I'll Be Okay

[Mitch]

Wicked and flaming,
Sickly untamed.
Pitch me a drink.
I'll be okay.
I'm not alone.

Wicker and human.
Sickly and Truman.
Pinch me, i'm drooling.
I'll be cooler.
I'm not alone.

I'm all alone.
I'm half empty.
I'm calling you home.
I'm that empty.

I'm all alone.
I'm half tempting.
I'm calling your phone.
I'm that emcee.

I'm not alone.
Sick of the games.
Pitch for the flames.

Sick of the words
Pitch me your curves.
I'll be okay.

Wicks too slow
Sickly adored.
Pinch me a score.
I'll be reborn.
I'm not okay.

I'm all alone.
I'm half tempting.
I'm calling you out.
I'm that empty.

[DexLabb]

you mentioned being "that emcee" so correct me if im wrong but you wanna rap? if so, the last thing you should be doing is this scripture stuff...try something more main stream. i know this is completely against the grain, but thats why its the truth

[Mitch]

Dex chill there are many different styles to rap, i'm not going to stay trapped in whatever box you define 'rap' is, but if you have some constructive feed, feel free to post that and i'll take it serious.

[Witty]

you mentioned being "that emcee" so correct me if im wrong but you wanna rap? if so, the last thing you should be doing is this scripture stuff...try something more main stream. i know this is completely against the grain, but thats why its the truth

lol @ telling him to go mainstream and then say i know this is completely against the grain.

I lol'd irl.

[Split]

good shit man. practicing keeping your stuff constrained, simple, straightforward every once in awhile allows you to come across with wayy more complex ideas that readers/ listeners will actually pick up on.

[DexLabb]

your telling this guy this shit was good? holy fuck your world is upside down. witty against the grain of this forum. cause this forum will turn you into a troll that writes on scrolls and masterbates to egyptian gods. of course its against the grain. u dudes are brainwashed into thinking you write dope shit. u write garbage

[Split]

at least its our garbage. how is sniffing the dick tissues of every rapper that was moderately close to making it brah? no one here tryna rap lol dumbass lol

[DexLabb]

your garbage? like you have strength in numbers from being wack? thats like a bunch of mongoloids going "at least were sexy together." just dosent make sense, your a dumb ass

[Split]

Hm. I guess I've never looked at it like that. This has been a productive and enjoyable exchange of ideas. Thanks man.

[Fig]

your garbage? like you have strength in numbers from being wack? thats like a bunch of mongoloids going "at least were sexy together." just dosent make sense, your a dumb ass

You know, I see your side of things now. I was wrong before. I apologize.

[Witty]

DexLabb

That was a compelling argument.

You are right.

[DexLabb]

the trolls man

[Witty]

Dex ducks desperately departing depressed during dangerous digressive discursions dictating doomed desires.

[DexLabb]

alright that was impressive maybe you should write an audio book

[Witty]

I WILL THANK YOU.