BLEAK VS BAGS (PINKSLIP PERMABAN) - BAGS WINS

[Ghost1]

24 lines
Due wed 05/23/13 11:59 pm pst
If u no show u will be banned.
first person to 5votes wins....must win by 2
No ko
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6293
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No recycling, biting etc.....lol@having to write this out.......wheres lamas stencil!? Get on it knuck.

Gkillaz is a raging faggot


Bleak is gay.

[GKillaZ]

.....goodluck to both of you guys.

[bleak]

hearses.

and approved voters list not +500 posts fag boy.

GKillaZ gtfo

I wanted your bf and got to crush you instead. You've seen about 50% effort.

GOOD LUCK SON

[bleak]

Bags 24's ready when you are.

[Ghost1]

I got 6 more lines to write.......

[bleak]

S'all good we can drop tmrw or somethin

[Ghost1]

Aight, my24 is done bleak

[bleak]

Bags

LOL. We done it.

This also means i win the acapella tourney

We diiiid itttt!!

When Nik won... you acted like his whore, you should stop that.
With that type of unearned accomplishment that Dora would scoff at.
V woulda smashed ya. It's something that you should have known.
This wont happen the same way, but you was hoping that I wouldn't show.

Bye Veritas good bye

Bags we did it again and again

Again and again huh? Now you can't keep it on the low, bro.
This is just Exhibit A in 4 alphabets of reasons that you're homo.
B. You don't mind that we think ur queer. The gimmick flops.
Cause when Muff said that ur gay...
You fucking MADE A THREAD to give him props.
C. You're so obsessed with me. Why you gotta reach, bro?
Any Composition he's involved in is his notebook full of 'Bleak Jokes'
Can't fit in ya shoes bruh, but you know that I kill.
I prefer it, cause I'd need a dick inside me just to know how you feel.
The Grand Prix's? Hilarious. You advancing is a joke that is vital.
But Cronus AND GoW proved you're just OK, see? The way you choked in the finals.
This virgin aint got the skills. I fuck ladies and sync lips.
It's sad. You gotta sign onto a board for just a taste of the pink slip.
Large gay men have a special name. The white one's get the snare most, n...
Lama's not just In u, it's the worst example of polar bear poaching.
You're not a force. Honestly, drop nice... I hope you do.
chances dropped cause Nik can't say and Des aint here to vote for you.
Stop asking cake for sets. That shit's a front, ur fakin.
Tried the first step towards healthy. Then your fat ass took a month to take it.
You thought you had this in the bag? That's miles from certain.
I'll beat you, team up with Nik... You'd slit your wrists n hit up Tyler Durden

church.

[Ghost1]

Ur a fat sloppy re re & embarassed ur fam since a pre teen
Ud have ur own mother roll in her grave just to cover it w/ creamcheese
Its ur fault shes dead. N that aint a type of disparagement
But w/ u for a son as life of her heritage she prolly died of embrassment
Ur a faggot fer real....an u ugly as fuck w/ that animal grill
So if u have a wet dream i hope it involves a bathtub & a handful of pills
Drug dealer? I aint buyin them lies neither u white tweaker
Ud see a live heater & bring the fuzz around the metal like pipecleaners
Actin like he flip raw, so i gotta pick apart this kids flaws
Watch me drag em thru the streets so quick theyd reinvent the rickshaw
U overtip a bitch to wait ur table & never bang her a-hole
if u ever see that fox n turner out its cuz ur too broke to pay your cable
Wen i get a rim job im swappin rari stocks at the bodyshop
If u talkin bout a rimjob its prolly followed by swallowing bukake shots
Im sick of the lies too, i kno where u gettin ur lines dude
When u see this bitter snake bite n bars it aint no whiskey & lime juice
U sneak round dead vets archives for lines too often killer
This flatfoot goes to tiptoe thru their gravesite like the moonwalk in thriller
NBL Top punches, has he ever had a quote? Answer-nope.
Cuz every week they cut ur words out the mag like a fuckin ransom note
BA pic title? No matter how much u cry u never gon get it.
So next time u try to take the beltway i hope u die in a head on collision
This pinkslips a headshot now leave ur cellar b4 ur legs rot
Next time u in a basement starin at threads'll be in a pakistani sweatshop

[Greed]

Well. Bleaks poor wording ruined this verse. Your best line sounded hella suspect. 'You know I kill, I prefer it' ran together while reading and came off gay as shit. I mean yeah I know what you were trying to do, but you didn't. Pink slip could have been better.

Bags verse was whatever. Wet dream was alright the rest was okay.

V bags

[Dove Dozer]

Both had long lines and some funny punches in my opinion.

I liked bags sweatshop line.. and bathtub line

V/bags

[Paradigm]

Bags



When Nik won... you acted like his whore, you should stop that.
With that type of unearned accomplishment that Dora would scoff at.
nope
V woulda smashed ya. It's something that you should have known.
This wont happen the same way, but you was hoping that I wouldn't show.
weak
Again and again huh? Now you can't keep it on the low, bro.
This is just Exhibit A in 4 alphabets of reasons that you're homo.
no wth
B. You don't mind that we think ur queer. The gimmick flops.
Cause when Muff said that ur gay...
You fucking MADE A THREAD to give him props.
k
C. You're so obsessed with me. Why you gotta reach, bro?
Any Composition he's involved in is his notebook full of 'Bleak Jokes'
no
Can't fit in ya shoes bruh, but you know that I kill.
I prefer it, cause I'd need a dick inside me just to know how you feel.
...
The Grand Prix's? Hilarious. You advancing is a joke that is vital.
But Cronus AND GoW proved you're just OK, see? The way you choked in the finals.
so played
This virgin aint got the skills. I fuck ladies and sync lips.
It's sad. You gotta sign onto a board for just a taste of the pink slip.
lol played but still funny
Large gay men have a special name. The white one's get the snare most, n...
Lama's not just In u, it's the worst example of polar bear poaching.
nah
You're not a force. Honestly, drop nice... I hope you do.
chances dropped cause Nik can't say and Des aint here to vote for you.
lol word
Stop asking cake for sets. That shit's a front, ur fakin.
Tried the first step towards healthy. Then your fat ass took a month to take it.
had potential
You thought you had this in the bag? That's miles from certain.
I'll beat you, team up with Nik... You'd slit your wrists n hit up Tyler Durden
k

church.

Ur a fat sloppy re re & embarassed ur fam since a pre teen
Ud have ur own mother roll in her grave just to cover it w/ creamcheese
k
Its ur fault shes dead. N that aint a type of disparagement
But w/ u for a son as life of her heritage she prolly died of embrassment
nah weak
Ur a faggot fer real....an u ugly as fuck w/ that animal grill
So if u have a wet dream i hope it involves a bathtub & a handful of pills
nah
Drug dealer? I aint buyin them lies neither u white tweaker
Ud see a live heater & bring the fuzz around the metal like pipecleaners
kinda played but ok
Actin like he flip raw, so i gotta pick apart this kids flaws
Watch me drag em thru the streets so quick theyd reinvent the rickshaw
lol coo
U overtip a bitch to wait ur table & never bang her a-hole
if u ever see that fox n turner out its cuz ur too broke to pay your cable
cool
Wen i get a rim job im swappin rari stocks at the bodyshop
If u talkin bout a rimjob its prolly followed by swallowing bukake shots
lol played
Im sick of the lies too, i kno where u gettin ur lines dude
When u see this bitter snake bite n bars it aint no whiskey & lime juice
LOL kinda fresh flip I like it
U sneak round dead vets archives for lines too often killer
This flatfoot goes to tiptoe thru their gravesite like the moonwalk in thriller
lol sick
NBL Top punches, has he ever had a quote? Answer-nope.
Cuz every week they cut ur words out the mag like a fuckin ransom note
this is dope cuz ive done the punch before... but still dope tho :)
BA pic title? No matter how much u cry u never gon get it.
So next time u try to take the beltway i hope u die in a head on collision
nice
This pinkslips a headshot now leave ur cellar b4 ur legs rot
Next time u in a basement starin at threads'll be in a pakistani sweatshop
good

Nothing really from Bleak and I thought he would come with something nice the way he was talking but he was pretty uncreative. Bags started off reallllllllly slow but at the end he had some good stuff and concepts.

Vote: Bags

[bleak]

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6293
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[~RustyGunZ~]

Again and again huh? Now you can't keep it on the low, bro.
This is just Exhibit A in 4 alphabets of reasons that you're homo.
only a faggot could write this
Can't fit in ya shoes bruh, but you know that I kill.
I prefer it, cause I'd need a dick inside me just to know how you feel.
played, and you would know how he feels if that was the case
The Grand Prix's? Hilarious. You advancing is a joke that is vital.
But Cronus AND GoW proved you're just OK, see? The way you choked in the finals.
alright, wordplay is kind of awkwardly worded
This virgin aint got the skills. I fuck ladies and sync lips.
It's sad. You gotta sign onto a board for just a taste of the pink slip.
played but somewhat relevant
You're not a force. Honestly, drop nice... I hope you do.
chances dropped cause Nik can't say and Des aint here to vote for you.
okay statment personal

the fuck was this?

vs

Ur a fat sloppy re re & embarassed ur fam since a pre teen
Ud have ur own mother roll in her grave just to cover it w/ creamcheese
Ur a faggot fer real....an u ugly as fuck w/ that animal grill
So if u have a wet dream i hope it involves a bathtub & a handful of pills
Actin like he flip raw, so i gotta pick apart this kids flaws
Watch me drag em thru the streets so quick theyd reinvent the rickshaw
Im sick of the lies too, i kno where u gettin ur lines dude
When u see this bitter snake bite n bars it aint no whiskey & lime juice
U sneak round dead vets archives for lines too often killer
This flatfoot goes to tiptoe thru their gravesite like the moonwalk in thriller
NBL Top punches, has he ever had a quote? Answer-nope.
Cuz every week they cut ur words out the mag like a fuckin ransom note

no quotes were eh, all better than bleaks lines though. mom jokes are in poor taste but the opener was a roflz flip. other quotes were cool the mag/ransom note was dope.

v/bags

[Joe Metts]

Not on the list, sorry bros.

Bleaks better then his last verse i read a year ago.

Bags is worse then the last verse i read from him.

Bags is still better.

Cool battle.

[Geno]

Tbh

Bleak sucks, but its not the level of suck that it used to be

Bags came soft as hell and still won ez with some rediculous lols. Far from what he culd have done,

V-bags

[bleak]

They can count.

You did it Bags!

I will log off forever.

[StarFaggot]

Bleak is the man. Good effort.

[Joe Metts]

Bleak stands up for himself. That's always a goodcharacteristic to have.

[Ghost1]

They can count.

You did it Bags!

I will log off forever.

Peace.

[Dope girl]

Bleak fell off with couple lines, but had humor
Bags- better punchlines & funnier lines

Vote- Bags I'd thought verse nicer than bleak

[DLB]

Bleak's lines were trash while Bags had a couple decent hits.

the bukkake line was played lulz tho

v/ Bags