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DexLabb
05-23-2014, 07:42 PM
finally my first audio. recorded w macbook pro, mixed in garageband.
cant seem to get rid of that tin can type sound, dont know enough bout
mixing , check me out?

https://soundcloud.com/dexlabb/dreams-money-1

i went on a run last night
stare up at the clouds star light came down
clouds, blowin away. running through the city
mind jogging with all the ideas i never manifested. too stressed &
overprotected. no exposure, im the type to do it when its over
im the type to lose it when it won't hurt,
man, now im on a fuckin ride. cause i just lost it all
24 with no direction tryna' get a buzz on while im sober
oh well, better days. thats what we always say when we smile
and try to hide the pain for a while..
still writing for that better life. 'hell of a game
u can look me in both of my eyes, and tell me i changed
you can, fuck with me. but most ya'll won't
not until i made it to the big screen still on about jim beam
its crazy how people flip like a pancake,
when their position is conflicted in relation to your vision
and your doin' it different.
i feel my days are numbered, calendar on the cover
almanac on the chain with the special date i go under
when, your own heart is a place to discover
and you could have it all, the bugatti, estate & quail at ur suppers
tell me, why am i ashamed to say it to others?
they just wouldn't get it, hang my head mid sentence..
cant let this, guilt fill up like cement in my shoes
and drown me in a lake of things tht i never could do,
just don't.

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Pakistani Hand Cannon
06-18-2014, 10:36 PM
lmfao tags killin me

imma keep this short

this aint bad tbh,

not really my type of vibe, thats just what it is thouh but im not mad at it at all, needs work definately but i'd hope you already know that

delivery a lil soft, even for this type of track, buh thats not something you cant fix

cant be fucked to quote anything right now but couple lines partilcularly at the start i could appreciate, just from truthful perspective

no offence intended holmes buh take it how you want it

be easy #1

Kin
06-19-2014, 06:58 AM
See now this is a better way to post shit....respect for doin it most dudes afraid of their own voices...

If u need help with mixing or anything with recording hit me up I can help

Fell off beat a couple times but overall I think did a good enough job to get props

HoLLa

DexLabb
06-22-2014, 10:54 AM
dude these tags are killin me, i recorded it in an empty room. my other track on ther ewas in a closet full of clothes so im learning. thanks for the feedback dudes ^

Zen
06-22-2014, 01:17 PM
I put the next mac miller tag, but I didn't think this was bad.

DexLabb
06-22-2014, 03:11 PM
thanks man ^ had a feelin the mac miller comment maybe was you, you two do alot of scheming together according to that one comment ha ha