just sum spitten

[Natural]

I'm above the norm with my flawless form and
flow
I'm gonna warn that the code was born this
dope
I'm vicious like the way a violent storm
Corrodes
So wicked you'll have sworn i got a set of horns
bestowed
I got the chicks so torn from clothes like some
porno hoes
They grab my dick to form an oh its a forceful
blow
I grab the torso slow contort her pose torque
it close
The vag explodes and covers the shaft with
Loads

Annd...


I'm bad and seductive when i pen the pad I
love it
I'm rugged a weathered heart thats been stuffed
in
an oven n froze in the mountains and pummled by
women
Yet it still beats an eats up the venom im steadily
Spittin
Immune because ive been bitten by music and
writtens
Take a minute to listen its silently hissing at an
audience
Applaud to it drop the jaw and awe to it bow to
Its presence
Treasure the beautiful blessings it gives in mere
Seconds...

[Natural]

Bump

[Ghost1]

Trash. Lol@a storm corroding. stopped reading after that. If u dont kno what the words mean dont just use them to rhyme, its infantile.

[Ghost1]

K i read the rest. Super wack. This shit reads like dr suess had a wigger son who cant hold a rhythym or count syllables. An the words try to make it seem important. I hated it.

[Natural]

Appreciate the waste of time Bags

Always got my back when i need a pointless distraction.

You'll have to forgive me if i don't heed your advice.

[Ghost1]

The only advice i offered is to learn the meaning of the words u regurgitate on the web. If u want to write meaningless shit just ro rhyme, by all means....but ur tarnishing an art that used to have value b4 talentless faggits like u tried to bandwagon the craft.

[Natural]

Lol. W/e

Bye

[Ghost1]

Ur pinkslips up in disc forum.

[Geno]

Oblock!

[Just Write]

First verse flowed better but i enjoyed the second verse's content more.

Favs,

I got the chicks so torn from clothes like someporno hoesThey grab my dick to form an oh its a forcefulblowI grab the torso slow contort her pose torqueit closeThe vag explodes and covers the shaft withLoads


I'm bad and seductive when i pen the pad Ilove itI'm rugged a weathered heart thats been stuffedinan oven n froze in the mountains and pummled bywomenYet it still beats an eats up the venom im steadilySpittin

[InCizion]

This person is doing what I've done in the past.. and why Seyance did not like my writing.... I would stretch the meaning of the word.. Wich would not always work.. Some people forget that sometimes there's more than one meaning to a word.. but corroding weather is a stretch....