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InCizion
05-26-2013, 02:05 PM
Our minds decapitation is a lack of patience
Strife is a relapse in cadence as we attack changes
Because were strapped hatin facts that’s adjacent
Hate is ancient, scathing at who acts complacent
Life’s arrangements get left fast in the basement
Fates detainments try to laugh & yet are trapped cases
Past the gates are all races, White, brown & black faces
The last grace is religion trying to dispatch its traces
Politicians are rats, evasive and will distract bases
Facts, and traces, erase cats who act persuasive
Some get clapped and faceless cast in rat mazes
Whacked & traceless, Tasteless crap will hack aces
Contracts and evasions collapsed to smack aimless
Tracked are our pages of bloody combats and races

SO NOW

The basics are missin and the racists are trippin
Rape is when a person’s mission will aid his vision
Paid is wisdom, get caught trippin, it’s a 8 bid in prison
It’s a waste kids are slippin, we’ve all faced its description
So craved kids listen! Or get encased with InCizions
Earth’s laced with prescriptions, hurt takes its inflictions
A cursed fate is friction so the curse rakes in addiction
The term bakes in his kitchen, worms, snakes & exorcisms
The Church makes commissions but is worth faiths envision
Fates indecision will dictate omission of misplaced ambition
Man’s fishin 4 truths subscription with his displaced mannerisms
That damned inner system is what’s at hand like winters chisim
Man will splinter victims & timber plans as the inventors of division
Mentors to fiction, tempers have risen, and now embers glisten

Mr. J
05-26-2013, 03:15 PM
This was a very consistent piece, you kept the flow on point
and you really stuck to your subject matter, you got your word usage correct
I'm not a fan of centered pieces though..maybe it's just me...
either way this was sick from the beginning to the end to be honest
I thought the first part was slick, and the second added some flare to it
keep it up man