did it for ya

[DexLabb]

BEAT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X6piWSEfmTE

OUUUUU!

net-cess,
net-cees,

you know i had to,

do it for the monsters livin' under the rocks
talkin' shit through an e-portal like you're e-mortal gods,
i once got it twisted and fell into the 98' flow,
but as far as 98' goes, i got 99 problems minus you bitches.,

still livin' in the past like my old, racist grandma' ass
damn, you know i had. yeah, you know i had to tell em,
could do this shit on acapella, so u can hear me better
still ain't gettin through to em', guess i'll never have clearance ever,

and when i blow up i-know-ill-get-the-dear-john-letters
i know ill get ur correspondence, like keep droppin' the raw shit
lame, turn around infront of the mirror, bend over
and slam ur ass against the pane and fuck yourself,i love when they shout

Ouu, i got the fire i know it. 11 years writing that poet-ic justice,
but it did no justice now i'm on that dumb shit,
most rappers fall off in the midsection i did my crunches
most rappers never change while i stay misplacin' my luggage

most rappers here don't even rap they write the gayness
shit i would be embarsd to say that shit on stages, i'd be embarsd,
if i wasted my best years, gettin' weird not gettin' money,
power and respect of my peers, too many intellectuals here,

success just aint logical, no action comes from unsatisfaction,
that ain't possible, that ain't what got the greats to their place, that ain't,
what got em' in mags, videos and benj frank's face in their banks,
face it you either ain't or you are, and alot of you aren't,

im just here to show you what you could never start.,
what you were never a part of, i'll be forever a martyer,
they'll put a pic of my face on the main page and claim they lead em' to stardom,
u can put my poster in ur room and throw darts at it,
n at night you can shoot cum shards at it,

faggit, you know i nailed it. you know i sara palin'd this bitch
you know it ain't the brains it's the way that you spit,
you know it, you know you ain't made for this shit,
you know one day soon ill get paid for this shit,
while you slave for minimum wage diggin' your grave 8-6

come, ride on this dick. slide on this canadian chopper
get u screamin' louder than exhaust pipes or maybe an opera,
you're all invited when i blow up, keep entertaining the offer,
just know, you gonna have a seat at the front when i stunt,

im the fuckin' zen iron man, i got palladium chakras
with a freaky yoga bitch in the back with a retractable kunt,
mannnn, i dont know what im sayin at this point
spark up this joint, im too lazy to body ya' just hop in my trunk,
and let me drive off of this jump

suck

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[Just Write]

Lulz

[DexLabb]

he hehehe heuheuh, dont tell ur friends u like me just tell me directly bitch

[DexLabb]

damn im HOT. everybody look at me. i got FIRE. im HOT FIYA

[Ghost1]

Sorry boss

[DexLabb]

cant hear u talking from the trunk homie

[King Ra.]

The fuck did I just read?

[Eŋg]

i'd love to hear this on wax!

[DexLabb]

Ra, bro. i used the term 'retractable kunt'. dont tell me you dont feel me.

[Ghost1]

You will get them next time!

[DexLabb]

Love slammin ur wet twat bro^

[Split]

http://forums.oce.leagueoflegends.com/board/attachment.php?attachmentid=2272&d=1375435728

[DexLabb]

u should be nicer bud, im gonna be representing u miserable bastards when im on. none of u will ever make it, its up to me so show love

[Ghost1]

Is there a big market for written text raps accompanied by youtube video instrumentals in the industry currently?

[Mike Wrecka]

someday this guy is gonna be famous

because he is going to record one day , and let me tell you, the first thing he lays down on a track is going platinum

guaranteed

[DexLabb]

i suppose its bigger than the market for socially unaccepted weird ass scripture rap written by repressed angry enraged homosexuals with aspergers

[DexLabb]

Michael thanks for the love, sarcastic love is still love

[Just Write]

Ak needs to ban you already

[DexLabb]

BAN DIS GUY HE AINT GAY LIKE ME!

[Just Write]

Lmao @ this kid just sittin at his computer pressing f5 all day so he don't miss a response

[Witty]

i suppose its bigger than the market for socially unaccepted weird ass scripture rap written by repressed angry enraged homosexuals with aspergers

Not really, it is precisely the same.

Gayness and embarassed doesn't rhyme.

The rhymes in general were very basic tbh you did ok tho.

[DexLabb]

i rhymed gayness with stages and wasted, its cause with an audio verse hard to keep things line for line like written word. u gotta keep things basic for mainstream, i should post a vid of j cole talking bout transitioning from complex to simple gotta find it

[DexLabb]

alot of people dont know j cole used to write raps on message boards, but around 3:30 onthis vid he gets into it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rQ_zaLu9iSg

[Split]

Is there a big market for written text raps accompanied by youtube video instrumentals in the industry currently?

1shot1kill

[DexLabb]

i cant keep up with the retard paradigm you guys have on the world, like ur shit is hot. so pathetic

[Mitch]

Dex your style doesn't mesh well with these guys, but you aren't bad. this was alright.

[DexLabb]

thanks man i respect that ^

[Ghost1]

thanks man i respect that ^

If you are older then 18 i will never feed y9ur pieces again.....

C9nfirm or deny

[DexLabb]

^word man...word...

[Ghost1]

So.......you are older?

[DexLabb]

im a university student if i wanted to use the right diction i would bro. but theres something you need to understand. your a lightweight. 10,000 posts means nothing your not a heavy weight like i am. i used the "u" and "embrsed" diction because thats the way fracture did it back on bboys.com way before you. thats where text game began was with him and others similar. most of u dont know anythen about that the origin or anything, your late to the party by a few years and i can tell by your writing and your attitude. u just dont get it

[DexLabb]

but even they had it wrong, because they only had half the equation. they had the right idea, but they hid behind a computer screen and an avatar and never embraced the true beauty of music because there was no music, just words

[Fig]

but even they had it wrong, because they only had half the equation. they had the right idea, but they hid behind a computer screen and an avatar and never embraced the true beauty of music because there was no music, just words

You're not making music either

But listen

Every site has its own style that it prefers, the OM on this site just happens to lean towards a style that is a little less hip hop than most. I rap too man. But I don't rap the majority of the things a put up on here. They are works all on their own having little relation to hip hop besides the rhyming.

If you don't like it, fine, it's just not your steeze, but we're not the be all end all here. Don't fight with the people on this site because they don't recognize the ability in your drops, just be about it.

That's about as reasonable as I can get

[Ghost1]

im a university student if i wanted to use the right diction i would bro. but theres something you need to understand. your a lightweight. 10,000 posts means nothing your not a heavy weight like i am. i used the "u" and "embrsed" diction because thats the way fracture did it back on bboys.com way before you. thats where text game began was with him and others similar. most of u dont know anythen about that the origin or anything, your late to the party by a few years and i can tell by your writing and your attitude. u just dont get it

So....you are older?

[DexLabb]

i am making music, im on my way to doing it. this retard scripture universe turned me to ashes, its only right that i start here

[Ghost1]

So.....you are older?

[Witty]

i am making music, im on my way to doing it. this retard scripture universe turned me to ashes, its only right that i start here

Why don't you just make music?

I'm pretty sure that's the best way to make music.

[DexLabb]

hip hop music requires sound and words, thats what im doing here. finding my identity

[Ghost1]

How old

[Zen]

I'm gonna leave you genuine feed. No troll, this was nothing special. The rhymes were very basic and the flow was predictable. If you want to rap, then write your verse to a specific beat that you choose and then practice your delivery. Add inner rhymes to break the monotony, and add multis and metaphors and such. Because as I see this now, and god don't get offended again, I can tell your just beginning and trying to find your style.

Allot of guys here could give you great pointers on executing what you're trying to do, which is rap, but if you disagree with everyone who says you're not good then why would they waste their time? You say none of us will ever make it rapping, but really none of us want to. What we DO know is how to write. Listen to real advice, and please stop being obnoxious when someone says something negative. Seriously. Peace.

[Zen]

I'm gonna leave you genuine feed. No troll, this was nothing special. The rhymes were very basic and the flow was predictable. If you want to rap, then write your verse to a specific beat that you choose and then practice your delivery. Add inner rhymes to break the monotony, and add multis and metaphors and such. Because as I see this now, and god don't get offended again, I can tell your just beginning and trying to find your style.

Allot of guys here could give you great pointers on executing what you're trying to do, which is rap, but if you disagree with everyone who says you're not good then why would they waste their time? You say none of us will ever make it rapping, but really none of us want to. What we DO know is how to write. Listen to real advice, and please stop being obnoxious when someone says something negative. Seriously. Peace.

[DexLabb]

shut up idiot there are plenty of multi's. jesus fuck you guys are bad at this rap thing dont ever claim to me that you know how to write. and im not about to use big words for mainstream music, thats what makes you a LOSER. Tryna WIN. WIN WIN WIN. i respect the identity comment, that was correct

[Ghost1]

Aka i respect the feedback that agreed with me

[Split]

THIS CANT BE KENNY CEREALBOWL

PAPERS DAT U?

RORO SAID U DIED

RIP PAPER

[dead man]

shut up idiot there are plenty of multi's. jesus fuck you guys are bad at this rap thing dont ever claim to me that you know how to write. and im not about to use big words for mainstream music, thats what makes you a LOSER. Tryna WIN. WIN WIN WIN. i respect the identity comment, that was correct
You gots to be trollin boss. Lol

[DexLabb]

lol only half. yo, i dont see anybody picking apart the latest justin beiber song

[Ghost1]

Sure. I can see the comparison. Good point.

[DexLabb]

who are you having a discussion with bro, damn. ur like a vulture scavenging conversations^

[Ghost1]

That literally makes no sense.

Tell me how old u are.

[DexLabb]

c-caw- caw, c-caw

[Ghost1]

Tell me

[Fig]

http://cloudfront.dementlieu.com/users/obik/bigblack/discog/images/headache13.jpg

[Fig]

http://www.documentingreality.com/forum/attachments/f10/163143d1273263976-autopsy-murder-victim-india-goery.jpg

[Ghost1]

Dont do that


Stop lookin qt stuff like that.


This is not reddit.

[Fig]

Dont do that


Stop lookin qt

Bags please, not in front of the children

[DexLabb]

alright but what actually happened to the second guy damn

[Allen Knight]

BAN DIS GUY HE AINT GAY LIKE ME!

So ur saying ur gay?

[Ghost1]

Good point


Answer?

[DexLabb]

come suck on these nuts everythen gonna be fine allan knight

[Geno]

dsfgdsfg

[YDK]

lol only half. yo, i dont see anybody picking apart the latest justin beiber song

that's because beiber didn't post this here