Defiant vs. Edgar AlPo {Defiant wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL
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Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Wednesday,
May 29th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
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Defiant Edgar AlPo

[Chyeahhh!!!]

I’m outta your league, not cuz I’m a “free”style agent always plagued with the hating
it's because here, you won't make a name off of Chin, like that John Kerry alias you gave me
You’re absolutely horrid, maybe you should just step for a bit
Cuz you masquerade like you’re the best but you’re So So…… like a tourney that has Def in it
dance with the devil, but I'm only cuttin a rug to role you in it, hoe
punches'll have you waking up to Pitch Black, these are the Chronicles of Riddick, Boe
say I string folks along in threads?, I’ll attack with clothes lines..
I clap at closed minds..
But trust, the only “hand” you’ll get from me at most def, is black on both sides
you ass god!, meaning you take it religiously in the rear
this fagg0t could take an oath of celibacy, and still suck more than any other nigga here
my quoteables are too advanced, you’re already in the past tense and it’s true
My lines blew by you so fast, you’ll think it was my last NS verse b4 my win against YOU!!
I’m a survivor, plus I’m dope, so you call me MC Cain
And you’re the vet who’s skills are only known for being MIA, you can call him McCain
When it comes to predictions, if I’m lying I’m flying, it’s different when I’m rhyming
“the world’s coming to an end” and oddly enough, the only one dying is Defiant

[Defiant]

Ext?

[~RustyGunZ~]

Defiant

[Defiant]

i like vintage equipment, but his lack of funds is more than a dumb issue
last time he had a pocket watch, it was a couple of coins, a button and some tissue
another wack head with a ego , hes a nobody...nothing more
so speak for his verses? no wonder no ones heard of him before
look at it from every angle n theres no hiding this fools a queer
grab two fagg.ots for a love triangle, n you still couldnt be equal actual here
hes broke as fuck, getting him out of his cellar would be serious displacement
when ed's diner consists of water, bread and whatever he can find in his basement
struggling to write anything decent, i wont cover that kid
if you manage to drop a megaupload of lines, il take it down like the goverment did
you have a different style in every battle, n no ones buying that call
i can see your trying to hard, but then again your oppenents havent been trying at all
lotto smirk and gkillaz are better, u got a bit 2 prove G
hes so bad his standing is even jay > edgar like that di caprio movie

[Ronic]

I’m outta your league, not cuz I’m a “free”style agent always plagued with the hating
it's because here, you won't make a name off of Chin, like that John Kerry alias you gave me
didn't really hit for me
You’re absolutely horrid, maybe you should just step for a bit
Cuz you masquerade like you’re the best but you’re So So…… like a tourney that has Def in it
okay, but not great
dance with the devil, but I'm only cuttin a rug to role you in it, hoe
punches'll have you waking up to Pitch Black, these are the Chronicles of Riddick, Boe
hated the wording here sorry cuz
say I string folks along in threads?, I’ll attack with clothes lines..
I clap at closed minds..
But trust, the only “hand” you’ll get from me at most def, is black on both sides
okay
you ass god!, meaning you take it religiously in the rear
this fagg0t could take an oath of celibacy, and still suck more than any other nigga here
okay
my quoteables are too advanced, you’re already in the past tense and it’s true
My lines blew by you so fast, you’ll think it was my last NS verse b4 my win against YOU!!
meh
I’m a survivor, plus I’m dope, so you call me MC Cain
And you’re the vet who’s skills are only known for being MIA, you can call him McCain
MC Cain with McCain? Come on, man...
When it comes to predictions, if I’m lying I’m flying, it’s different when I’m rhyming
“the world’s coming to an end” and oddly enough, the only one dying is Defiant
okay



i like vintage equipment, but his lack of funds is more than a dumb issue
last time he had a pocket watch, it was a couple of coins, a button and some tissue
meh didn't like the rhyme scheme
another wack head with a ego , hes a nobody...nothing more
so speak for his verses? no wonder no ones heard of him before
meh
look at it from every angle n theres no hiding this fools a queer
grab two fagg.ots for a love triangle, n you still couldnt be equal actual here
decent
hes broke as fuck, getting him out of his cellar would be serious displacement
when ed's diner consists of water, bread and whatever he can find in his basement
okay
struggling to write anything decent, i wont cover that kid
if you manage to drop a megaupload of lines, il take it down like the goverment did
lol terrible set up, but the second line was funny
you have a different style in every battle, n no ones buying that call
i can see your trying to hard, but then again your oppenents havent been trying at all
okay
lotto smirk and gkillaz are better, u got a bit 2 prove G
hes so bad his standing is even jay > edgar like that di caprio movie
ehhh okaaayyyyyyy



Both were ok, nothin special, I'm goin with Defiant for having the only line in the whole battle that made me laugh

v/Def

[Atomic]

I’m outta your league, not cuz I’m a “free”style agent always plagued with the hating
it's because here, you won't make a name off of Chin, like that John Kerry alias you gave me
doesn't rhyme, but it's okay
You’re absolutely horrid, maybe you should just step for a bit
Cuz you masquerade like you’re the best but you’re So So…… like a tourney that has Def in it
plz no
dance with the devil, but I'm only cuttin a rug to role you in it, hoe
punches'll have you waking up to Pitch Black, these are the Chronicles of Riddick, Boe
looooool no
say I string folks along in threads?, I’ll attack with clothes lines..
I clap at closed minds..
But trust, the only “hand” you’ll get from me at most def, is black on both sides
meh
you ass god!, meaning you take it religiously in the rear
this fagg0t could take an oath of celibacy, and still suck more than any other nigga here
gay lol plz stop
my quoteables are too advanced, you’re already in the past tense and it’s true
My lines blew by you so fast, you’ll think it was my last NS verse b4 my win against YOU!!
meeeeehhhhh
I’m a survivor, plus I’m dope, so you call me MC Cain
And you’re the vet who’s skills are only known for being MIA, you can call him McCain
okay okay, decent
When it comes to predictions, if I’m lying I’m flying, it’s different when I’m rhyming
“the world’s coming to an end” and oddly enough, the only one dying is Defiant
meh

...

i like vintage equipment, but his lack of funds is more than a dumb issue
last time he had a pocket watch, it was a couple of coins, a button and some tissue
lol? no
another wack head with a ego , hes a nobody...nothing more
so speak for his verses? no wonder no ones heard of him before
no
look at it from every angle n theres no hiding this fools a queer
grab two fagg.ots for a love triangle, n you still couldnt be equal actual here
HORRID FLIP
hes broke as fuck, getting him out of his cellar would be serious displacement
when ed's diner consists of water, bread and whatever he can find in his basement
LOL??? IM DEAD HAHAHAHHA
struggling to write anything decent, i wont cover that kid
if you manage to drop a megaupload of lines, il take it down like the goverment did
horrid flip but i appreciate the attempt
you have a different style in every battle, n no ones buying that call
i can see your trying to hard, but then again your oppenents havent been trying at all
no
lotto smirk and gkillaz are better, u got a bit 2 prove G
hes so bad his standing is even jay > edgar like that di caprio movie
there isn't even a punch there.

...

V/ Idk. Both verses were literally so poor. Defiants 4th bar literally made me laugh my ass off but it wasn't because the bar was sick lol.

Thought about it, and I'm going to vote edgar. Close battle, but they're both wack. Keep elevating boys.

V/ Edgar.

[Sharp]

I’m a survivor, plus I’m dope, so you call me MC Cain
And you’re the vet who’s skills are only known for being MIA, you can call him McCain

almost quoted masquerade. seen most def from malachi before

v


struggling to write anything decent, i wont cover that kid
if you manage to drop a megaupload of lines, il take it down like the goverment did
lotto smirk and gkillaz are better, u got a bit 2 prove G
hes so bad his standing is even jay > edgar like that di caprio movie

pocket watch was almost


Defiant was a lot more direct, better wording/flips. chyeahs got good verses for like, diss tracks or S/F battles but in this case defiant managed to get the stronger hits in.

V/ Def

[Maximus]

Defiant took this with his opener, the megaupload line and his closer, not the best ive seen from u but still enuff to make u win. The other dude just had the maclain line which was just decent at best, so in the end defiant landed more hits
v/defiant

[Hush]

Chyin was played

Def was more consistent

[Chyeahhh!!!]

nigga how many times have I said you can't vote on my matches Chinobley?

[Defiant]

3-1 UPPIN

[~RustyGunZ~]

I’m outta your league, not cuz I’m a “free”style agent always plagued with the hating
it's because here, you won't make a name off of Chin, like that John Kerry alias you gave me
You’re absolutely horrid, maybe you should just step for a bit
Cuz you masquerade like you’re the best but you’re So So…… like a tourney that has Def in it

vs.

hes broke as fuck, getting him out of his cellar would be serious displacement
when ed's diner consists of water, bread and whatever he can find in his basement
struggling to write anything decent, i wont cover that kid
if you manage to drop a megaupload of lines, il take it down like the goverment did
lotto smirk and gkillaz are better, u got a bit 2 prove G
hes so bad his standing is even jay > edgar like that di caprio movie

lots of statements but the misses weren't to bad

v/def