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Certain
02-22-2014, 03:10 PM
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Season 3


The Basics | Read the full rules here (http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54688).

Verses are due Thursday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Deadline extensions of 24 hours are available on request and cannot be denied.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines (or 650 words if formatted in a paragraph style) unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread (http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54832).


Topic


"Brave New World"


Good luck, oats and Rawn MD.

oats
02-22-2014, 07:03 PM
Yo

Rawn MD
02-22-2014, 09:22 PM
what up big man; goin swing them doors of perception wide open here.

oats
02-27-2014, 12:57 PM
Probably gonna need that extension.

oats
03-01-2014, 12:13 AM
ugh just can't seem to get this done, but for the sake of dropping something on time:



you were.
bigger than physics, chemistry, even simple anatomy
the way you met me, released me from umbilical gravity
your hands embedded me, a bed for me, metaphysical air to breathe
no oxytocin/labored closeness - you were just there for me
you punished me, lectured me, managed the stress
gave me everything you had and then, handled the rest
tangible steps that I stumbled on and stained with my blood
angered you none - concerned only to never leave family bereft
ahead of your time. whenever I was an unfathomable mess
my punishment for trouble was backgammon or chess
that was lesson - think ahead, consider the consequences
prolong attention, pursue the most honest exit