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Breh321
05-14-2013, 06:27 PM
https://soundcloud.com/user273548746/bags

Bags

let me know what you think

Allen Knight
05-14-2013, 06:29 PM
Lmao i didnt think u took me serious
But Bags is a faggot anyway

Boredom
05-14-2013, 06:30 PM
.......

Ghost1
05-14-2013, 06:52 PM
Lol wtgay?

Ak looool. U giant faggit bahaha.

trap.
05-14-2013, 06:53 PM
This wasn't bad, but it just sounded like one huge run-on sentence.

Witty
05-14-2013, 07:02 PM
Who are you?

Dove Dozer
05-14-2013, 07:06 PM
Wow.. Dude i dont wanna hate. But you reeeally gotta add some emotion and not just read your shit. Say that shit with some conviction. Like you mean it.

Dove Dozer
05-14-2013, 07:08 PM
An example of how a person can say some ill shit and it sound wack. Delivery is paramount

Mad potential, just work on memorizing, rehearsing, and spit with energy

Sharp
05-14-2013, 07:10 PM
Wow.. Dude i dont wanna hate. But you reeeally gotta add some emotion and not just read your shit. Say that shit with some conviction. Like you mean it.

actually had a similar impression from the verse

not bad at all, just could use something more forceful behind it

Allen Knight
05-14-2013, 07:45 PM
Lol wtgay?

Ak looool. U giant faggit bahaha.

loll dont make me tell this nigga to make a part2 on u fag boy

Breh321
05-14-2013, 09:04 PM
realized why this shit sounded so shit

none of the stuff most people battle rap about is true, and i think when it comes down to it if im not doing it then im not gonna have conviction

im out

~RustyGunZ~
05-14-2013, 10:15 PM
realized why this shit sounded so shit

none of the stuff most people battle rap about is true, and i think when it comes down to it if im not doing it then im not gonna have conviction

im out

90% of rappers don't do what they talk about in their songs hahah