Amalgam vs GKillaZ - AMALGAM WINS 4-1

[GKillaZ]

Rules:
10 Lines
due an hour from check in (drop links and check in)

lets do this, goodluck.
Battle of the new guys!

[Amalgam]

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!

Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!

[GKillaZ]

First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth


quick key, goodluck!

[Defiant]

0-0 UPPIN

[GKillaZ]

it was 1-0, now 0-0?

[Flow]

I tried to break this down but what the knuck....


This wasn't a battle I appreciated.
I preferred one for the read but it had 0 to no sting and the other I dispised specifically for the cap locks but it had the most basic concepts an the punches were weak as....


That being said he still had some punches and it kills me to say it but I have to vote on

Amalgam

[Atomic]

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
punch is weak, connection is simple, concept is cool
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
way too simple, okay attempt
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!
haha, dece
Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR!
lol no
Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!
nah man

//

First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
meh
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
no
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
wtf? no
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
nah man
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth
okay...thats literally just a statement

1st guy came very simple & only had a few okayish bars, other guy literally just hyped himself up/had punches with literally no impact.

v/ amalgam because he had a verse w/ some punches/okay attempts.

[Loast]

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
ok
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
ehh
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!
ehh

Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
ehh
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!
ehh

First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
its ok... could've worded better
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
ehh
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
ehh
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
pretty straight concept.. couldve hit harder tho
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth
ehh


quick key, goodluck!

vote - gkillaz
agam was bland and boring G had a straight nameplay and the dope line was pretty straight

[GKillaZ]

2-2 . someone erased my first vote.

[Split]

2-2 . someone erased my first vote.

it was Bleak trolling the new guys. he quoted half a bar from the other guy and voted for you. discounted.

[trap.]

2-1, Amal. More votes.

[Sharp]

Gam had attempts at wp. killaz was generally statementish except for the dope line, which is pretty played out. Edging to amalgam for I guess having more attempts on the right track. killaz has alright wording but is too statementish to get anything here.

V/amalgam

[Gazette]

I'm a SAVAGE AND BRUTE BEAST that'll RAVAGE THE DUDE'S SPLEEN
We know he's "in for that long haul" like he HAD JANITOR ROUTINES!
You're just RAM-BA-LING LOOSELY while I'm here to FAMISH THE FOO'S FEAST
But you'll still take the "meat between the buns" like a HAM SANDWICH WITH POUTINE!
Are you DEMANDING THE SWITCH SCHEME? Well I'll just BRANDISH YOU QUICKLY
Cause I'll "leave this killa in the net" like a HAMMOCK FOR FISH FEED!

Trying to text with Malgam? I don't know why you TRY TO MESS WITH
GRINDER PRESSES and FINER LECTURES that will leave you "Doc-tor-ate"
like a DINER SKETCH of a RHYME PROFESSOR! Didn't catch the last bar? Well oh well
IT'S FUCKING RAD cause Malgam "puts the iron to your lips" and I don't talk about a NIP TUCKING VAG!


- good multies, i think u got a bit too caught up in em which made your punches suffer a bit, but the creativity was there. wasn't very personal, 1st 2 bars were too fillerish

vs





First punch hurts ya drunk, passed away in a bag or major trauma...
My scripture will flip your act backwards....
...G smack herbs, gotta mag for the lama!
Scores Toronto - 4, Boston - 1, and were not about to hear them boo's
Fans start jumping out of their shoes...then guess what AGam will lose
But this aint hockey, nd your to cocky to recognize your skill set
have no image just a silhouette, cant handle or rap with a real vet
My arts a curse, like martial arts.. so call me Bonner or Franklyn
gams on a permanent vacation!
...not dope!, so were tryna determine the drugs your on or been taking
your not diverse just cuz ya taste the rainbow call gram a starburst
Im above kid quicker then the big dipper lookin' at the stars from earth



man ur ideas were really underdeveloped, some of the concepts had potential but you didnt capitalize at all, impersonal also, you needa orginise ur punches / set-ups better n just think about em more


v/ amalgam