ever seen this concept before???

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play-the-diva, i'm rearrangin ur facial features.. pump out the ride
the gauge'll leave ya, hung out to dry, like my favorite t-shirt at an asian cleaners
but since two words all it takes-for-me-to get ur fiancee to leave ya
i'm-a fuck that bitch raw till her hips sprawl an i break her femur
so when the doc's give her a cane, it ain't katrina

her a cane/hurricane/ when the doc's/windy docks an etc...just curious if y'all have seen that in the text world...i'm-a still use it against breakneck the mage when we battle next month, either way...

[StarFaggot]

Yea the wordplays been done but it'll come across nice live.

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word @ aero...i figure just about every double meaning u can make has been done in text, just wasn't sure how played out it's been...

[Geno]

I've never personally seen/heard it. Its possible its been done though, just like anything else. Good shit imo

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thanks genocide...strangely enough i use more text-style wordplay in live battles than i ever did when i actually did the text thing...

[Cashius]

When the doc's/windy docks seems stretched to me. Even live.

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not if u pronounce it when dee docks...which isn't too far of a stretch live...iono we'll see how it comes out...the hurricane/her a cane/katrina shit was the main part i was concerned about...but i feel what ur sayin fam, no doubt...

[Ghost1]

Wword windy docks/when the docs os not gonna work....docks/docs sure....bit windy/when the.....lmfao even in hebrew that shit dont work. Her a cane is cool tho

[TYSON]

I thought it was cool to me and not played in my opinion but I don't battle anymore and from wat niggas say I never did it right. So from a listener who only listens and not knee deep in the battle scene, that would be fresh.

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lol the windy docks/when the doc's is really just subtle wordplay in there for people to either catch it or not...tbh tho' i think it'll be a lot smoother live than y'all thinkin it will, but maybe that's just me...appreciate the feedback tho'...

mainly the hurricane part i'm thinkin of...i kinda have to use a katrina bar lol i did this thing where i said gimme thirty likes in two hours an i'll s/o one of y'all an use ur name in a scheme...katrina was the best name i got to use tbh lol...

[Poe]

WHEN THE ...AND WINDY works.....I don't say WHEN DUHH, I say WHEN THEEE.

It could def. work.

[Dope girl]

idk.....

[Ghost1]

Ole lookin like ya titties start where ur elbows crease ass bish.

[Maximus]

Ive seen some her a cane/hurricane wordplay in the past but this aint bad and yes the windy docks will work perfectly, doesnt sound stretched to me at all

[Sharp]

hurricane/her a cane is all you need for that one IMO and that one definitely works

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word...so long as the Katrina part hits the windy docks is just there for added impact if u catch it...

I still like the frankie wapps bar "how u not see if he high then man frank is an addict...nooooo how u nazi if he hidin Anne frank in his attic"

just me tho...I suck...

[...the Nagger]

lol thats gonna be hot

too bad you couldn't make it Sandy instead of Katrina tho

[anime_boners]

DO A SLOW IT DOWN AFTER TO MAKE SURE EVERYONE GETS IT

[Greed]

Don't repeat yourself this time. Mean it the first time.

[...the Nagger]

you better not do a slow it down tho. that would be so corny, not to mention a slow it down would require katrina to be a double entendre or it would make him look completely retarded

[anime_boners]

you better not do a slow it down tho. that would be so corny, not to mention a slow it down would require katrina to be a double entendre or it would make him look completely retarded

nah i was being facetious, i hate that slow it down shit

[The Bully]

My offer to write for you still stands.