Championship: Knucklehead vs. Shank Sinatra - {Knucklehead wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL
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Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Wednesday,
May 29th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 36 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



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Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.



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2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
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means you will disqualified.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


Shank Sinatra

[~RustyGunZ~]

extremely exhausted, only going 12

ya dream girls been duckin' ya, u'll never get the bitch, dude
if she got a Shank by her side.. she put it there for an excuse to ditch u
TUW proved u gettin' better, but levels? u can't blow through mine
we know u ain't at the Perfect Pitch yet, the way you couldn't even show for Nine
shank hang out at HS parties, gettin' 17yos drunk so they'll tongue box ya
u ain't got the Logic to pull real women, & that's why u stay w. em young, Sinatra
LoS is alive & well, ya crew will be second to us til ur departed or astray
if u faggits are the Last of a Dying Breed.. u're the cancer that started the decay
fuck this Canadian fraud, u a Canuck screamin' IN GOD WE TRUST
ur girl grab my dick & it Hosier while u try fitted hats & tall tees to fit in with us
srs stop the shit, u don't astound with raps
funny how u're from BC, & aaallll your concepts are from 3000 that

FINE ONE MORE

u've been in every noob tourney, GODAMN UR A DISGRACE
U join em Over & Over Again & always leave w/ a bandage on ur faggit face

[Boredom]

14.


creepy fuck, i'll end ur world if u continue to make up the rep ur building
if u've ever had the ‘it’ factor 's cause ur an ugly clown obsessed with children.
u can’t stand w/ peers in a brawl, i’ll smash this queer in the jaw
im well conditioned..u do that to ur hair after getting manicures at a spa.
since em days the bible was created, hoes bin known to milk my name
i'll have ur mom climaxing w/ her back in such an arch it put the one jonah built to shame.
i get hoes soaking wet, knuck just call ya wife..
bitches call me mr lube...u'll be working there in a dead end job for life.
this nerd is suckin semen, talk of spread sheets get this knuck just gleamin..
when I’m talking bout spread sheets it involves me fucking ur slut between em.
it's like u live in the matrix, an imaginary world. all that shit u can save it
ironic how u 'own this site' but blind to the fact everyone thinks ur a fagg0t.
u look like a neanderthal, when it comes to girls u need to pay to fuck
there is no doubt knuckledragger.. back to his trailer so he can rape the slut

[Atomic]

ya dream girls been duckin' ya, u'll never get the bitch, dude
if she got a Shank by her side.. she put it there for an excuse to ditch u
LOL, k
TUW proved u gettin' better, but levels? u can't blow through mine
we know u ain't at the Perfect Pitch yet, the way you couldn't even show for Nine
cool personal
shank hang out at HS parties, gettin' 17yos drunk so they'll tongue box ya
u ain't got the Logic to pull real women, & that's why u stay w. em young, Sinatra
dece
LoS is alive & well, ya crew will be second to us til ur departed or astray
if u faggits are the Last of a Dying Breed.. u're the cancer that started the decay
haha, okayish flip
fuck this Canadian fraud, u a Canuck screamin' IN GOD WE TRUST
ur girl grab my dick & it Hosier while u try fitted hats & tall tees to fit in with us
LOL
srs stop the shit, u don't astound with raps
funny how u're from BC, & aaallll your concepts are from 3000 that
LMFAOOOO sick

FINE ONE MORE

u've been in every noob tourney, GODAMN UR A DISGRACE
U join em Over & Over Again & always leave w/ a bandage on ur faggit face
don't get it.

//


creepy fuck, i'll end ur world if u continue to make up the rep ur building
if u've ever had the ‘it’ factor 's cause ur an ugly clown obsessed with children.

u can’t stand w/ peers in a brawl, i’ll smash this queer in the jaw
im well conditioned..u do that to ur hair after getting manicures at a spa.
LMAO dece, poor wording tho
since em days the bible was created, hoes bin known to milk my name
i'll have ur mom climaxing w/ her back in such an arch it put the one jonah built to shame.
ehhh, too simple but its okay i guess
i get hoes soaking wet, knuck just call ya wife..
bitches call me mr lube...u'll be working there in a dead end job for life.
lol no
this nerd is suckin semen, talk of spread sheets get this knuck just gleamin..
when I’m talking bout spread sheets it involves me fucking ur slut between em.
don't really like the concept it's okay
it's like u live in the matrix, an imaginary world. all that shit u can save it
ironic how u 'own this site' but blind to the fact everyone thinks ur a fagg0t.
mehhh
u look like a neanderthal, when it comes to girls u need to pay to fuck
there is no doubt knuckledragger.. back to his trailer so he can rape the slut
LMAO sick

Both verses were good. I liked knuckles more though. V/ knuckle

[Maximus]

ya dream girls been duckin' ya, u'll never get the bitch, dude
if she got a Shank by her side.. she put it there for an excuse to ditch u
PLAYED
TUW proved u gettin' better, but levels? u can't blow through mine
we know u ain't at the Perfect Pitch yet, the way you couldn't even show for Nine
COOL
shank hang out at HS parties, gettin' 17yos drunk so they'll tongue box ya
u ain't got the Logic to pull real women, & that's why u stay w. em young, Sinatra
OK
LoS is alive & well, ya crew will be second to us til ur departed or astray
if u faggits are the Last of a Dying Breed.. u're the cancer that started the decay
PRETTY GOOD
fuck this Canadian fraud, u a Canuck screamin' IN GOD WE TRUST
ur girl grab my dick & it Hosier while u try fitted hats & tall tees to fit in with us
OK
srs stop the shit, u don't astound with raps
funny how u're from BC, & aaallll your concepts are from 3000 that
SOLID PERSONAL
FINE ONE MORE
u've been in every noob tourney, GODAMN UR A DISGRACE
U join em Over & Over Again & always leave w/ a bandage on ur faggit face
SEE WHAT U TRIED TO DO BUT THIS CAME OFF STATEMENTISH
VS
creepy fuck, i'll end ur world if u continue to make up the rep ur building
if u've ever had the ¡®it¡¯ factor 's cause ur an ugly clown obsessed with children.
MEH
u can¡¯t stand w/ peers in a brawl, i¡¯ll smash this queer in the jaw
im well conditioned..u do that to ur hair aftergetting manicures at a spa.
OK
since em days the bible was created, hoes bin known to milk my name
i'll have ur mom climaxing w/ her back in such an arch it put the one jonah built to shame.
AIGHT
i get hoes soaking wet, knuck just call ya wife..
bitches call me mr lube...u'll be working therein a dead end job for life.
NOT FEELING THIS
this nerd is suckin semen, talk of spread sheets get this knuck just gleamin..
when I¡¯m talking bout spread sheets it involves me fucking ur slut between em.
PLAYED
it's like u live in the matrix, an imaginary world. all that shit u can save it
ironic how u 'own this site' but blind to the fact everyone thinks ur a fagg0t.
NOT THAT BAD FOR A CURRENT EVENT FLIP BUT COULDA BEEN BETTER IMO
u look like a neanderthal, when it comes to girls u need to pay to fuck
there is no doubt knuckledragger.. back to his trailer so he can rape the slut
COOL NP
.
.
V/knuck
had more effective hits and better wording, plus lotb with the bc line

[R!canTheoryz]

ya dream girls been duckin' ya, u'll never get the bitch, dude
if she got a Shank by her side.. she put it there for an excuse to ditch u
Lmao.
TUW proved u gettin' better, but levels? u can't blow through mine
we know u ain't at the Perfect Pitch yet, the way you couldn't even show for Nine
Nice, good personal.
shank hang out at HS parties, gettin' 17yos drunk so they'll tongue box ya
u ain't got the Logic to pull real women, & that's why u stay w. em young, Sinatra
lol decent at best.
LoS is alive & well, ya crew will be second to us til ur departed or astray
if u faggits are the Last of a Dying Breed.. u're the cancer that started the decay
sick^
fuck this Canadian fraud, u a Canuck screamin' IN GOD WE TRUST
ur girl grab my dick & it Hosier while u try fitted hats & tall tees to fit in with us
Ok.
srs stop the shit, u don't astound with raps
funny how u're from BC, & aaallll your concepts are from 3000 that
BC as brick city the website? pretty cool on the personal
u've been in every noob tourney, GODAMN UR A DISGRACE
U join em Over & Over Again & always leave w/ a bandage on ur faggit face
lol.


vs




creepy fuck, i'll end ur world if u continue to make up the rep ur building
if u've ever had the ‘it’ factor 's cause ur an ugly clown obsessed with children.
Nice.
u can’t stand w/ peers in a brawl, i’ll smash this queer in the jaw
im well conditioned..u do that to ur hair after getting manicures at a spa.
Pretty cool^
since em days the bible was created, hoes bin known to milk my name
i'll have ur mom climaxing w/ her back in such an arch it put the one jonah built to shame.
Its Ok.
i get hoes soaking wet, knuck just call ya wife..
bitches call me mr lube...u'll be working there in a dead end job for life.
lol.
this nerd is suckin semen, talk of spread sheets get this knuck just gleamin..
when I’m talking bout spread sheets it involves me fucking ur slut between em.
Decent.
it's like u live in the matrix, an imaginary world. all that shit u can save it
ironic how u 'own this site' but blind to the fact everyone thinks ur a fagg0t.
Nah, aint feeling this much.
u look like a neanderthal, when it comes to girls u need to pay to fuck
there is no doubt knuckledragger.. back to his trailer so he can rape the slut
This was alright.


Overall Vote- Knuckle. He was slightly more polished than shank both were pretty good verses but i felt knuck was alittle more witty in some parts of his verse shank kinda fell off last two bars lacked sting he from his beggin part of his verse where he was on fire came out swinging every bar landed but knuck was just witty thru on out i felt imo cool champ match fellas, i enjoyed the read ya both did ya thing but my vote goes to knuckle.

[Black Mask]

Closer than I thought it'd be. Knuckle was a Tad bit more creative and consistant. Shanks not bad. Just try and be a bit more abstract.

Imma go with knuckle with the slight edge

[Defiant]

ya dream girls been duckin' ya, u'll never get the bitch, dude
if she got a Shank by her side.. she put it there for an excuse to ditch u
TUW proved u gettin' better, but levels? u can't blow through mine
we know u ain't at the Perfect Pitch yet, the way you couldn't even show for Nine
LoS is alive & well, ya crew will be second to us til ur departed or astray
if u faggits are the Last of a Dying Breed.. u're the cancer that started the decay
srs stop the shit, u don't astound with raps
funny how u're from BC, & aaallll your concepts are from 3000 that

vs

u can’t stand w/ peers in a brawl, i’ll smash this queer in the jaw
im well conditioned..u do that to ur hair after getting manicures at a spa.
this nerd is suckin semen, talk of spread sheets get this knuck just gleamin..
when I’m talking bout spread sheets it involves me fucking ur slut between em.
u look like a neanderthal, when it comes to girls u need to pay to fuck
there is no doubt knuckledragger.. back to his trailer so he can rape the slut


decent battle, not the best for a title match, but knucks wording was alot smoother. crew line was nice, shank seemed a bit wordy and it kinda took the sting away from some of his punches

decent stuff
vote - knucklehead

[Hush]

Step 1 mod nbl - check
Step 2 champ nbl - check
Step 3 stop being queer - in progress