yung fe vs. Rap Maestro {Yung Fe wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

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yung fe Rap Maestro


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Verses are due Tuesday,
June 11th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
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[yung fe]

my nigga yu aint shit im da man
yu a maestro yeah yu use 2 sticks in yuh hand
trill talk yu aint got dem hammas g
yung fe i got mo choppas den da sons of anarchy
u trya be bout it i give g lessons
maestro i carry mo metal den yuh brass sectoin
streets i dust yu faj give dis nigga a l
i smack yu in smack nigga yu battle on a url
get da win fe da greatest eva
yu eazy like madden wid my lil brotha

aint nuttin aight

[Rap Maestro]

Young Fe.. You can blow all u like/
but i'll leave u with a handkerchief.. While I throw all the strike/
even this kid want to stand up to me/
but like a professional butcher, i'll dissect all ur gland up for meal/
never saw a fool like him/
with his rants.. You'll think he want to exorcise a beast with a tool of a hymn/
but i'll be merciful to castrate this fagg/
so that he can have Ill nik back him up by impersonating his bag/
but i'll leave him teethless like he tried eating a ceramic muffin/
i'll just Murd him..
so that Like egyptian Pharaoh, he'll get interned in a pyramid coffin//


MAESTRO

[R!canTheoryz]

Vote - Rap Maestro. For obvious Reasons. smh

[ill nik-A]

Roflz this is what I have to get ready for?!?!
Rap Maestro

[Rap Maestro]

Nah.. This is an improvement.. Urs will be a murder. Lol

[Atomic]

Both of the verses were absolute fire, honestly big ups to both of them. When it came down to it though, I feel that yung fe BARELY came harder. Much props to both though I think both of them were very dope.

Peace.

[Flow]

WTF is this?!

[Sharp]

my nigga yu aint shit im da man
yu a maestro yeah yu use 2 sticks in yuh hand
its only 1... but this was a basic nameflip that wasn't excecuted well. alright attempt
trill talk yu aint got dem hammas g
yung fe i got mo choppas den da sons of anarchy
lol decent wordplay but its more of a boast than anything else
u trya be bout it i give g lessons
maestro i carry mo metal den yuh brass sectoin
prolly your best nameplay but wasnt turned into a punch
streets i dust yu faj give dis nigga a l
i smack yu in smack nigga yu battle on a url
lmao actually alright assciative wordplay kinda punch
get da win fe da greatest eva
yu eazy like madden wid my lil brotha
way too basic


Young Fe.. You can blow all u like/
but i'll leave u with a handkerchief.. While I throw all the strike/
if there was something here it didnt come out. i see the blow - hankerchief association but it wasnt the punch
even this kid want to stand up to me/
but like a professional butcher, i'll dissect all ur gland up for meal/
really basic. 'this like this' kinda stuff is probably the most basic kind of punch and has to be good to hit
never saw a fool like him/
with his rants.. You'll think he want to exorcise a beast with a tool of a hymn/
seemed to be just rhyming stuff... not a big punch
but i'll be merciful to castrate this fagg/
so that he can have Ill nik back him up by impersonating his bag/
Bags/bag is played to hell, and this wasnt as much of a punch as a nika reference... didnt really do much
but i'll leave him teethless like he tried eating a ceramic muffin/
i'll just Murd him..
so that Like egyptian Pharaoh, he'll get interned in a pyramid coffin//
I see what you were going for but murd isnt murder... ionno. didnt hit for me but was your strongest attempt



tough call lmao. it was close, but i actually think yung fe had attempts that were closer to hitting so i have to edge it to him... maestro really only had the formatting going for him tbh

V/ Yung Fe

[The Bully]

Everyone who voted other than Sharp, please never vote on my battles.
Thank you.

Maestro's shit must make sense to some diseased minds, but sounds like english aint ur native tongue or something. Nothing connected.

I remember a dude on Prowlers who used to write kinda like Fe...
Not similar word choice or spelling...
But short bars like that, still kind of nice though.

my nigga yu aint shit im da man
yu a maestro yeah yu use 2 sticks in yuh hand
u trya be bout it i give g lessons
maestro i carry mo metal den yuh brass sectoin

Those two were both pretty cool to me.
The rest wasn't great but enough to win.

Fe...if you wanna know how to write your shit in the format people on here will like better hit me up G. If you're not an alias.

V/ Fe

[Flow]

Right.....

The vote goes to yung fe and my reasons are as follows....



my nigga yu aint shit im da man
yu a maestro yeah yu use 2 sticks in yuh hand
Failed Attempt - Attempt none the less
trill talk yu aint got dem hammas g
yung fe i got mo choppas den da sons of anarchy
No Punch
u trya be bout it i give g lessons
maestro i carry mo metal den yuh brass sectoin
No Punch
streets i dust yu faj give dis nigga a l
i smack yu in smack nigga yu battle on a url
Lol Man your grasp of the English language is shocking - this was poor but an attempt non the less
get da win fe da greatest eva
yu eazy like madden wid my lil brotha
Just...No

aint nuttin aight - I agree

Young Fe.. You can blow all u like/
but i'll leave u with a handkerchief.. While I throw all the strike/
Basic Concept but with no punch - not sure if this even gets called an Attempt...
even this kid want to stand up to me/
but like a professional butcher, i'll dissect all ur gland up for meal/
This didn't even rhyme ffs - there was an attempt but it was whack
never saw a fool like him/
with his rants.. You'll think he want to exorcise a beast with a tool of a hymn/
What?
but i'll be merciful to castrate this fagg/
so that he can have Ill nik back him up by impersonating his bag/
Mentioning other members doesn't get you brownie points
but i'll leave him teethless like he tried eating a ceramic muffin/
i'll just Murd him..
so that Like egyptian Pharaoh, he'll get interned in a pyramid coffin//
urgh...read that back to yourself and tell me if you feel insulted scared hurt stung whatever just ugh NO


MAESTRO - Matt.....Damon



That is my reasoning for Fe getting it - whack battle - but fe had the attempts and was fresh in the sense that...well no one else here writes like that

[Atomic]

"aight nuttin aight - I agree."

hahahahahahahaaahahahaahhahaa

[Meth]

my nigga yu aint shit im da man
yu a maestro yeah yu use 2 sticks in yuh hand

not really


trill talk yu aint got dem hammas g
yung fe i got mo choppas den da sons of anarchy

no...


u trya be bout it i give g lessons
maestro i carry mo metal den yuh brass sectoin

ughhh


streets i dust yu faj give dis nigga a l
i smack yu in smack nigga yu battle on a url

lol kind of dope for you i guess, better wording could have made this a punch of the week candidate

get da win fe da greatest eva
yu eazy like madden wid my lil brotha

no...

aint nuttin aight

Young Fe.. You can blow all u like/
but i'll leave u with a handkerchief.. While I throw all the strike/

wtf... stop.


even this kid want to stand up to me/
but like a professional butcher, i'll dissect all ur gland up for meal/

doesnt even rhyme son


never saw a fool like him/
with his rants.. You'll think he want to exorcise a beast with a tool of a hymn/

what


but i'll be merciful to castrate this fagg/
so that he can have Ill nik back him up by impersonating his bag/

...........
best attempt tho, tbh

but i'll leave him teethless like he tried eating a ceramic muffin/
i'll just Murd him..
so that Like egyptian Pharaoh, he'll get interned in a pyramid coffin//

im really glad this is over


MAESTRO


Fe was much better, both were bad. Fe had better attempts he at least had some attempts at some witty punches