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Hush
02-22-2014, 02:23 PM
Open mic kinda cooler than battling in a type of way

God Of War
02-22-2014, 02:42 PM
I always like the fact that you had MUCH more freedom when you wrote an open mic

Ghost1
02-22-2014, 02:42 PM
U are literally battlings only current hope.

Do this on an alias er something. Smh.

Dope girl
02-22-2014, 02:46 PM
Difference between lyrics & Poets.

Lars
02-22-2014, 02:51 PM
I concur

plz continue

Hush
02-22-2014, 02:52 PM
U are literally battlings only current hope.

Do this on an alias er something. Smh.

I don't rock alias

ill nik-A
02-22-2014, 02:55 PM
Well u get fresher lines because of how many punch lines have been written

But I find constructing punch lines a bit more fun

neutral
02-22-2014, 03:16 PM
In a time way before recognition two lovers stirred
Way Before the simplest colors merged or man discovered words
these endless entities since the days of young conferred
beyond space and times curves, they lay where none disturb
as raindrops became torrents then shrunk into fountains
an embrace that saw dust to stone and stone to a mountain
observing forests tower from the seeds of a flower
still they held fast with all strength an there power
gripping tighter as roots grew to trunks at there bower
to a love the minutes seconds an hours sought to devour
when summers was hottest an winters were colder
hope hung on un cowered shoulders as days made them older
volcanoes grew from boulders an hellfire burnt out to smolder
when all other wonders were over he still gasped to behold her
still holding as the world advanced at no more than a prance
forever entranced…
stuck in the bitterest curse if it isn’t romance

^ Poem wiring unicorn loving haiku technician i.e. faggot.

NYCSPITZ
02-22-2014, 03:18 PM
^^^ tell me hush won an OM award for that so I can lol

Hush
02-22-2014, 03:22 PM
^ Poem wiring unicorn loving haiku technician i.e. faggot.

I fail to see your point here but I'm sure digging this up gave you a fulfilled feeling. Happy to help

Certain
02-22-2014, 03:27 PM
When you're ready, Hush: http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54744

Hush
02-22-2014, 03:32 PM
^^^ tell me hush won an OM award for that so I can lol

Your the special kind of loser who replies to my threads consistently yet I have no clue who you are

Certain
02-22-2014, 03:33 PM
That's NYCSPITZ.

Hush
02-22-2014, 03:36 PM
Oh, lol. Names familiar still don't know dude enough to care.

NYCSPITZ
02-22-2014, 03:36 PM
you're the angry dude who...wait you're angry so that means you're not happy with your life probably lol

Hush
02-22-2014, 03:37 PM
you're the angry dude who...wait you're angry so that means you're not happy with your life probably lol

You are a lame.

NYCSPITZ
02-22-2014, 03:38 PM
it's basic psychology hush

Hush
02-22-2014, 03:39 PM
I'll keep replying so you don't feel like your wasting your time

NYCSPITZ
02-22-2014, 03:40 PM
thanks u chubby lil metrosexual gawd u

NYCSPITZ
02-22-2014, 03:41 PM
yo remember that time i called u out to a NYC beatdown and u got shook.................

LOL

Geno
02-22-2014, 03:47 PM
Great thread Hush. Props for the merger

Just Write
02-22-2014, 03:47 PM
That was actually a pretty nice piece hush. Props

Hush
02-22-2014, 03:50 PM
yo remember that time i called u out to a NYC beatdown and u got shook.................

LOL

No one remembers this. Not even you.
Thanks Just Write


It was a topical league verse I got no showed on, not a topic I would choose.

Word@genocide

Rawn MD
02-22-2014, 09:26 PM
hush's eyes have been opened...

Mike Wrecka
02-22-2014, 10:02 PM
the unicorn is strong with this one