God Of War
01-24-2013, 02:52 PM
Your Topic: A Christmas Horror Story, Storytelling (Dont diss your opponent, tell the best story)
IXthClowd
we cant wait until 12 oclock AM to open up our gifts
but christmas might just suck this year because im throwin up and sh*t
late night sweats, bed soakin wet, its crazy
and this aint just once in a blue moon it happens daily
i seem to be dillusional, i feel like i'm in hell see
i step out for some fresh air? Why am i on Elm street?
now i'm all freaked out, with no type of answers
till i see this thing dancin on da street dressed as Santa
so i turn around and try to open up this dumb door
before i know i see my lungs in front of me right on the floor
but im still alive bleedin to death wit my back sliced
never again will i smoked laced weed from a crack pipe
RalfieMouth (edited verse, vote on this)
looking at jimmy, i remove the blade with soft sinking rage
as i think to myself "im sure they could'nt have been saved"
Here's a quick flashback to the attack that left everyone dazed.
:"You better behave lil jimmy, or you'll go to bed now!"
"I gotta plan to make christmas better. You wanna guess how?"
Jimmy says, "Dad you look mad, why dont you set down"
with Nat King Cole playing, i smile ..and start the slaying.
Look at jimmy while saying, "Son, i hope you're not praying."
Doged the spraying as i jab my knife deeper into his chest
seems the screaming and blood rings in the holidays in best:
hearin a jolly voice in my head; "You did a good job, you know they were naughty not nice.
Now turn the edge on yourself and take your own sorry life."
VOTE UP
Winner - RalfieMouth
IXthClowd
we cant wait until 12 oclock AM to open up our gifts
but christmas might just suck this year because im throwin up and sh*t
late night sweats, bed soakin wet, its crazy
and this aint just once in a blue moon it happens daily
i seem to be dillusional, i feel like i'm in hell see
i step out for some fresh air? Why am i on Elm street?
now i'm all freaked out, with no type of answers
till i see this thing dancin on da street dressed as Santa
so i turn around and try to open up this dumb door
before i know i see my lungs in front of me right on the floor
but im still alive bleedin to death wit my back sliced
never again will i smoked laced weed from a crack pipe
RalfieMouth (edited verse, vote on this)
looking at jimmy, i remove the blade with soft sinking rage
as i think to myself "im sure they could'nt have been saved"
Here's a quick flashback to the attack that left everyone dazed.
:"You better behave lil jimmy, or you'll go to bed now!"
"I gotta plan to make christmas better. You wanna guess how?"
Jimmy says, "Dad you look mad, why dont you set down"
with Nat King Cole playing, i smile ..and start the slaying.
Look at jimmy while saying, "Son, i hope you're not praying."
Doged the spraying as i jab my knife deeper into his chest
seems the screaming and blood rings in the holidays in best:
hearin a jolly voice in my head; "You did a good job, you know they were naughty not nice.
Now turn the edge on yourself and take your own sorry life."
VOTE UP
Winner - RalfieMouth