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trap.
01-24-2013, 10:09 PM
posted on 01-04-2005

Vick Tury

Did this mad quick.


i drink beer after work to come home and fight, it’s pleasin
to get drunk and beat my wife, for no reason
i brutalize ladies, i rape woman
i watch kiddie porn, and rape childeren
cut my wrists, with any object that i can
to see the length of the slit, as my life span
i eat human flesh, sorry is what im tellin him
while having tea, with his skeleton
rape any mammal, and proceed to harm mandibles
sexual scapegoat, is to have sex with farm animals
i lick babies assholes, its nasty but in it is
the way i can take back, some false sense of innocence
my family treated me like shit, made me a punk - fool
but home is where my heart is along w/my mothers, brothers & uncles
yet i have no need for psychiatrist, im not far gone
how could anyone even consider this wrong
when really i’m not even a psycho, nor have i formed a plan
the chilling truth is i’m a very average . . normal man


Blahzay blah.

vs.

TeNk

Eyes wide open, as I stare at white walls of the wardroom
Mind’s hoping for sleep but injections got me staring at the roof
I’m scared of what happened…that I’ve became insane
It’s been 2 years since I was imprisoned here, the middle lane
Between the living and the dead, and I can’t go either way
Dreaming nothing but ghosts and only hope’s to pray
Been 8 days now, since I haven’t slept, just staring straight
Doctors and nurses try to make me eat but I’m not taking the bait
I know sooner or later, death’s hand’ll touch my shoulder
But until then, life’s forcing me to repeat my nightmares
While society lives paradise, I face reality’s wrought
Been insane for so long, I’m running out of thoughts…
The sound of the door claps open but I disregard it...
A lady comes to the door /w a swingin clock, a shrink...
bringing chair to sit in front of me, waving her clock to my lids
Suddenly feeling drowsy and inside, I collapse…with a blurry vision

“Mr. Johnson? Are you O.K, sir? You just fainted right on the floor, do you need medical help? I’ll bring a nurse right over, hold on sir.”

My ears seem to play the music of a beautiful voice
I slowly opened my eyes and saw the same ward choice
It was a nightmare, the same experience I faced 2 years spent
I couldn't even move a muscle, and my heart was tense
Was somehow in the past when I was first admitted in
Reliving my pains was my life and what was destined…

“Mr. Johnson, here are the papers to sign to be admitted to this room for the next 60 years of your life, please sign it or you will have admission to the county prison”


that's 22 lines, vote up y'all

edit some words, mispelled

Tenk wins.