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Just Write
04-11-2013, 04:42 PM
JW


Desolate lands, turmoil, spastic catastophes
"Land Of The Free.. Love, Sex, Pain, and of Agony".
Nothing to gain confusing compassion w/apathy,
state tightens their reigns applying shackles to hands n feet.
Can it be real? Poison enters our digestive systems
A generation of chem trail and pesticide victims.
Exploits of micro-electroids stay coursing our blood,
how are we to stop a process that has already begun?
High strung Politicians with their volatile missions,
control the populace; a fraction in coffins or prisons.
Are we really sick, or is it government inflicted conditions?
Conspiracies to truths its all still pestilence driven.


Aesthetic,

Im sick of being lied too, 9/11 I despise you.
Gotta Ruby Ridge mindset too ride too.
Swine flu? How the fuck does the strain mutate?
im sick of being told too Contemplate Fuck that, I oughta meditate.
Either accept or disrupt this fucked F.e.m.a. mindstate.
Shit journalists cant investigate; they dissipate.
Implicate a higher stature; one with love minus the actor
Why the fuck would I support a nuclear reactor.
When nuclear testing got half Nevada wit cancer.
Where's the love, we getting fucked with compassion.
Osama bin ladin largest emotion manipulation.
Im tellin you; ignore stipulations.


JW

wish these active elitists would say something n actually mean it
instead of promising action then passing us grievance
recite the mantra of heathens, that "do unto others"
the only land where a man will turn his back on a brother
we used to have compassion of mothers, now its void of its fathers
no trust in our sons, I see corruption in daughters
this is an ode to the land of the free.. home of the brave
the only nation where we sell our own souls for some praise
despicable slaves, you make me sick to my stomach
you're only free till you realize the grip of our government...
our nations on black out, running with broken lamps
and the only way to stop it is to get off our asses and make a stand.


nO GoOd!+

I'm sick of the actions of government agencies,
cloaked in secret factions. Lies from a to z
its crazy, see people are deserving the truth,
I step aloof around the topic, like a bird on a roof..
the youth is diluted, so seek the truth if you choose it
this is real life son and my proof is in music..
Ive seen and experienced the worst of ways
people can suffer, as I've thrown the dirt in graves.
Listen, its a mission I'm on to see it through
and it affects everyone I talkin with, be it you.
I'm a soldier see, known to be cold as ice,
fuck the government, reach for your dreams...

and hold it tight..

Just Write
04-11-2013, 09:38 PM
http://artofbattling.com/showthread.php?5529-Still-Legit
http://artofbattling.com/showthread.php?5829-crazy-topical-i-never-got-feed-on
http://artofbattling.com/showthread.php?5830-Too-Manic
http://artofbattling.com/showthread.php?5768-ZenLand-Part-II
http://artofbattling.com/showthread.php?2480-Broken-minded
http://artofbattling.com/showthread.php?5786-Genocide-The-Thrill-is-Gone

Zen
04-12-2013, 11:20 AM
Nice drop. I definatly shoulda collabed on this shit because I write pieces like this ALL the time lol. But JW's opening stanza was the best part imo. It was a fast start and built momentum for the piece gracefully and I feel like Aesthetic didn't live up to that. No diss to Aesthetic every group needs a Tony Yayo lol. Jk your verse wasn't bad it just didn't live up to what JW just dropped. The third stanza by JW was once again quite powerful in just a few lines and NG picked up and carried it to the end quite well. A nice little collab here fellas. I do think JW and NG would collab very well together in the future since your styles are quite similar. As for Aesthetic I just didn't think you brought it here in this piece man it seemed rushed. Nice drop though fellas.

EDIT:
Do you like guns violence and schizophrenia!? Then peep my new OM drop!!
http://artofbattling.com/showthread.php?5768-ZenLand-Part-II ;)

Split
04-12-2013, 11:37 PM
cleaned. don't super freepost yo. tho it was very entertaining ,