Contender Match: Plot (6-3) vs Tic Tac (6-6)-TAC WINS

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NBL Season 7
Week 14

Due FRIDAY, March 7th

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
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You MUST vote on 4 battles & post your links in the Voting Thread
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle
Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

Plot Tic Tac

[Tic]

Check. How many lines you wanna go?

[Plot]

Hey man, 10s fine

[Tic]

Plot AKA Dystopian *Nik called him out after he PM'd Nik complaining about a vote, below is a PM he sent me
Its fine.

But I honestly cant believe you voted like that,
Wording? How is it not worded properly?
And my last bar? unfucKWITable, kwiting at the centre of his namesake?
Did I need to spell these out for you?

...I mean what the fuck is a flat bush?
How is that Plot thinkens line good?

Its all fine tho

Beating me is Far-Fetched, but Dog is so stupid he’ll have nothing to say
I mean, he’s Dropped the Ball before…but this time, he started running away
You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma
I Drop Names on the regular, you bitch about votes in PMS now I’m tryin’a stop ya
When you Drop Names the result’s more embarrassing than Travolta live at the Oscars
Your rhymes are never Sick, you should really Doctor ya style
Son go’n need First Aid so bad you’d think Strikta Fathered your child
You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league
Working the cards. Got a few cool tricks, mostly using the bottom card.

[Tic]

Take the ext. Don't no show me please Plot

[Plot]

Plot styles menacing, lines are all life sentences, your vilest enemy,
Sorry man, but IRL I've been to busy and didn't get to write anything.
If I just keystyle the voters will just be bored, so fuck the free thoughts,
So Tic-Tac should def. win coz at least he did that on his keyboard.
Damn dude, hate you heaps and just wish I had a rhyme I could drop,
But I don't so, just give this one to tick-talk like the chimes of a clock.
His verse was dope, like he really timed with his shot and its hurting me,
Took the shit serious, browsed through history and dug up some dirt on me.
Snapping all vertebrae, bound to lose but Ive been busy, its not coz Im lazy
So there is no way I'm winning this in hectic, that shit would be crazy.

[Answer]

You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma

You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league


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nothing


Tic needs to work on his wording more than anything imo. There were a couple of lines that could've been effective if they had ended with more of a sting. Plot's verse was essentially 10 lines of saying "Vote for Tic Tac" half of which was filler - and sure, there were some parts that were slightly funny but nothing that's worth quoting. I won't even bother pointing out anything plot should work on because it wasn't a legitimate attempt, I'm sure he can do much better than that

MVGT - Tic Tac

[Greed]

Plot I sat there and read your whole verse like you were going somewhere with it smh.

V tic

[Bender]

Plot just keyed something but instead of punches he said to vote for Tic.

Tic you are getting better but def need to word your punches to be more effective

easy.choice here.

vote-tic tac

[Sicc]

Yea, this was a complete waste of my time to be honest. Its clear and obvious who the winner was.

V/Tac

[Tic]

Plot I sat there and read your whole verse like you were going somewhere with it smh.

V tic

Plot just keyed something but instead of punches he said to vote for Tic.

Tic you are getting better but def need to word your punches to be more effective

easy.choice here.

vote-tic tac

Yea, this was a complete waste of my time to be honest. Its clear and obvious who the winner was.

V/Tac
Could you guys perhaps leave some feed?

[Sicc]

Could you guys perhaps leave some feed?

Yes, bruh. Message me your verse. On the crackberry ATM and can't really copy and paste on this wack phone and my iPhone's charging.

[ill nik-A]

Plot, a verse usually tends to be a set up line followed by a punch, I didn't see many punches, ur verse was just telling but not enough dissing ur opponent, the point is being creative while belittling ur opponent and u failed to do that, tic tac was more aggressive and has a better grasp of constructing punch lines, that bottom card was dope man

Vote tic tac

[Plot]

Um that was a 'Im not showing' verse, I don't know why this is even being voted,
...Tic kinda begged me to drop coz he had a nice drop, I felt bad that I didn't have
time to write this week so I started writing a like: Sorry dude to busy and I was pretty
drunk and thought I would put my ideas I did have that didn't totally click into a rhyme.
this should not be being voted on at all, I thought the message was pretty clear that
I didn't bring anything this week and Tic wins.

[ill nik-A]

Sorry I read tic tac asking for feed and thought it was u, now u get my breakdown

Sorry whoadie

[Plot]

So maybe I shouldn't have made my apology a verse. Sorry people for being a tad creative.

[ill nik-A]

I would've keyed something call me crazy

[Bender]

Beating me is Far-Fetched, but Dog is so stupid he’ll have nothing to say
I mean, he’s Dropped the Ball before…but this time, he started running away
This is ok you are calling him a dog pretty much not doing alot forme here but it is good wordplay just a bad concept
You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma
I dont really know what you are referencing here but seems ok if i knew what the punch was about
I Drop Names on the regular, you bitch about votes in PMS now I’m tryin’a stop ya
When you Drop Names the result’s more embarrassing than Travolta live at the Oscars
I didnt watch the oscars im not a fag sono idea what u are refering to
Your rhymes are never Sick, you should really Doctor ya style
Son go’n need First Aid so bad you’d think Strikta Fathered your child
Makes no sense
You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league
Legit punch but a weak played out concept

sorry I was on my phone earlier hope this helps

[Drift]

Tic, lotta potential. I can see where you wanted to go with some lines, some were decent. Still not a bad verse. Plot, the keyboard line was funny. Could tell not a lot of effort was here though. Mvgt Tictac

[KwaL!ty]

You’re in a bad spot w/ forced punches that never seem to land, brah
Cuz last time I saw Display with words that made sense was TV with grandma
You do Magic now? No wonder you made Contender Matchup this week
Funny how you use the Bottom Card for your tricks when you’re just That in this league



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nothing


Plot came with mainly statements instead of punches where Tic came fairly witty & made this a pretty one sided battle

MVGT- Tic