oldboy u could’ve played josh brolin’s character in the remake
ur life’s a joke, nothing u writes bin dope. even ur crew knows ur end is near
faggot if ur top o’ the trifoce it's cus gow n bags've supported ur entire txt career
^^lmao
vs
u don't pull any bitches. think u got game? don't be dumb son
alpha male that be making beyond look like he actually was one
think u can champ this? u think u can steal des' glory?
that ain't just a pipe dream, it's a flappy bird success story
^the whole pipe/mario concept been played to death
weak battle.
alpha started strong but fell off while des had some cheap hits. got alphabet winning this one
vote - alphabet
Allen Knight
02-23-2014, 10:43 AM
Opener, triforce, closer
Vs
Opner, straight bet
V/ alphabet , this was kinda close both had some played shit but alpha quotes hit harder and He was a lil more consistent overall .des straight bet was nice but he had more misses.still a close one , Alpha wins imo
Diode
02-23-2014, 10:55 AM
every helping hand u give Bags puts u one step closer to owning a grocery store
it’s fitting evry punch u throw is so infertile it rivals u trying to get ur wife pregnant
u looked like a test dummy for audi the way kar smashed his rings through ya grill
vs
u stepped into the ring with a killer, & now ur dead dude
if anyone ever sees the spread they'll know ur anything but straight bet
v/ alph
des has one too many corny lines (flappy bird, wax)
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