R!canTheoryz 0-1 vs Serious 0-0 RICAN WINS

[Defiant]

AOB 1-2 Punch


Rules

Due Dates:
Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST.
Voting will end when a clear winner i determined
There will be 2 battles a week
No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all.




General Rules:
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a bar.
R!canTheoryz Serious

[Spoken]

Blast from the past watch this bitch get scar'd on camera,
Last time we gave a fuck about a Rican theory S'from tony montana

[R!canTheoryz]

Sadly we don't pink slip matches anymore read the personal imma Land on clown,
cuz all we know right after serious is a death note, meaning YOU SHOULD BE BANNED BY NOW !!

[Atomic]

okay flip by serious, since every nameplay on rican has been done. punch was dece/wording was meh though.

rican, your punch was okay w/ the pink slip/death note personal/flip but it didn't really hit that hard & the connection with the punch was meh..

v/ serious, barely. for a better punch.

[FGR]

v-rican i thought his punch hit harder..the tony line didnt do nothing for me

[Utmost]

Seen a bunch of tony montana/rican flips.. Rican was a bit stretched in his wording but like the attempt on a personal. Both punches lacked sting. Serious was a lil choppy leadin into the punch and Rican was a bit longwinded with his.

i dunno its a tossup really, but i think Rican edges it based on what he was tryin to do with the punch, whereas Serious had it laid out no 'ah ha' moment

[SiK]

V/Rican

Serious was bland

[Allen Knight]

v/rican, his was a lil better

[BROKE LESNAR]

I have to go with Rican here, although tbh I was greatly unimpressed by the creativity of both bars. Serious more so. Rican struggled constructing a clear and concise bar that delivered theatrically. The first line was prolix, leaving his finisher to follow-up on a very choppy setup. No disrespect to either of you.

VOTE = Rican

[Spoken]

thanks guys for the tips im new to this shit so bare with it homies


thanks R!canTheoryz for the match