Edgar AlPo 3-3 vs Rayge 3-1 - EDGAR WINS

[Defiant]

AOB 1-2 Punch


Rules

Due Dates:
Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST.
Voting will end when a clear winner i determined
There will be 2 battles a week
No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all.




General Rules:
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a bar.
Edgar AlPo Rayge

[Maximus]

Word

[Chyeahhh!!!]

My cherry dumpling is very scrumptious ,catch me buried in her onion
While any lady of rayges can pass........ for an extra in necessary roughness

[Maximus]

U're a clone, far from gangstar. You aint a gat blaster
so no one calls Ed OG.. when he's just a faker trynna act like that rapper

[Spoken]

rayge tha referance was worded poorly and which pissed me off a little honestly cause it was set up good and was building then it fell flat sorry.... Alpo i thought that necessary roughness bar was pretty tight... comes off a tad forced with the NP in it but it came out strong and solid

[Atomic]

^ u forgot to vote.

v/ edgar, both bars were okay/simple. just felt edgars bar connected slightly more/better concept. cool bars guys.

[Utmost]

Both had solid nameplays, i think the necessary roughness was worded a bit weird but the punch was still there. Rayge had a better setup, but the punch fell flat to me. I got
Edgar takin it

[Defiant]

2-0 upppppp

[Meth]

I have cheayyyyyyyyyhhhhhhhh. I wasn't feeling Rayge's. Felt that edgar could have had better wording but his bar was still solid.