Twenty One vs. Defiant {Defiant wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

General stuff, will edit usual shit later. Due Monday

Twenty One Defiant

[Defiant]

10 lines

[Twenty One]

Oka..

[Twenty One]

ok so...

talkin teirs?..dawg i bury the comp more then my career told
weather or not you pull upsets, ud still have the swagg of a 3 year old
im makin noise in this league, u jus as wack as the other guys
cuz only time def approaches, another hearing impaired child dies
got me in hunger mode im a cannible w/ a knife & cleaver to stir
i write to ruffle feathers- yours is just a pick nick & feedin chips to birds
ive buried champs see..& your just another body to drop whore
if you buried champs, its that ugly style YOU bought from that same store
and your monster skills MIA, this clown wishin hes what to fear
i dont need def- when ant describes your position as a threat here

bye..

[Defiant]

i need an ext, im really hungover and cant force myself to write anything
il post early tomorrow

[Twenty One]

Oka

[Defiant]

You ain't dropping hot bars, your shit won't sell you see
Only reason we saying 21 going places, is cause its the name of adeles cd
If u got a record deal, they explore n cut
Shes the type to be apart of all the labels, like tramp, whore and slut
Don't respect u as a textcee, I'm the type to have u on all fours honey
if u claim its vice versa defiant, its only because u sell your body for money
Named 21 after blackjack, but ul just bring defeat
hear her screaming winner winner chicken dinner, but only when she's found something to eat
If any guy treats u like a lady, then that prick corrupt
il treat u to a last resort, not a holiday just a phonecall if no other girl is picking up

[Jay]

got me in hunger mode im a cannible w/ a knife & cleaver to stir
i write to ruffle feathers- yours is just a pick nick & feedin chips to birds

vs

You ain't dropping hot bars, your shit won't sell you see
Only reason we saying 21 going places, is cause its the name of adeles cd
If u got a record deal, they explore n cut
Shes the type to be apart of all the labels, like tramp, whore and slut



Defiant got this one kind of easy. Closer woulda been dope but got choppy on the punch. 21 almost had a stinger with the def approaches but it was worded poorly which killed the impact imo.

v. Def

[R!canTheoryz]

got me in hunger mode im a cannible w/ a knife & cleaver to stir
i write to ruffle feathers- yours is just a pick nick & feedin chips to birds
im makin noise in this league, u jus as wack as the other guys
cuz only time def approaches, another hearing impaired child dies

vs

You ain't dropping hot bars, your shit won't sell you see
Only reason we saying 21 going places, is cause its the name of adeles cd
If u got a record deal, they explore n cut
Shes the type to be apart of all the labels, like tramp, whore and slu
Overall Vote - Def, He had a more polished verse here. More Well connected punchlines I Just quoted That last bar on twentyone made me giggle.

[Cashius]

21- wasn't really feeling your verse. Nothing creative to me. Only thing that could've been ok was the def/deaf thing but the flip was bad and it's playeddddd.

Def- Adele was cool. All the other concepts were decent, cept body for money.


Def easy.

[Sharp]

Pullups was a cool idea that got messed up with wording


First two bars were nice, everything else was okay. No real misses.


Defiant just had the better verse. Twentys coming up with nice ideas, now it's just wording that comes from practice

V/def