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Wise Wiggles
06-08-2014, 01:15 PM
Lost the will to talk to people. I'll dodge & weave you
Your logic's see through. This for the awkward & lethal. The costumes, the evils.
This the cave. You found calligraphy
This sounds like shit to me.
Heavens up there. But on the ground it's misery
And my worries still keep me alive
Life's a bitch and it's so easy to die
I don't even want release. It's calm. In reach
We share a common leaf? I just want to play in the autumn sheets
Do drugs to distance myself. It is a hell.
Burn it. It's linen, a shell..
I forget everything good. Just focus on bad
I'm being eaten. I love the locusts of sad
Hope is a drag.. Just drags on to oblivion
You're sexy. Swap saliva with tonic and vinegar
I mean, what's worth it? Shit's perfect til it's not
Then it rots and falls off. Gosh. Just mosh
Call me Tosh point Ways. I want to be your hot, moist glaze
I just want to blotch your coin phrase
The truth is overrated. It's stupid
Booty. Sober. Naked. It's all a movie
A motion, sacred.. Like what's strange?
You tough? Slave. Used to want to touch pain
The cuts, flames. Too much change.
This? Yeah. Heart just dripped down the love drain
Seriously. Lets talk. Having some trouble. Bed's gone
Later sleep. Read the blood that lays beneath this red chalk
Just chicken scratch. Running circles w/my head off
Time to press off. You've never been dead. Scoff
Think I give a fuck? Luck missed me, hella
The white hot. Fire just gets me wetter

Mitch
06-08-2014, 01:24 PM
I like the blunt style you've been using lately. It's real.

Neighbor
06-09-2014, 08:29 PM
This was smooth as hell

RD McFly
06-09-2014, 10:46 PM
Cool flow...simple but affective. Kinda melodramatic in a way with some cool multis. Maybe just a touch too depressing lol. Good shit man

Geno
06-10-2014, 01:29 PM
thought the first quarter was opretty dope. then it seemed to go off on some wierd rhyming words... probably was your point -but thought it slacked because of it. you seemed so much more focussed before. glad your more consistent now though. hopefully we can smash a collab out sooner than later

This the cave. You found calligraphy
This sounds like shit to me.
Heavens up there. But on the ground it's misery
And my worries still keep me alive
Life's a bitch and it's so easy to die

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dead man
06-11-2014, 12:21 AM
Lost the will to talk to people. I'll dodge & weave you

:/

Hope is a drag.. Just drags on to oblivion
You're sexy. Swap saliva with tonic and vinegar

yowzah.

lold at missed me, hella.


you never miss a beat. one of the few i'd read an entire notebook of random scribble for the scraps of gold. you gave me the idea in some thread weeks back to rent a boat with a decent-sized group and a more decent-sized pile of Christy. thanks.

really hoping things turn around for you dude. madness is repetition and you sound like someone in circles. you're extracting good-to-great rhyme work from these neurotic tendencies but at what cost? this just in - I'm the worst fucking hypocrite

be safe OG


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Frank
06-11-2014, 12:35 AM
Fucking your mom Tldr#

david stern razor burns
06-13-2014, 03:27 AM
Impressive Wise, you're really growing as a writer, i think that's very clear. Your pieces are so honest and you can always tell how you're feeling when you write them. Sounds like you broke up with the girlfriend to me, but I'm just guessing. You're a bit of an emo in disguise, maybe an emotional wreck, you seem to get very high (figuratively & literally) and very low. Maybe it's the drugs? You'll have to ask Veritas on that one.

The rhymes were very original as usual and the legitimacy of it all made it that much better. Very good work here, Wise.