Utmost vs. Patrick {Patrick wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League




Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Wednesday,
May 29th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Tuesday 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 36 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.



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1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


Utmost Patrick

[Swerve]

If I have to...

[Utmost]

check

[Swerve]

missed the cements both times, online and in-store today. smh

This dude went on bitching to Nik and all that I read was pathetic,
So I’ll make sure you don’t miss the cement again by smashing your head against it.
Matched up with a legend of text, one of the best you finicky slob,
Swerve’ll lead to your death…since the car accident you were in didn’t finish the job.
Heard your verse against Metts, it was just bad and I bet it burns,
That the crack in your voice could supply Rob Ford’s campaign for a hundred terms.
You’ve admitted that I’m better than you and I bring the classics,
But if that concession stands…I know this fat fuck would spend all day eating at it.
You’re not a challenge to my throne, don’t even need to be ruthless,
I’d try to make the Most of the situation…but then it’s be pathetic, ugly and incredibly stupid.

[Utmost]

just got home. may need a lil ext to write

[Utmost]

Call ya loved ones here to see you off - today is surely ur last
Coz I guarantee a Pat down in terminal..like airport security staff
Ive seen ya pic, hideous!!! still YOU n Kenny should setup a crew
Ur 23 n discovered masturbation..
& itll be THAT many more before a bitch decides suicide over settlin for YOU
I mean, ya whole style is watermarked - plus that 03' steez is stolen queer
talk about sponging off old vets.. ur hands are Prune enuff to supply group homes for years
Plus in fight night, those tired concepts got YOU clowned n choked
kinda ironic ur usin knuckle sandwich flips.. when he was the one to shove it down ya throat
even bitches pull ya card - while Most is makin sure every snatch is slain
coz when chicks laughs at Pity-Pat...Im not talkin about the matching game
.
.

[Ronic]

This dude went on bitching to Nik and all that I read was pathetic,
So I’ll make sure you don’t miss the cement again by smashing your head against it.
aight
Matched up with a legend of text, one of the best you finicky slob,
Swerve’ll lead to your death…since the car accident you were in didn’t finish the job.
Not bad but felt you coulda used swerve to better effect in a car accident punch
Heard your verse against Metts, it was just bad and I bet it burns,
That the crack in your voice could supply Rob Ford’s campaign for a hundred terms.
aight
You’ve admitted that I’m better than you and I bring the classics,
But if that concession stands…I know this fat fuck would spend all day eating at it.
lol cool
You’re not a challenge to my throne, don’t even need to be ruthless,
I’d try to make the Most of the situation…but then it’s be pathetic, ugly and incredibly stupid.
alright, but felt simple



Call ya loved ones here to see you off - today is surely ur last
Coz I guarantee a Pat down in terminal..like airport security staff
liked the concept, but wording lacked sting
Ive seen ya pic, hideous!!! still YOU n Kenny should setup a crew
Ur 23 n discovered masturbation..
& itll be THAT many more before a bitch decides suicide over settlin for YOU
Nah stretched and no direction with the concept
I mean, ya whole style is watermarked - plus that 03' steez is stolen queer
talk about sponging off old vets.. ur hands are Prune enuff to supply group homes for years
wording fell flat here
Plus in fight night, those tired concepts got YOU clowned n choked
kinda ironic ur usin knuckle sandwich flips.. when he was the one to shove it down ya throat
this was better
even bitches pull ya card - while Most is makin sure every snatch is slain
coz when chicks laughs at Pity-Pat...Im not talkin about the matching game
not great, but okay


Patrick had one cool hit, rest wasnt anythin massive but still okay. Utmost needed a bit of work on his wording to make his concepts hit with more effect.

v/Pat

[Untold]

Heard your verse against Metts, it was just bad and I bet it burns,
That the crack in your voice could supply Rob Ford’s campaign for a hundred terms.
You’ve admitted that I’m better than you and I bring the classics,
But if that concession stands…I know this fat fuck would spend all day eating at it.

Vs

I mean, ya whole style is watermarked - plus that 03' steez is stolen queer
talk about sponging off old vets.. ur hands are Prune enuff to supply group homes for years
Plus in fight night, those tired concepts got YOU clowned n choked
kinda ironic ur usin knuckle sandwich flips.. when he was the one to shove it down ya throat

Well this was a dope battle. Definitely feeling both verses. Pat/Swerve had some cool concepts and good wording. Always enjoy reading ya verses. As far as ya misses though, they were pretty off. Like the concrete line was only ok to me. Felt like more could've been done with it or shouldn've just stayed away from it. Utmost had a good verse to. I gotta say, pretty consistent although I'm torn on ya suicide line. Familiar concept from last week with Cashius's cyanide line. Not saying you bit by any means, just felt the concept was done better and pretty recently. Anywho, I feel that Utmost had less misses in his verse, so I'm a give it to him.

V/ Utmost

[Greed]

Swerve delivers the same punch over and over with different words.

That's why utmost prune line was lotb. Hated everything else I read from the both of you.

V/ utmost

[Atomic]

This dude went on bitching to Nik and all that I read was pathetic,
So I’ll make sure you don’t miss the cement again by smashing your head against it.
maybe there's something I'm missing, but just ok to me..
Matched up with a legend of text, one of the best you finicky slob,
Swerve’ll lead to your death…since the car accident you were in didn’t finish the job.
roflrofl nice
Heard your verse against Metts, it was just bad and I bet it burns,
That the crack in your voice could supply Rob Ford’s campaign for a hundred terms.
dece
You’ve admitted that I’m better than you and I bring the classics,
But if that concession stands…I know this fat fuck would spend all day eating at it.
lol k
You’re not a challenge to my throne, don’t even need to be ruthless,
I’d try to make the Most of the situation…but then it’s be pathetic, ugly and incredibly stupid.
meh, filler


//

Call ya loved ones here to see you off - today is surely ur last
Coz I guarantee a Pat down in terminal..like airport security staff
reaching, but i like the wordplay
Ive seen ya pic, hideous!!! still YOU n Kenny should setup a crew
Ur 23 n discovered masturbation..
& itll be THAT many more before a bitch decides suicide over settlin for YOU
stretched, & nah
I mean, ya whole style is watermarked - plus that 03' steez is stolen queer
talk about sponging off old vets.. ur hands are Prune enuff to supply group homes for years
no
Plus in fight night, those tired concepts got YOU clowned n choked
kinda ironic ur usin knuckle sandwich flips.. when he was the one to shove it down ya throat
eeeeeeehhh
even bitches pull ya card - while Most is makin sure every snatch is slain
coz when chicks laughs at Pity-Pat...Im not talkin about the matching game
LOL okay

//

Didn't really like either verse that much but Pat had more bars I liked. Vote: Pat.
.

[R!canTheoryz]

Matched up with a legend of text, one of the best you finicky slob,
Swerve’ll lead to your death…since the car accident you were in didn’t finish the job.
You’ve admitted that I’m better than you and I bring the classics,
But if that concession stands…I know this fat fuck would spend all day eating at it.

vs

even bitches pull ya card - while Most is makin sure every snatch is slain
coz when chicks laughs at Pity-Pat...Im not talkin about the matching game

Overall Vote - Patrick, he was slightly more witty in this match I felt like he connected and executed his concepts slightly better then utmost 2-1 I see this match pat taking this. cool battle yall.

[Defiant]

3-2 UPPIN FOR SOME MORE VOTES

[~RustyGunZ~]

This dude went on bitching to Nik and all that I read was pathetic,
So I’ll make sure you don’t miss the cement again by smashing your head against it.Heard your verse against Metts, it was just bad and I bet it burns,
That the crack in your voice could supply Rob Ford’s campaign for a hundred terms.
You’ve admitted that I’m better than you and I bring the classics,
But if that concession stands…I know this fat fuck would spend all day eating at it.
You’re not a challenge to my throne, don’t even need to be ruthless,
I’d try to make the Most of the situation…but then it’s be pathetic, ugly and incredibly stupid.

nah @ swerve that is like alvin when he used a kar/car line

vs.

Call ya loved ones here to see you off - today is surely ur last
Coz I guarantee a Pat down in terminal..like airport security staff
Plus in fight night, those tired concepts got YOU clowned n choked
kinda ironic ur usin knuckle sandwich flips.. when he was the one to shove it down ya throat
even bitches pull ya card - while Most is makin sure every snatch is slain
coz when chicks laughs at Pity-Pat...Im not talkin about the matching game


cool battle, pat just came a little more consistent

v/pat