FGR 2-0 vs Pryde 2-2 FGR WINS

[Defiant]

AOB 1-2 Punch


Rules

Due Dates:
Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST.
Voting will end when a clear winner i determined
There will be 2 battles a week
No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all.




General Rules:
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a bar.
FGR Pryde

[FGR]

Check

[Greed]

Fgr wish he was like Pryde and could talk a bitch from lars country back to venice
Instead Its always son e'n in philedelphia with dudes named charlie mac and dennis

[FGR]

i went to see pry in the club spittin rhymes..figured i'd give dude a shot
and i admit his verse moved me.......out the door to my car in the parking lot

[FGR]

..........

[Utmost]

v/FGR

I know what pryde was aiming for, i just feel like the wording could of been better, FGR had a cool punch. the concepts been done but i liked the cheekiness of it anyway

[Atomic]

Prydes wordplay doesn't make sense, if he would have put Son E'n Philadelphia that would have been Sunny in Philadelphia but the extra in kills it. FGR on the other hand had a cool concept but I didn't think the flip was solid @ all.

Overall FGR takes it though, cool attempts for both. peace

[SiK]

V/FGR

[BROKE LESNAR]

I liked Pryde's concept more than FGR's. I thought he executed it poorly, though. FGR on the otherhand had a much more polished delivery, but his concept lacked originality and felt too generic. Tough decision to make. Concept over delivery. Delivery over concept. Have to go with Pryde here.

V-Pryde

[Defiant]

3-1 upppppp

[Meth]

wording on prydes was no good. dope concept but i hated the wording and it killed it for me. FGRs was extrememly simple but worded and executed bout as good as it could be. So for that...

V/ FGR