Sharp Nine vs. Untold {Sharp Nine wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

General stuff, will edit usual shit later. Due Monday

Sharp Nine Untold

[Sharp]

cool cool cool

Let's go 10

[Untold]

Yup

[Untold]

Gonna need an extension, b

[Sharp]

10 sent
ext granted btw

[Untold]

sharp's gettin dismantled n canceled. u winnin is sad each week
s'when i show this SNL.. his solo career will look like the entire casts from MadTv
nine's a sick fuck wit who he picks up. ur user title's a recent disclosure
oh word, playground? is where ur usually caught by cops for indecent exposure
im not here to start beef,or spark heat. but i'm deranged n insane
so compare'd to Twenty-Nine, ur more bitch than she is without changin ya name
as far as ya secret, keep it! i spit the truth in a brash tone
i'm get'n the weight of the world off my shoulders.. n ur moms walk'n her ass home
this shits a piece of cake. u need a break n deserve an entire bed
last time Sharp got a Knight off.. they were exchangin blows outside the cypher thread

[Sharp]

Yeeeeoooooooo

did some piss play wit ya hairy bitch, then had a fright fit
cuz w/ the stache n big Pee on her chest shes a dead ringer for Mike Schmidt
girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis
ya boy destroyed ya in the cyph. just facts. not tryna be a hater
dawg i exemplified Spur of the moment... n treated you like they did the Lakers
dude couldnt win on a handicap. this loss'll leave bro wit doubt
idc if we get Un biased voters... even w/ 10 a' those id still blow him out

[Flow]

sharp's gettin dismantled n canceled. u winnin is sad each week
s'when i show this SNL.. his solo career will look like the entire casts from MadTv
This was pretty average, I could see this being missed on some...
nine's a sick fuck wit who he picks up. ur user title's a recent disclosure
oh word, playground? is where ur usually caught by cops for indecent exposure
LOL that was funny stuff
im not here to start beef,or spark heat. but i'm deranged n insane
so compare'd to Twenty-Nine, ur more bitch than she is without changin ya name
Meh this is ok, feels played
as far as ya secret, keep it! i spit the truth in a brash tone
i'm get'n the weight of the world off my shoulders.. n ur moms walk'n her ass home
yeh nice
this shits a piece of cake. u need a break n deserve an entire bed
last time Sharp got a Knight off.. they were exchangin blows outside the cypher thread This was one of the better gay punches I have seen. Nice close.

Yeeeeoooooooo

did some piss play wit ya hairy bitch, then had a fright fit
cuz w/ the stache n big Pee on her chest shes a dead ringer for Mike Schmidt
OK
girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
Lol nice name flip
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis
Nice
ya boy destroyed ya in the cyph. just facts. not tryna be a hater
dawg i exemplified Spur of the moment... n treated you like they did the Lakers
Lol
dude couldnt win on a handicap. this loss'll leave bro wit doubt
idc if we get Un biased voters... even w/ 10 a' those id still blow him out
Nice close

Untold brought a pretty decent verse here, If Sharp had gone any easier may have been an interesting battle, unfortuantly for Untold Sharp came pretty consistent picking up heat and lols as his verse went on.

Vote sharp

[Jay]

sharp's gettin dismantled n canceled. u winnin is sad each week
s'when i show this SNL.. his solo career will look like the entire casts from MadTv
this shits a piece of cake. u need a break n deserve an entire bed
last time Sharp got a Knight off.. they were exchangin blows outside the cypher thread

vs


girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis
dude couldnt win on a handicap. this loss'll leave bro wit doubt
idc if we get Un biased voters... even w/ 10 a' those id still blow him out



good champ match. tough bars from both sides. Untold had a solid verse but as far as heaters go, I got Sharp with the personal daggers that landed very well and overall I was digging his concepts a bit more. good shit from both tho.

v. sharp nine

[R!canTheoryz]

nine's a sick fuck wit who he picks up. ur user title's a recent disclosure
oh word, playground? is where ur usually caught by cops for indecent exposure
as far as ya secret, keep it! i spit the truth in a brash tone
i'm get'n the weight of the world off my shoulders.. n ur moms walk'n her ass home

vs

girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis

Overall Vote - Best battle i read this week, very close match but im slightly going to give it to Untold, i felt like he was slightly more witty on his part very close match here could go either way

[Cashius]

Untold- Eh, not a great verse. SNL was ok but I'm not a fan of letter name plays. Weight off shoulders was ok. Everything else was bad. People need to stop with the Knight shit.

Sharp- Mike Schmidt was ok. Told off was dope. Everything else was ok. Solid verse.

Sharp.

[Orc]

sharp's gettin dismantled n canceled. u winnin is sad each week
s'when i show this SNL.. his solo career will look like the entire casts from MadTv
cool here
nine's a sick fuck wit who he picks up. ur user title's a recent disclosure
oh word, playground? is where ur usually caught by cops for indecent exposure
nah didnt like this one
im not here to start beef,or spark heat. but i'm deranged n insane
so compare'd to Twenty-Nine, ur more bitch than she is without changin ya name
okay a little iffy on the connection
as far as ya secret, keep it! i spit the truth in a brash tone
i'm get'n the weight of the world off my shoulders.. n ur moms walk'n her ass home
cool and funny here
this shits a piece of cake. u need a break n deserve an entire bed
last time Sharp got a Knight off.. they were exchangin blows outside the cypher thread
knight wp done to death on ak but relevancy points given

vs

did some piss play wit ya hairy bitch, then had a fright fit
cuz w/ the stache n big Pee on her chest shes a dead ringer for Mike Schmidt
okay
girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
this is cool also decent wording
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis
untold wps been done to death ppl will prob quote this cuz he new here but nah
ya boy destroyed ya in the cyph. just facts. not tryna be a hater
dawg i exemplified Spur of the moment... n treated you like they did the Lakers
nah too simple
dude couldnt win on a handicap. this loss'll leave bro wit doubt
idc if we get Un biased voters... even w/ 10 a' those id still blow him out
cool swag ok hit



very close battle here. think Untold still shaking a lil rust whereas Sharp is on his way to the top. just think there was a little less creativity behind Untolds lines. both of ya done 3 nameplays maybe a little too many for a short batt like this. anyway i think SN got it by a tiny amount

vote SN

[StarFaggot]

Untold - opener is playyyyyyyed, weight of the world was rofls, indecent exposure is ok, knight bar was coo.

Sharp - decent verse just that a lot of stuff was predictable making it bland and some of it was delivery, mike Schmidt line was dumb what's a big pee lol...


Vote - untold for lotb.

[Split]

sharp's gettin dismantled n canceled. u winnin is sad each week
s'when i show this SNL.. his solo career will look like the entire casts from MadTv
>lols. Woulda worked better if he was in a crew
nine's a sick fuck wit who he picks up. ur user title's a recent disclosure
oh word, playground? is where ur usually caught by cops for indecent exposure
>stupid concept
im not here to start beef,or spark heat. but i'm deranged n insane
so compare'd to Twenty-Nine, ur more bitch than she is without changin ya name
>Okay
as far as ya secret, keep it! i spit the truth in a brash tone
i'm get'n the weight of the world off my shoulders.. n ur moms walk'n her ass home
>lmao
this shits a piece of cake. u need a break n deserve an entire bed
last time Sharp got a Knight off.. they were exchangin blows outside the cypher thread
>dead. smooth wording on this

Yeeeeoooooooo

did some piss play wit ya hairy bitch, then had a fright fit
cuz w/ the stache n big Pee on her chest shes a dead ringer for Mike Schmidt
>what's a fright fit? meh concept, woulda been dumb af without rhyming
girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
>nice!
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis
>wording coulda been better but good concept
ya boy destroyed ya in the cyph. just facts. not tryna be a hater
dawg i exemplified Spur of the moment... n treated you like they did the Lakers
>ok
dude couldnt win on a handicap. this loss'll leave bro wit doubt
idc if we get Un biased voters... even w/ 10 a' those id still blow him out
>hah word

dead even match here. sharp came with predictable nameplays that did their job. Untold had some decent shit.

Probably would say misses were even and to take best hit from each, it'd be Told off vs. knight off... liked Untold"s jab better
V/ untold

[~RustyGunZ~]

im not here to start beef,or spark heat. but i'm deranged n insane
so compare'd to Twenty-Nine, ur more bitch than she is without changin ya name
this shits a piece of cake. u need a break n deserve an entire bed
last time Sharp got a Knight off.. they were exchangin blows outside the cypher thread

SNL is mad played. 29 was okay. playground nah to simple and bars about avys/sigs/usertitles aren't dope. mom joke no lmao.. closer was okay

vs

did some piss play wit ya hairy bitch, then had a fright fit
cuz w/ the stache n big Pee on her chest shes a dead ringer for Mike Schmidt
girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis
dude couldnt win on a handicap. this loss'll leave bro wit doubt
idc if we get Un biased voters... even w/ 10 a' those id still blow him out

mostly nameplays but they were cool. told off was the best one. mike schmidt got a chuckle. seen spurs w/p and wasn't anything fantastic

v/sharp

[Nigma]

sharp's gettin dismantled n canceled. u winnin is sad each week
s'when i show this SNL.. his solo career will look like the entire casts from MadTv
concept on this one is borderline acceptable but the wording really through it off for me, especially in the punchline
nine's a sick fuck wit who he picks up. ur user title's a recent disclosure
oh word, playground? is where ur usually caught by cops for indecent exposure
worded better then the previous bar but insulting someone by saying they are seen naked on playgrounds doesnt really leave much of a sting haha
im not here to start beef,or spark heat. but i'm deranged n insane
so compare'd to Twenty-Nine, ur more bitch than she is without changin ya name
dunno who Twenty-Nine is, but if its the name of a female textcee/artist then this is an alright punch
as far as ya secret, keep it! i spit the truth in a brash tone
i'm get'n the weight of the world off my shoulders.. n ur moms walk'n her ass home
for a punch about someones mother, this was decent, but its still a punch about his mother, for shame.
this shits a piece of cake. u need a break n deserve an entire bed
last time Sharp got a Knight off.. they were exchangin blows outside the cypher thread
not 100% sure of what happened in the cypher thread but this didnt really hit for me

Yeeeeoooooooo

did some piss play wit ya hairy bitch, then had a fright fit
cuz w/ the stache n big Pee on her chest shes a dead ringer for Mike Schmidt
has the makings for a pretty complex punch but the reference eludes me tbh haha, this might be dope to someone smarter then I am
girls fuckin him need a talkin to. that shits a disgrace, my friends
if a chick gets 'Told off... she deserves THAT happening for her taste in men
nice little name play here, i kinda like this line
we're both elevating? pshhhh. Sharp stay hot but this geek's in stasis
i surpass Untold struggles in the league... while that happens on a weekly basis
another solid bar, second fav so far right behind the previous lines
ya boy destroyed ya in the cyph. just facts. not tryna be a hater
dawg i exemplified Spur of the moment... n treated you like they did the Lakers
i personally feel you gotta do a bit more with sports references for it to be a standout bar, but others might like this more then i do
dude couldnt win on a handicap. this loss'll leave bro wit doubt
idc if we get Un biased voters... even w/ 10 a' those id still blow him out
LotB imo, very solid closer


Untold had some decent lines but also so low points in the read. Sharp was pretty consistent with some stand out bars, felt he took this one pretty easily.

+1 Sharp

[Sharp]

+1 Split

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I saw, nigma. I saw.

[Nigma]

I get you motherfuckers confused about 33 times a day

[fathead]

Untold: The Mad Tv Line Is A Good Concept But Coulda Been Worded Better To Hit Harder. The Playground Line Is Hilarious though. The Mom Walkin Her Ass Home Coulda Been A Better Line, But Overall Good Verse And It Had Good Flow.

Sharp nine: You Definatley Take Flow, And The Get Told Off Line Is A Great Concept And Punch All Around. Struggles In The League Was A Good Concept And So Was The Spurs Lakers Line.

v/sharp