Shank Sinatra vs. Untold {Shank Sinatra wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

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Shank Sinatra Untold

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Tuesday,
June 11th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Friday June 14th at 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 36 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.



Voting:

Must vote on 5 battles and post your links.
Post the links in the thread titled "Week 7 Voting Links".
You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links.
You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you
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General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.

[Untold]

here

[Boredom]

yeup, 10-12

[Boredom]

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will edit in real verse if you show, im going to bed tho

[Untold]

Ext?

[Boredom]

10 sent to Seth Scheinberg Untold.

[Untold]

Shanks ear's to the streets, fearin the heat. denouncin the block
cuz Sinatra's rat pack, are a bunch of snitches that run their mouths to cops
its been a while but this pedofile's accomps a brittle list
cuz who would'a Knew, b could tournament into bait to pickin up little kids
last week, knuck had ya ass beat. now the summer's gon burn to
but this week u've Mett ur match, n Joe won't need one to easily burn you
listen n learn, dude! LDB's bein generous gettin him in there
yet its no surprise u made the crew cuts, n thats how this queer trims his hair
i'll hate smack ya. Sin sear? nah! this fags a plain rapper
theres NO way that Sin'll be straightforward, cuz bein gay's backwards

[Boredom]

ur only credible wins have been robberies for the paaast while..
ya text career has been such a pathetic stumble it makes 2chainz look agile.
and the way u’ve made out thus far…it should be down played
cuz ur barley mid tier fagg0t n even THAT can be debated in the thread gow made.
it’s fact I’m nice. when i'm on the road i'm fucking groupies living that lavish life..
if ur on the road i hope there is on coming traffic and ur wearing all black at night.
u never get that pussy son, i could steal ya broad in an instant lil nigga
and the way u’d watch that pink sliiip away it’d resemble a battle w/ u vs ill-nika.
i’ve bin fresh, ur trailer park trash w/ deformities that’ve peaked an interest
the only reason u claim the LDB is cause u come from a looong line of incest.

[Allen Knight]

Shanks ear's to the streets, fearin the heat. denouncin the block
cuz Sinatra's rat pack, are a bunch of snitches that run their mouths to cops
last week, knuck had ya ass beat. now the summer's gon burn to
but this week u've Mett ur match, n Joe won't need one to easily burn you

vs

ur only credible wins have been robberies for the paaast while..
ya text career has been such a pathetic stumble it makes 2chainz look agile.
and the way u’ve made out thus far…it should be down played
cuz ur barley mid tier fagg0t n even THAT can be debated in the thread gow made.
it’s fact I’m nice. when i'm on the road i'm fucking groupies living that lavish life..
if ur on the road i hope there is on coming traffic and ur wearing all black at night.

V/shank, close battle both had some good shit, untold match line was dope tbh, but i think shank was just more consistent here i likes the 2 chainz bar this can go either way but i think shank took this, good battle yah'll props.

[Atomic]

Shanks ear's to the streets, fearin the heat. denouncin the block
cuz Sinatra's rat pack, are a bunch of snitches that run their mouths to cops
meh
its been a while but this pedofile's accomps a brittle list
cuz who would'a Knew, b could tournament into bait to pickin up little kids
lol eh
last week, knuck had ya ass beat. now the summer's gon burn to
but this week u've Mett ur match, n Joe won't need one to easily burn you
nice
listen n learn, dude! LDB's bein generous gettin him in there
yet its no surprise u made the crew cuts, n thats how this queer trims his hair
haha, poor wording but cool
i'll hate smack ya. Sin sear? nah! this fags a plain rapper
theres NO way that Sin'll be straightforward, cuz bein gay's backwards
heh, okay

//

ur only credible wins have been robberies for the paaast while..
ya text career has been such a pathetic stumble it makes 2chainz look agile.
okay
and the way u’ve made out thus far…it should be down played
cuz ur barley mid tier fagg0t n even THAT can be debated in the thread gow made.
so simple
it’s fact I’m nice. when i'm on the road i'm fucking groupies living that lavish life..
if ur on the road i hope there is on coming traffic and ur wearing all black at night.
lmaoooooooo cool
u never get that pussy son, i could steal ya broad in an instant lil nigga
and the way u’d watch that pink sliiip away it’d resemble a battle w/ u vs ill-nika.
heh, dece
i’ve bin fresh, ur trailer park trash w/ deformities that’ve peaked an interest
the only reason u claim the LDB is cause u come from a looong line of incest.
haha aight.

cool battle. v/ shank for being slightly more consistent. i enjoyed this battle.

[Sharp]

Shanks ear's to the streets, fearin the heat. denouncin the block
cuz Sinatra's rat pack, are a bunch of snitches that run their mouths to cops
last week, knuck had ya ass beat. now the summer's gon burn to
but this week u've Mett ur match, n Joe won't need one to easily burn you

rat pack was nice. knew b was a cool idea but kinda got lost, crew cut's pretty done.


ur only credible wins have been robberies for the paaast while..
ya text career has been such a pathetic stumble it makes 2chainz look agile.
and the way u’ve made out thus far…it should be down played
cuz ur barley mid tier fagg0t n even THAT can be debated in the thread gow made.
i’ve bin fresh, ur trailer park trash w/ deformities that’ve peaked an interest
the only reason u claim the LDB is cause u come from a looong line of incest.

pink slip's played. you did something a lil different with it but still kinda done


shank was more consistent, untold had a decent showing but shank managed to edge it out. dope battle guys

[Meth]

Shanks ear's to the streets, fearin the heat. denouncin the block
cuz Sinatra's rat pack, are a bunch of snitches that run their mouths to cops
--could have been cooler w/ better wording, but it hits none the less--
its been a while but this pedofile's accomps a brittle list
cuz who would'a Knew, b could tournament into bait to pickin up little kids
--ehhh... concept is weird and the wording was nothing to write home about, this had potential but i personally didnt like it--
last week, knuck had ya ass beat. now the summer's gon burn to
but this week u've Mett ur match, n Joe won't need one to easily burn you
--cool--
listen n learn, dude! LDB's bein generous gettin him in there
yet its no surprise u made the crew cuts, n thats how this queer trims his hair
--i dont personally see that as much as a diss, tbh--
i'll hate smack ya. Sin sear? nah! this fags a plain rapper
theres NO way that Sin'll be straightforward, cuz bein gay's backwards
--im missing something here

ur only credible wins have been robberies for the paaast while..
ya text career has been such a pathetic stumble it makes 2chainz look agile.
--haha--
and the way u’ve made out thus far…it should be down played
cuz ur barley mid tier fagg0t n even THAT can be debated in the thread gow made.
--ok--
it’s fact I’m nice. when i'm on the road i'm fucking groupies living that lavish life..
if ur on the road i hope there is on coming traffic and ur wearing all black at night.
--nah--
u never get that pussy son, i could steal ya broad in an instant lil nigga
and the way u’d watch that pink sliiip away it’d resemble a battle w/ u vs ill-nika.
--too played for my blood--
i’ve bin fresh, ur trailer park trash w/ deformities that’ve peaked an interest
the only reason u claim the LDB is cause u come from a looong line of incest.
--hahahaha dope--

Cool little battle. I wish both came more consistent but this was alright. I had quotes 2-1 and i liked Shank's misses better as well.

V/ Shank Sinatra