Orc vs. Innovator - {Orc wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

BA Swag & Flow Tournament


Verses are due Tuesday 5/14/13 @ 11:59 PM PST
12 lines
No swaying, biting, flipping, recycling, or tom foolery
Extensions can be 24 hours, no more.

Good luck.

Orc Innovator

[Inno]

yo

[Orc]

Orcster

[Inno]

Orc

I might need a couple hours after deadline

Yes?

[Orc]

wrd

[Orc]

Ask the Vatican is wack a Sin,



The panics in when I grab a pen, it's flame is red hot n' we've nvr been peers
You'd need Anakin to Man again plus the Aim of Deadshot when the Legend appears
In lamens im too Fly, insane w/ the moves guy, faster than Rain in a Blue Sky
I'd play Five Finger Roullete with the Blade of Battousai after a Table of Moonshine
There's no Revival, Im the only Rival. my techs move in haste n' by stealth
Fucka Broken Idol, I wrote da Bible after Coke & Five Pills then Excommunicated myself
Hwoarang w/ the Combos is a Savage beast, grabbin heat the blows kill n' wreck 'em
Shots twanggg w/ the Longbows. Kazama Beast with jagged teeth... no Jin in Tekken
You a Bottom Leech, don't gotta preach, anything I utter is a Handsome line
I'd rock Apollo's reach.. plus If I'm on a Beach it's Covered with the Sands of Time
I'll blaze shit then off a Bang, I'm Raiden & Bomberman maiming with modern hands
the hatred of Hollohan plus the Blades in Kitanas Fans couldn't Graze skin to Scar this man

Face it.. you've not a chance.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Innovator

The dagger swings cadavers fling cuz the blades swift
Optimus lungs with an octupus tongue prime my words to stick.
Shit even chuck Norris said and I qoute "theres no badder dude"
Im the type to squeeze neck till im make a gallon of apple juice
You the type to suck d1....ck till you bleed cum out yah gums you fag000t fru1tt
The flow is supreme a well oiled machine
so if u think u shining, im here to foil your schemes.
Coil and scream from the heat nigga im so hot ill leave you boiled and steamed
Like a lobster cracked open soiled in cream.
Dont test the god I breath jehovas breath,
no ones toppin me theres no contest.
U won tes?...me tru rude boy, em gittin cot wit no viest.
Tree in yah dome now u chasin de roots of death
U could say I left this nigga pining for a breath

[~RustyGunZ~]

the line about D and queers is edited so it'll post lmao

[Flow]

I'd play Five Finger Roullete with the Blade of Battousai after a Table of Moonshine
There's no Revival, Im the only Rival. my techs move in haste n' by stealth
Fucka Broken Idol, I wrote da Bible after Coke & Five Pills then Excommunicated myself

The above was the highlight of this battle, total fire

Feel innovator went into short with his lines personally while orc gave himself enough to fit in a more rounded rhyme scheme and structure, along with some killer multis/flow.
I also really liked some of the imagery in orcs and it really helped show of his swagger.

Not hating on innovators drop, certainly would run some people down in this comp and got me chuckling at the bleeding cum from the gums line. The squeeze the apple line was tasty, no pun intended.

But in the end I think Orc takes this with a more polished drop.

[Nigma]

Innovator, started off pretty strongly, first 3 lines were tight however you steadily you steadily dropped off from there. I didnt mind the Jehovas breath line but the setup/follow up to it was very meh. Verse had potential but consistency was your enemy here imo.

Orc, solid drop. Was really feelin the verse, the lines quoted above really stood out to me, I really dug the bomberman and sands of time lines as well.

+1 Orc, one sided from my view

[Greed]

Innovators simple concepts got drowned out

V/ orc

Excommunicated was nice. Couple others were cool and a couple others were stretched.

[HappySlut]

Orc

[Objective]

Orc: Dope shit, some geeky references as well to MGS, Tekken etc., but with a cool twist when it comes to concepts imo. Dope flow and use of multis as well. Solid drop, no doubt.

Innovator: Felt like you started off decent enough and kinda fell off progressively towards the end. Some cool/allright lines here and there but you get the shorter end of the stick in the end.

Vote: Orc.

[Paradigm]

Orc had a few little concepts sprinkled throughout and Objective had no real metas or anything which you gotta have mannnnnn

Vote: Orc