Generic Undiagnosed Immortal Cannibal Nutcases and Stuff

[Illume]

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[dead man]

He's Medusa and plague, with Methusala's age, ruthless,

ill. i wished you had followed it up with something a little harder but the set-up was bonkers to me.

the rest was well done for a quick read. a little necro, oldschoolish feel to it. nothing too heavy, flowed like stepping stones.

youve been putting your work in for the OM. been meaning to check out more of your work

keep up the good fight, thanks


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[Illume]

He's Medusa and plague, with Methusala's age, ruthless,

ill. Snipt

Thanks man. I had to toy with that line for a while. I thought about switchin it wit the on after but decided against it.

always nice to hear back.

Keep well.

[Fig]

Seems like a rhyming exercise. It's obvious you know how to scheme and structure. Also the imagery was really nice at parts. I'll be checking out your other pieces as well, you seem like an experienced writer.