Stop me........if you heard this one

[Mr. J]

Therapy is scaring me...the thought alone left...
gotta go...stressed, I topple whole decks
moniter my moniker before you offer your help
heated with a thermometer, a nautical belt
a knife to slice your head and leave it properly shelfed
I oughta be locked up, strapped down and kicked
like I need much room, I keep caps round to hit
I'll knock your knee caps down a tick...
have your hourly rate describing your true wages
best bet you won't make sense even with 2 faces
pardon me the garden needs tending
minds need bending as we hit another dead end
it's no crash test....dummy, its all enigma
that's why I got em backed down like a cherry picker
pick and roll you gotta man up for this defense
I fell a bit off the deep end...puffing on leaf ends...
dusting off my suit from the fall off the top
bathing in my own shit, going crazy at the aqua duct

[Zen]

Good short piece here. Favorite line was the moniker line. I did feel it fell off though as you used to many 'ends' rhymes. I don't like reading the same word in a rhyme over and over. Idk maybe that's just me. But all in all good piece man. Keep droppin.

[Breh321]

heated with a thermometer, a nautical belt <- didnt get that line but other than that good shit

very distorted imagery, which im guessin is what you were going for with the whole therapy thing?

[Mr. J]

heated with a thermometer, a nautical belt <- didnt get that line but other than that good shit

very distorted imagery, which im guessin is what you were going for with the whole therapy thing?

thermometers measure heat...as it rises of the belt to wet you...
either way thanks bro...:D

[Breh321]

damn just got that, good shit

[Dope girl]

I love this joint, full of energy & stick with topic.

[GKillaZ]

Therapy is scaring me...the thought alone left...
gotta go...stressed, I topple whole decks
moniter my moniker before you offer your help
heated with a thermometer, a nautical belt
a knife to slice your head and leave it properly shelfed

the start of this is right sick!, short and sweet. paints a good picture good flow nice multi's I was def. liking this verse
7.5/10

[Natural]

I think this was a good rhyming excercise. You definitely have a cool style....but i can't say a whole it didn't seem to have any other aim besides rhyming.

Maby its over my head idk but either way thats my two cents

Maby try a topical next

[Geno]

Good for a flex. Not much I could cling to for a qoute.

Had some lines I enjoyed though. Couple concepts I thought coulda been flipped a little better. Definitely a strong base to build on. Keep dropping, ill be watching for more

[Orc]

nice little flex piece here. u new around these parts? where did u come from? anyway yea the rhyming was nice and seemed effortless. moniker line was slick. some good lines scattere thruout. wish it was longer really. keep writing!

[Mr. J]

Oh I'm sure you'll remember once I drop a topical
thanks for the feed though fellas