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CopyPat
05-23-2013, 04:37 AM
seriously wtf
listen to these actors
wimpy lil rappers aint lyrically tough enough
appear to be up on stuff, lie through they teeth
the beer in me musters up rhymes to the beat
im tryin to speak.. the truth and hurts you
thats why these emcees could use a rehearsal
im usually worth full price when i spit rounds
dudes is reversal. they writes is a discount
im typin this shit down carelessly breezin
mic get a zit how im blarin this grease in
embarrass emcees when they step to the god
i cherish the feeling of vengeance alot
the pen is the law and im pressin a charge
i'm sheriff this evening so get in dem bars
can't mess with the sarge, u gettin discharged
you catch an assault whenever i talk
im heaviest hard, u regular soft
and ready or not im getting involved
detectives get called and guess what they saw?
the death of you all. a plethora of bodies
lined up in a row, it mighta been the flow
rhymes was overdosed cause i kinda spit it dope
hymen was exposed, little rappers gettin popped
grimey plus its so sick cause Patrick is the boss.

Geno
05-23-2013, 08:57 PM
Dope flex
Easily read with a couple slick lines. The spit rounds discount transition was cool. Good shit cp. Stay up

Zen
05-24-2013, 01:17 PM
Dope key. And welcome back Pat ain't seen you in a minute. We still gotta get that collab going. Keep droppin man.

Dove Dozer
05-26-2013, 02:35 PM
Sick little flex pat. Feelin the vibes bruh.

Holler.

Mr. J
05-26-2013, 03:12 PM
This was pretty dope, you still have that edge
nice little flow to it, you had some nice lines scattered throughout
cool to see more people dropping though...

im usually worth full price when i spit rounds
dudes is reversal. they writes is a discount
^^^^^

that was nice, I feel like you could have set it up better
but the way it came out was pretty sick regardless nice drop bro