Twenty One vs. Utmost {Utmost wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

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Twenty One Utmost

[Twenty One]

In... 10

[Utmost]

in

[Twenty One]

Need extension

[Utmost]

of course

[Twenty One]

Okay so...

Faggot anynody can body bag untold jus watch n see
Hed catch so many upper notes, youd think hed casted in glee
See Twentys sick..n twisted G...i rip off faces that
Looks n sound like drum sets...on bangin untolds face w/ bats
N Ill other guy this clown n shoot him like derek jeter
Cuz ill hit him so hard w/ fire yud think id sucker punched him w/ a heater
An yu sell coke? Jokes...its not pounds this creep weild
Cuz hes zoned out, frm haymakers THAT sent his body parts over weat feilds
So why you mad dawg yu jus a name under the sticks son
Thats underground in rubbles...ware u dug for most of ya style from


Bye...

10..

[Utmost]

Dumb broad lets go!


Peepd ya verses,
U had decent potential to NOT suck, now its deaded n scrapped
guess I have my head in the clouds...YOU just have ur head in MY lap
& when im done face fuckin YOU..NC can train her, Im not touchin inside
Cuz she'd letta Nika Split, Dominate & Detroyer since shes Def fuckin 5
So call me mr gritty.. knee jerk caliber .50 scope, murkin this shitty hoe
& when I see YOU, I'll waist Twenty in a clip...while YOUR just shootin FAIL twurk videos
Plus I saw ya pic, you ole' skip skop scalleywag scuzzy wump - pardon the cliche ma
But aint none of those concepts Working Girl...sooooooo Dont quit YOUR day job
Its over whore, cut the BS. 'specially when Most is droppin spoken swords
& when i catch assault n' tear you a new asshole...im sure Elizabeth will throw me more
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lol

[Flow]

Okay so...

Faggot anynody can body bag untold jus watch n see
Hed catch so many upper notes, youd think hed casted in glee
hmm ok
See Twentys sick..n twisted G...i rip off faces that
Looks n sound like drum sets...on bangin untolds face w/ bats
no
N Ill other guy this clown n shoot him like derek jeter
Cuz ill hit him so hard w/ fire yud think id sucker punched him w/ a heater
mmm not for me
An yu sell coke? Jokes...its not pounds this creep weild
Cuz hes zoned out, frm haymakers THAT sent his body parts over weat feilds
this is forced, poor wording, big no for me
So why you mad dawg yu jus a name under the sticks son
Thats underground in rubbles...ware u dug for most of ya style from
poor wording let this down but it was aight

Bye...

10..


Dumb broad lets go!


Peepd ya verses,
U had decent potential to NOT suck, now its deaded n scrapped
guess I have my head in the clouds...YOU just have ur head in MY lap
no
& when im done face fuckin YOU..NC can train her, Im not touchin inside
Cuz she'd letta Nika Split, Dominate & Detroyer since shes Def fuckin 5
i can see what you did here, think you could of done this better, but i liked it
So call me mr gritty.. knee jerk caliber .50 scope, murkin this shitty hoe
& when I see YOU, I'll waist Twenty in a clip...while YOUR just shootin FAIL twurk videos
hmm thought this was going somewhere alot better
Plus I saw ya pic, you ole' skip skop scalleywag scuzzy wump - pardon the cliche ma
But aint none of those concepts Working Girl...sooooooo Dont quit YOUR day job
I see the concept but thought this was cringe worthy
Its over whore, cut the BS. 'specially when Most is droppin spoken swords
& when i catch assault n' tear you a new asshole...im sure Elizabeth will throw me more
Urgh not for me
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lol

Vote Utmost for better misses n probs got utmost with the lotb - def fukin 5 line

[Sharp]

Glee was your best attempt, everything else was a miss

V

Nothing stood out to me, a bunch of light hits that were alright


Closer than I expected, but utmost's ideas were a lil better and his wording was much stronger, was enough to get it

V/ Utmost

[Dominate]

Glee was ok attempt... Wording is the big thing letting you down. Gotta make it crisp, and with a clear punch and wp if you use it. Punched with a heater was your best worded bar. Keep dropping


Vs


Head in the clouds was cool, good wording/set up, def fuckin 5 was lol, cool... Twenty in a clip and working girl were both decent, and I didn't catch the closer. Your wording and flips are really good and often turn a concept that's just OK into something pretty decent, well done.


Vote utmost

[Cashius]

Haymaker

Vs.

Twenty in a clip, working girl

21 was pretty bad. Utmost was average throughout and he takes it.

Utmost.

[Untold]

An yu sell coke? Jokes...its not pounds this creep weild
Cuz hes zoned out, frm haymakers THAT sent his body parts over weat feilds

Vs

& when im done face fuckin YOU..NC can train her, Im not touchin inside
Cuz she'd letta Nika Split, Dominate & Detroyer since shes Def fuckin 5
Plus I saw ya pic, you ole' skip skop scalleywag scuzzy wump - pardon the cliche ma
But aint none of those concepts Working Girl...sooooooo Dont quit YOUR day job

Gotta say another one sided battle this week. Twenty one you had some pretty unoriginal and unfunny concepts. Thought you'd bring more to the table but maybe get some new ideas and different ways on wording them. Utmost was alright. Much potential man. Keep at it. Some of the wording was off and the concepts were decent, but it was enough for the win.

V/ Utmost

[~RustyGunZ~]

An yu sell coke? Jokes...its not pounds this creep weild
Cuz hes zoned out, frm haymakers THAT sent his body parts over weat feilds

only eh line, the rest was bland/weak. You misspelled wheat though.

vs


& when im done face fuckin YOU..NC can train her, Im not touchin inside
Cuz she'd letta Nika Split, Dominate & Detroyer since shes Def fuckin 5
Plus I saw ya pic, you ole' skip skop scalleywag scuzzy wump - pardon the cliche ma
But aint none of those concepts Working Girl...sooooooo Dont quit YOUR day job

head in lap nah, could've been cool. twenty in a clip was a good concept the wording was bad though. closer not at all.

v/utmost

[megatron]

wheat fields

vs

day job

none of the other lines in 21 verse had much to it that was just the best one in the verse still could've been better utmost had better attempts with day job and def fuckin 5
v/utmost

[Def_fuckin_5]

Twenty:

Haymaker



Utmost:

Train her
twurk video



vote=Utmost