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LOGIC PROPS
04-13-2014, 03:44 AM
ENFENETE KEW ITS MY KREW,ARREST THE WAK,YEA I KNOW GIRLS DONT LIKE DAT,SMASH WALLS WITH GO TO MURALS.WRECK WHEN I'M PARALLEL,ASSOCIATE WHAT THE HELL,PEER WITH A BEER,CREME TO CREME,ASK AROUND YA STYLES GET ATE,ONE WHO.YOU BOO HOO HOO.UNDER CONTROL,EMOTIONS I GOT SOME YALL DO TO.LETEM GO.COMPOSE KO ORTEK KO KREET,.MY RELATIONSHIP WITH SOME ONE IS A NO ONE TILL I FIND A TALENTED FINE LOOKING WOMAN,CLAMEN THAT THE SOLO IS PERFECT.THE INCREASE OF THE MENTAL.CUSTODY OF SANE KNOWN TO BUST THE SUICIDE IN BBOY PRIDE,GROUP THE NUMBER.AND WHAT A I DONT MUTTER.SO MIDDLE FINGER THE SUCKERS.,THE STOCK OF MIKS THAT GOT THE ODDS OF GODS AND WANTON.,CHECK HOW I GRAB THE MICROPHONEY AND TURN UP THE A.C. ALL THE WAY SPIT IDINTITI.YOU MY PRISONER GOT YOU BY THE STOCK MARKET.AND CAPTURE THE MOMENT.UNITED.MASS OR DEFEATED.AND GETTING PAYED TO COMPARE WHITS WITH YA PAL.YA HEALTH DOING OK BUT ALL MY ENEMIES IMAGINE HOW MANY INSTRUMENTALITIES BEAT BY THE KO TOTAL JUGGERNOT CONCOCTIONS AND YOUR OUT.FEW ROUNDS IN THE RING DONT SWET A THING I SHOW OFF.THEN I'M YEA LIKE GETTING IT ON.I'M SMOOTH LIKE A CARE BEAR.FUNCTION LIKE DEVICES.RANK ONE OF THE REPRESENTERS THAT THEM PEEPS TELLING OTHERS I'M THE TIGHTIST.I'M ASKEN WHERES MY SIRE.LIFE.KINGO@GMAIL.COM A HEINIKEN OR AM I YOUR HIGHNESS

LOGIC PROPS
04-13-2014, 03:55 AM
I dont like collision on the mic.make together a feather.make two or more things and its on.,oh you want mute the mik thats punishment.,straight condemnation hay you want terms with physically moment after moment.,kid dont steal candy bars from around these parts of the town.beep beep richie.,blame the clown,deplore the sound.,junction about whats understandable and desire erotic zombies crossing streets in reality but we dont seek em,damn the doom and john blaze the don dada god father blunt as i gets mines,my lyrical words are lists,alieses.in land mines across states,mutual is taking what needs to be imposing so the pronounce is coming,monster of the candy bar whats happening,enjoy ya life and dont tryfe get shoved from ya side then you slip and slide by the slie on a shy to do what.,but battle cry

Mitch
04-13-2014, 06:36 AM
YOU HAVE STRANGE, INTERESTING, COMPLEX, BUT LAZY LYRICAL STYLE.
SOMETIMES IT'S HARD TO UNDERSTAND YOUR SENTENCES.. LIKE WHEN YOU SAID " PHYSICALLY MOMENT" BECAUSE 'MOMENT' IS A NOUN, NOT A VERB, AND 'PHYSICALLY' IS AN ADJECTIVE. AN ADJECTIVE IS USED TO DESCRIBE A VERB, NOT A NOUN, SO "PHYSICALLY MOMENT" DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE. TRY TO WATCH THAT.
TRY PUTTING MORE TIME INTO IT, THE STYLE IS PRETTY SICK AND I LIKE HOW LOOSE IT FEELS, BUT IT NEED'S MORE SENSE.

PancakeBrah
04-13-2014, 09:57 AM
feed four pieces for the two you've dropped.

King Ra.
04-13-2014, 10:43 AM
Mods, close this. Thanks.