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Dove Dozer
05-16-2013, 08:05 PM
Audio link ----->*http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...0389884-------

It really doesn't matter where you're going.. What matters is... how you get there. When all is said and done..

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I'm glancing... through a window of my soul,
and it hits me like a brick through the window when it's cold.
I'm feeling bitter and old, living as a soldier..
Tell me that you've been through this, and it's over.

The clock starts ticking, first breath, first step..
Then the next one left leaves ya closer to death.
So I guess that it's best, I seize the day..
Live life by example... lead the way..
So I can breathe today, and say made it through the rough shit.
I'm busted from being accustomed to the tough shit.
Trust it's a must kid I'm breaking the chains
Making a change cause I've lived life escaping the pain
For freedom so, I've walked the long road it seems,
And I'm never sacrificing my hopes and dreams.
I let go of my soul when I was overseas,
Now all I crave is a place with an ocean breeze.

When all is said and done..
With every breath of my life..I'll seize the day..
I've met death in disguise
I'll lead the way..
I'll be the best in my prime
When all is said and done


I was struggling, the dumbest kid numb from the hate,
that my mother put inside me, bearing some of the weight
on my shoulders, so lately I've been juggling fate..
tryin to stay a few steps ahead like running a race..
It's toxic, everyone I talk with is lost kid..
I'm cautious to expose the emotion locked in
But here I am.. end of the day...making this music,
Passing positive messages making it fluid.
So put your mind to it, and do it..believe in yourself,
We're humans...not sheep, stop seeking the wealth
Forget the greed, and give to those needing the help
Otherwise ya might as well be like the heathen in hell
and I'll be the hero, instead of wasting my time,*
because I.. write with a purpose lacing the rhymes.
I need a... place to reclince, a place I can find
to get away from the daily pace of the grind..

When all is said and done..With every breath of my life..
I'll seize the day..I've met death in disguise
I'll lead the way..I'll be the best in my prime
When all is said and done..

Dove Dozer
05-16-2013, 08:08 PM
I added the last 4 bars after recording. Ill re record soon

IamBenT
05-20-2013, 04:24 PM
audio link didnt work for me

Flow is really great, and its vivid with a strong sense of personality and writer's voice.

I can really relate to coming back from afar, only to find things are just not what they were. its kind of like a bittersweet homecoming in a way.

I'm glancing... through a window of my soul,
and it hits me like a brick through the window when it's cold.
I'm feeling bitter and old, living as a soldier..
Tell me that you've been through this, and it's over.
The clock starts ticking, first breath, first step..
Then the next one left leaves ya closer to death.
So I guess that it's best, I seize the day..
Live life by example... lead the way..

this beginning just reads so well, cant wait to actually hear it over a beat.

This is a dope track, quality thinking song, really coming in to your element here, again looking forward to the beat and what you did with that hook