Week 8: 15. rhetoric (0-1) vs. 16. Totoro (0-5) \\ rhetoric wins via quasi-no-show

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Season 3



The Basics | Read the full rules here (http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54688).

Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread (http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=65561).

Topic:

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Good luck, rhetoric and Totoro.

[rhetoric]

I'm a beacon of truth, a sad case, a tragedy to some
That my agony was too far past trying to over come
I became numb to the world, lived a shadow to most
Paddled the oceans with broken oars battling ghosts
In my travels I've approached demons, witches and gods
Dreamed a thousand visions that left me twisted in knots
Forgot those who loved me as they forgot I exist
Proven in every razor slit neatly notched in my wrists
Kissed a fantasy that promised we could just live
Only to land in a pit of broken hope I'll never forgive
So I sit at the ledge with this note sewn to my hand
Looking down upon the very world who will never know who I am

So tonight I've had it, decided I'm ending my life
Made it 10 feet from the edge before I realized
I'm 30 stories up, dizzy, shaken with freight
Suicide attempt #25 a Failure -

Note to self:

"Hey Dummy, your still afraid of heights"

Oh well, maybe next time. . .

[NYCSPITZ]

ump jump
dont this circle make a hump
wanna dump dump
i got my bike tire pump pump
u drunk?
think is what i thunk sonny
u aint nothing
aint shit
aint glummy
aint sully
aint goodfellas-
aint sonny
i aint money
cutting wu tang dicks
in circles
yin and yang poiwer
hopefully i get a no shoiw win