When I get to Heaven

[Dope girl]

When I get to heaven I'll sing the wondrous of love of God,
When I get to I'll sing his mercy.
When I get to Heaven I'll sing his grace,
He'll prepare a place for me.
When I get to Heaven a day of rejoicing will be,
When I get to Heaven I'll see God.
When I get to Heaven I'll shout for Victory!
When I get to Heaven I'll praise the Lord,
When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

[Meth]

HoF

[Sharp]

delivery reminds me of

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_Ua8iOR0g8

[Dope girl]

I'mma start writing more & longer lines, I'm an amazing writer... thanks for reading guys.

[Atomic]

Wow this was amazing, this deeply touched my soul. Thank you for sharing.

[Objective]

When I get to Heaven I'll see God.
^My fav line of your poem.

Holy fuck, this was some incredible piece of work. Thanks for sharing.

[Coup]

Stand behind me Satan!

I was liking this, believing you were sincerely praising and offering up humble love to Elohim of the heavens...

That is until I read your last line of course. Make no mistake, you are baring a deceptive false light.

When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

Reference:

2 Corinthians 11:14
Revelations 12:9

And...

Isaiah 14:12-14

12How art thou fallen from heaven, O Lucifer, son of the morning! how art thou cut down to the ground, which didst weaken the nations!

13For thou hast said in thine heart, I will ascend into heaven, I will exalt my throne above the stars of Elohim: I will sit also upon the mount of the congregation, in the sides of the north:

14I will ascend above the heights of the clouds; I will be like the most High.

Consider this a critique.


Or your last line

When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

Can mean to praise even harder and worship more.



Hard to tell. Otherwise this is a well thought out piece and is subtle in its softness. Good drop.

[KennyCerealBowl]

Do you have autism why wont you respond me you handicapped bitch

[Loose Logic]

cool poem type thing..

[Dope girl]

Don't be replying to my things with unnecessary questions, & thanks guys!

[Split]

Love ya girl, wanna write a hook for an upcoming collab I have???

[Dope girl]

love u too & yea.

[Coup]

haha, love this one...dead at my feedback.

[Dope girl]

thanks sweetheart.

[Ghost1]

Suspicion confirmed. Robranda is lucifer incarnate.