Xnub vs. FGR {FGR wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

Xnub FGR

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Tuesday,
June 11th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Friday June 14th at 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
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Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 36 hours
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Line Limit:

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Max. = 16 lines
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1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
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A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
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Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[FGR]

10

[Xnub]

I'll match

[Xnub]

u from philly right?..O, like.. the playground, where u was born n' raised...
more like.. the place where this fresh "prince" had 2 pops and it was the norm to be gay.
Well look, FGR.. no one here gives a fuck what u rep man..
..n' I'd say X was sonnin' em'... but this young bucks already n' need of less dad.
So no apologies 4 bars when that's the most effective way ta get the point through..
I guess behind bars ur dad might have time to realize how effective the doll was the point to.
..but honestly, after all those long nights alone w/ father.... thinking ur a threats sad...
I mean, the closest u ever been to pussy, pussy... was on craiglist, replying to a sex ad....
..but fuck all that knuck shit player, X about real talk, u know.. like, all facts.
..n' trust when I say this guy'll JUMP, at any occasion to tie his dick n' his balls back.

[FGR]

i wrote this way t5o quick..probably gonna lose

xnub's SC verse was trash, your concepts aren't skilled dude
now every1 thinks ur suicidal, how bad Celph killed you
i'll crush your skulls kid..shatter your dome w/ a pair of tims
and put a end to nub faster then amputees receiving prosthetic limbs
no chance u'll beat me lightweight. i wouldn't feel u being blind dude
cuz in this battle.... your more outnumbered then infinity x2
I stomp the shit outta weak bitches...n this frail fuck is softer then blubber
watch me march over dude, it'll take apirl may and june for his ass to recover
even your regular battles suck...every1 on netcees is merkin this prick
xnub got a terrible immune system..well atleast doesn't do well against SiK

[FGR]

..........

[~RustyGunZ~]

Nothing

Vs

Amputees and celph

V/fgr

[Sharp]

nothing, whole thing with dads was drawn out and statementish

v

i'll crush your skulls kid..shatter your dome w/ a pair of tims
and put a end to nub faster then amputees receiving prosthetic limbs


celph and sik ideas were cool but done eh


fgr got this pretty easily. xnub, hit the tutoring section

v/fgr

[Boredom]

mvgt fgr. xnub didn't really have anything that landed.

[Swerve]

Xnub almost looked like he was setting up for a decent punch and then ended up making a statement every single time. FGR dropped half ass and took this convincingly by a mile.

Vote - FGR

[Scripter]

u from philly right?..O, like.. the playground, where u was born n' raised...
more like.. the place where this fresh "prince" had 2 pops and it was the norm to be gay.

The Will Smith metaphor is kinda out dated and gay punches are a dime a dozen.

Well look, FGR.. no one here gives a fuck what u rep man..
..n' I'd say X was sonnin' em'... but this young bucks already n' need of less dad.

This punch was okay but again you are recycling gay jokes.

So no apologies 4 bars when that's the most effective way ta get the point through..
I guess behind bars ur dad might have time to realize how effective the doll was the point to.

I don't even get this shit. Is this a reference to Eminem?
your punch seems kinda weak

..but honestly, after all those long nights alone w/ father.... thinking ur a threats sad...

The setup on this bar really didn't relate to your punch below

I mean, the closest u ever been to pussy, pussy... was on craiglist, replying to a sex ad....

This was probably your best punch so far

..but fuck all that knuck shit player, X about real talk, u know.. like, all facts.
..n' trust when I say this guy'll JUMP, at any occasion to tie his dick n' his balls back.

This punch was okay but again it didn't really relate to the setup line.

Over all your subject and word play were kinda basic



xnub's SC verse was trash, your concepts aren't skilled dude
now every1 thinks ur suicidal, how bad Celph killed you

This bar was okay no real jaw shattering punches

i'll crush your skulls kid..shatter your dome w/ a pair of tims
and put a end to nub faster then amputees receiving prosthetic limbs

This bar was again okay the punch was better then in the first bar.

no chance u'll beat me lightweight. i wouldn't feel u being blind dude
cuz in this battle.... your more outnumbered then infinity x2

This time the setup line was better then the punch, but they didn't seem to relate to each other

I stomp the shit outta weak bitches...n this frail fuck is softer then blubber
watch me march over dude, it'll take apirl may and june for his ass to recover

This would of been some good word play if structured better. For example
I stomp the shit outta weak bitches...this frail fucker is softer then blubber
watch me march over dude, it'll take all summer
it'll take apirl may and june for his ass to recover

even your regular battles suck...every1 on netcees is merkin this prick
xnub got a terrible immune system..well atleast doesn't do well against SiK

This punch was sloppy and drawn out



Overall I would say that FGR had better punches and word play

[Meth]

u from philly right?..O, like.. the playground, where u was born n' raised...
more like.. the place where this fresh "prince" had 2 pops and it was the norm to be gay.
--corny as fuck lol.--
Well look, FGR.. no one here gives a fuck what u rep man..
..n' I'd say X was sonnin' em'... but this young bucks already n' need of less dad.
--parents are gay punch? i think... this wasnt very clear.--
So no apologies 4 bars when that's the most effective way ta get the point through..
I guess behind bars ur dad might have time to realize how effective the doll was the point to.
--ur extrmely confusing--
..but honestly, after all those long nights alone w/ father.... thinking ur a threats sad...
I mean, the closest u ever been to pussy, pussy... was on craiglist, replying to a sex ad....
--no good--
..but fuck all that knuck shit player, X about real talk, u know.. like, all facts.
..n' trust when I say this guy'll JUMP, at any occasion to tie his dick n' his balls back
--what.--

i wrote this way t5o quick..probably gonna lose

xnub's SC verse was trash, your concepts aren't skilled dude
now every1 thinks ur suicidal, how bad Celph killed you
--good concept but bad wording--
i'll crush your skulls kid..shatter your dome w/ a pair of tims
and put a end to nub faster then amputees receiving prosthetic limbs
--same as the last--
no chance u'll beat me lightweight. i wouldn't feel u being blind dude
cuz in this battle.... your more outnumbered then infinity x2
--ok--
I stomp the shit outta weak bitches...n this frail fuck is softer then blubber
watch me march over dude, it'll take apirl may and june for his ass to recover
--nah--
even your regular battles suck...every1 on netcees is merkin this prick
xnub got a terrible immune system..well atleast doesn't do well against SiK
--played and too obvious--

V/ FGR he was much better, clever, and harder hitting.