Fuck em

[EndSane]

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/17151204#

I'm the first verse...be critic my first real audio so ya know

[Split]

No offense, I don't think you have a voice for rap.. enunciate syllables more, not the worst first verse I heard. Didn't like lyrics much but thanks for not just reading a topical, hate that shit

Your delivery needs most work. Start smoking cigs or something too

[EndSane]

What does amoking have to do with anything? And u are the first person to tell me I don't have the voice for it...

Thanks tho

[Mr. J]

You need more of a presence on the mic...
sounds like you are just reading from the page
the flow needs a little work, putting it to a beat is hard
but once you find how to make it work, its all worth while
otherwise, I'd say this wasn't too bad...reminds me of some dipset type of record

[EndSane]

Thanks mr j.. Problem is I hate my voice but everyone likes it..I have no confidence in myself and he put an effect on it that I don't like...
Just a rough draft...beat hasn't even been bought yet just seeing what feed we get and if people like it...

I appreciate any feed

[Mr. J]

The voice isn't bothering at all...
just needs to feel like you want to be spitting on the mic
you'll figure it out with more time

[EndSane]

I gotcha man...preciate it btw I rtfd