Flo Real vs. non azn Bob {non azn Bob wins}

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Flo Real non azn Bob

[Orc]

10

[Flow]

10

safe mayne

[Flow]

WHA YOU WANT? FIRETRUCK!

Your last battle reminded me of 50 shades of grey - I lol'd at how Dom practically raped ya,
Seriously the way the Dominant whipped ya ass I thought you had changed ya name to Anastasia.
This skinny chinky faggot hangs downtown beggin for food, looking like a yellow Alladin,
Fucking frail faggot called Bob....Geldoff used a picture of you to advertise losing to famine.
My flo real, while yours is one big lie, its totally make believe and mythical like the krakan,
Cus im a distinguished crouching tiger spitting fire - while your more an extinguished hidden dragon.
Seriously, this is well too easy! Dont know why you got everyone kissin your ass like your the best!
Cus to me its reaaaal ironic you thinkin you write right, when your reading your text from the left.
Im here to end you, finish you, leave you looking a bigger pussy then def 5 did to daddy payne,
Im done! This is the end! So let me say goodbye to this fucking chicken, chow mayne!

[Orc]

.
.
Please.,
I lie alotttt. Saying I got gwap & ain't really have it...
cuz if I ever dropped a Realll verse- i'd be wack as fuck & labeled a faggot/
Ur a whiny fag CONSTANTLY. Woeful as shit...
You know ur lame as fuck when ya got Mood Swings that don't even hit/
Bitch pleaaaaase stop writing, & Die if you must...
I'll grab a shotty then u'll 'Catch a Body' that'd promote Exercises in Trust/
Im sicka newb batts. This specimens one here
Beating you is a 'Worn out Habit'...like the Dresses those Monks wear/
Ura gay Brit posing as American. I'll put a knife up to u
ya neck'll take a Weird Jerk, it'll resemble why nobody liked u in School/

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.

[Plot]

Liked flo's close, cool wp ..nothing else.
Bobs mood swings was ill, but exercises in trust was dope!!!
Gotta v Bob

[...]

Flo had

Nothing.....he's more of a swag n flow type dude...not a battle guy


Azn had

Opener, mood swing, trust

V/bob...more direct and impacting verse

[megatron]

Well bob had trust and mood swing even tho I've seen similar concepts but not done the way bob did it..
I actually liked flow last too lines the left to right Nd chow mayne the crouching tiger was kool to.me.too.. well IMO I'm.goin wit flow I only really.liked the two bars from bob but like.Isaid.I've seen/heard similar concepts before.I do like how bob used way less words to get his concepts thru ..but I think.flow was a lil more consistent n this one..

[Sharp]

Your last battle reminded me of 50 shades of grey - I lol'd at how Dom practically raped ya,
Seriously the way the Dominant whipped ya ass I thought you had changed ya name to Anastasia.
But it's DominATE... im assuming this references the book, wasn't bad but only really gets you brownie points from me
This skinny chinky faggot hangs downtown beggin for food, looking like a yellow Alladin,
Fucking frail faggot called Bob....Geldoff used a picture of you to advertise losing to famine.
Could've made the connection between Bob and Geldoff a little cleaner (maybe 'called Bob, Geldoff). This is a reference that most guys are gonna have to google to get, but it was decently done.
My flo real, while yours is one big lie, its totally make believe and mythical like the krakan,
Cus im a distinguished crouching tiger spitting fire - while your more an extinguished hidden dragon.
more of a flowy thing. not bad, just not a big punch
Seriously, this is well too easy! Dont know why you got everyone kissin your ass like your the best!
Cus to me its reaaaal ironic you thinkin you write right, when your reading your text from the left.
another more flowy thing. if you can do that while working in punches good on you, but there wasn't much of a punch.
Im here to end you, finish you, leave you looking a bigger pussy then def 5 did to daddy payne,
Im done! This is the end! So let me say goodbye to this fucking chicken, chow mayne!
clever concept, prolly could've been set up better[/QUOTE]



I lie alotttt. Saying I got gwap & ain't really have it...
cuz if I ever dropped a Realll verse- i'd be wack as fuck & labeled a faggot/
lmao this is like an h.t kinda line that hits really well but makes me wonder how its not played. like it
Ur a whiny fag CONSTANTLY. Woeful as shit...
You know ur lame as fuck when ya got Mood Swings that don't even hit/
nice
Bitch pleaaaaase stop writing, & Die if you must...
I'll grab a shotty then u'll 'Catch a Body' that'd promote Exercises in Trust/
alright
Im sicka newb batts. This specimens one here
Beating you is a 'Worn out Habit'...like the Dresses those Monks wear/
okay
Ura gay Brit posing as American. I'll put a knife up to u
ya neck'll take a Weird Jerk, it'll resemble why nobody liked u in School/
alright



Geldoff and Chow mayne

v

opener, mood swings

Even in quotes, but Bob's hit much harder. He was also more consistent. Flo made it closer than i was expecting, but between bob's hits and flo getting a little more flex-y i'd say bob got it

V/ bob

[StarFaggot]

Flo Real - ok showing. I like the swag in the verse. The write right was pretty good the rest was a little below avg.

Non azn bob - the trust exercise I've seen done n better but i liked the inner multis. Ur opener was cool and weird jerk was decent.

This was a very close battle. I've got Flo winning this as I enjoyed his style a bit more.