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~RustyGunZ~
04-22-2013, 08:55 PM
NBL
Netcees Text Battle League




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Verses are due Friday,
April 26th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
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Twenty One

Vinny
04-23-2013, 09:13 AM
cheq' 10 it is.

Twenty One
04-25-2013, 04:45 AM
Yea... 10..

Vinny
04-25-2013, 09:53 AM
ext.

Twenty One
04-26-2013, 04:56 AM
Okay

Vinny
04-26-2013, 09:46 AM
9:24am

she the toughest in her clique but trust me these aint honey days!
way Most got the best of you, youd think I was using personals on ur slutty ways
we gunna call her T-1 heard the bitch really great w/ the Hummer
if she got Hot & Wet, no one wants to play like we the fat kids & she summer
Twenty is a big bitch & to keep it real if you offered, id let you keep the throat
dumb broke hoe! i ran up & asked her were the cash is! she showed me his most recent post
dont ever jump in front my car cause id mash the gas & hold throttle
Twenty so ugly people pay her to get dressed like a clothes model
she got the shape of a Pear its completely a disgrace to compare
way i rip some of this fruit out and replace the face of a bear.........

9;26 am lol im hungover @ work

Twenty One
04-27-2013, 12:48 AM
Okay so....


Ive jousted w/ the nicest , im known to merk dudes
Your biggest comeback, name change- believe me we ALL thought that u needed to
An i herd you was decent, now i dont belive that shit
He went for a dramatic change & came out more pussy then a moody bitch
Twentys aint sick ? Twentys not hot? Funny right
Sorta like you, changing your identity everytime u log on wack sites
Shit vinny... You dont want it ur drops wack, & wont move nada
Honesty i havent seen a strapped bitch since YOU crossed over sportin prada
So go drop that bland written and then go & cry bitch
Cuz even if u drop fire wed all hope youd roll over n die along wit it

Bye...

10

Sharp
04-28-2013, 03:21 PM
she the toughest in her clique but trust me these aint honey days!
way Most got the best of you, youd think I was using personals on ur slutty ways


v


Shit vinny... You dont want it ur drops wack, & wont move nada
Honesty i havent seen a strapped bitch since YOU crossed over sportin prada


close battle. Vinny's opener was lotb, so i'd edge it to him but 21 had better wording and made it a pretty even battle. twenty, you've got wording down pretty nicely, its just a matter of how to form and approach concepts. once you have that you'll be set to make moves in the league

V/ vinny

Orc
04-29-2013, 12:53 PM
THOUGHT VINNY CAME CORRECT TO BE HONEST...SURE THE WORDING AINT WHATS USUALLY ORTHODOX BUT THE WIT IS THERE AND THATS WHAT COUNTS.. THAT PAY HER TO DRESS LINE WAS FUNNY AND SO WAS THE MOST RECENT POST....AS FOR 21 THE VERSE WAS STRUCTURED IN A NICE WAY BUT THE LINES HADN'T GOT ENUFF OOOOMPH, NOTHING HAYMAKER QUALITY.. JUST NEED TO SPEND MORE TIME ON THE CREATION PROCESS.. I GOT VINNY..VOTE VINNY!

StarFaggot
04-29-2013, 01:56 PM
Vinny - the paid to get dressed line was nice. Other bars were okayish no big misses.

Twenty - no quoteables but this was a cool showing. Maybe develop your punch lines more.

Mvgt Vinny for having a better battle verse.

...
04-30-2013, 09:43 PM
Vinny had

Recent, clothes


Vs


Twenty had


Closer


V/bobby for the better concepts and worded verse