Xnub vs. MAINESPITZ - ATOMIC WINS 4-1

[Xnub]

lines - 14
due - wed 6/19

standard rules.

[Atomic]

Never agreed to this but ur ass so ok..check.

[Atomic]

14 sent. drop when ur ready :)

[Atomic]

Xnub

[Atomic]

If you ever do want to get KO'd post your wack shit up, I'll be waiting, had my lines done like a day after you made the thread pussy. peace. Xnub

[Meth]

u can get the NS if u want it

hes 3 days late
Atomic

[Atomic]

i want him to post, he was PM'ing me mad shit about how bad i am. just leave it for a few more days por favor good sir

[Xnub]

lol... key'd for you buddy.

vs MAINSPITZ

Your a raving closet homo in need of tips to keep yah style fresh..
..here's one... take the dick out of ur ass, and if that's TOO hard... Smile less.
I know what this site likes to see, some bars over bullshit favoring complexity..
...while Eunuch might not be a geezer, but r still a dickless virgin who wonders how sex would be...
See, your not close... Or even next to me.. You've created ya own personal lane.
...and ur attitude is so angry and depressed.. surprised you don't have ur own cloud w/ personal rain.
So how u claim to be a boss w/ a verse like that garbage in the SC...
that's about as true a statement as Rawn...saying that he's sexy...
so just stop w/ text bruh, really.. Go cry and listen to some Earl Sweat...
...and maybe yah moms'll listen too....at least then u can say u got a girl wet..
so enough of that talk... I'd rather see you strive to be greater...
...but your SOOo "eh".. and mediocre... Ur even a 'B' hater...(personal)
Now this is where I'd call u out... for being a wack f@ggot messiah that raps in biblical proportions...
..cuz ur such a longbar bitch, Jesus! I'd bed the virgin Mary wishes she had heard of clinical abortions.

[Atomic]

5 days late & a key? KYS.

anyway, yo . . .

you do NOTHING best, grab my imaginary guns & buck the tec,
& since X marks the spot, soon i'll have to open his fuckin chest.
you've always sucked. wack is what you've been, whore.
then i'll fuckin mall you JUST to show you what's in store.
kid'll probably bite, to beat me he'll have the steal the best flows,
you'd think the faggot was streaking, cuz it's nothing new to see X-pose.
he's bucking the glock? lmao plz stop frontin your soft,
& beating me? plz try & climb that mountain THEN jump from the top.
this creepy fucker gets no pussy, & YES u faggot i'll stay hatin,
cuz every slut told 'em get-away & he bought a private vacation.
you take dick in ur ass & ur not too proud to beg you fag,
it's clear nobody wants nub, we have prosthetic legs for that.
sorry nobody told you, but the point of text is to be ill & just better,
OBVIOUSLY he didn't get the memo, or any fuckin skill whatsoever.

plz burn & die. bye.

[Battle Hymns]

I gotta vote the first dood...

The second dood came with 2 solid hits and that's about that. The first guy was more consistent with his flow and didn't give as much filter as the other guy...

Both of your flows were a bit shaky at certain parts but Xnub came on top for being a lot smoother and more direct.

[Atomic]

hm, two questionable votes for Xnub in two of his battles & that's all you've recently posted. interesting.

[Sharp]

I know what this site likes to see, some bars over bullshit favoring complexity..
...while Eunuch might not be a geezer, but r still a dickless virgin who wonders how sex would be...


you've always sucked. wack is what you've been, whore.
then i'll fuckin mall you JUST to show you what's in store.
he's bucking the glock? lmao plz stop frontin your soft,
& beating me? plz try & climb that mountain THEN jump from the top.


eh. atomic was alright. few basic ideas, few solid hits. xnub was kinda treating this like a live battle thing... which it isn't. Eunuch was a solid idea that may have been done before but it still hit imo, also was his best bar. but atomic had clean wording behind him which gave him a clear edge to me

v/ atomic

[Atomic]

thx yo. ups

[Flow]

5 days late & a key? KYS.

anyway, yo . . .

you do NOTHING best, grab my imaginary guns & buck the tec,
& since X marks the spot, soon i'll have to open his fuckin chest.
no complains with the concept but this is statementy in your face stuff that usually pays off only if its LOL worthy
you've always sucked. wack is what you've been, whore.
then i'll fuckin mall you JUST to show you what's in store.
This was ok
kid'll probably bite, to beat me he'll have the steal the best flows,
you'd think the faggot was streaking, cuz it's nothing new to see X-pose.
Nah this had no sting but your on the right ideas
he's bucking the glock? lmao plz stop frontin your soft,
& beating me? plz try & climb that mountain THEN jump from the top.
this concept was used real recently, think il nik a used it... either way its no for me for being recently played + he did it better
this creepy fucker gets no pussy, & YES u faggot i'll stay hatin,
cuz every slut told 'em get-away & he bought a private vacation.
no - this actually seemed to have everything in place, then that punchline just tailed right off...
you take dick in ur ass & ur not too proud to beg you fag,
it's clear nobody wants nub, we have prosthetic legs for that.
lol I liked that to be honest, made me chuckle
sorry nobody told you, but the point of text is to be ill & just better,
OBVIOUSLY he didn't get the memo, or any fuckin skill whatsoever.
meh no
plz burn & die. bye.
not very nice....

lol... key'd for you buddy.

vs MAINSPITZ

Your a raving closet homo in need of tips to keep yah style fresh..
..here's one... take the dick out of ur ass, and if that's TOO hard... Smile less.
lol...im give you this one as I gave maine one for the lol
I know what this site likes to see, some bars over bullshit favoring complexity..
...while Eunuch might not be a geezer, but r still a dickless virgin who wonders how sex would be...
Ok not bad
See, your not close... Or even next to me.. You've created ya own personal lane.
...and ur attitude is so angry and depressed.. surprised you don't have ur own cloud w/ personal rain.
nah - this was lazy man
So how u claim to be a boss w/ a verse like that garbage in the SC...
that's about as true a statement as Rawn...saying that he's sexy...
wtf no no no
so just stop w/ text bruh, really.. Go cry and listen to some Earl Sweat...
...and maybe yah moms'll listen too....at least then u can say u got a girl wet..
theres a concept there, but you didn't make any use of it. no
so enough of that talk... I'd rather see you strive to be greater...
...but your SOOo "eh".. and mediocre... Ur even a 'B' hater...(personal)
personal psht no
Now this is where I'd call u out... for being a wack f@ggot messiah that raps in biblical proportions...
..cuz ur such a longbar bitch, Jesus! I'd bed the virgin Mary wishes she had heard of clinical abortions.wtf...you trailed of wording killed anything that could of been



I thought this would be close, it still was quite close, but Mainespitz takes the win, while he had some major misses his had the basis to be good, he had some concepts just wording/execution/punchlines hurt him. Which is a learning curve and to be honest this was a better verse from him then what I seen.

Xnub you had one lol which I only gave to be fair, as both were weak statements, but you also had an alright bar..otherwise your misses were literally that, no real concepts in them, sting or anything infact. hit up the tutor section, read some battles etc.

Vote Atomic/Mainzspits

[Atomic]

thx sir.

[trap.]

2-1, Atomic. Voting links fellas. Xnub Atomic

[Atomic]

i've voted on every battle in the BA/summer classic/League :)

[Atomic]

up.

[Atomic]

week & a half w/o a vote? not bad not bad.. lolz ups.

[Spoken]

Your a raving closet homo in need of tips to keep yah style fresh..
..here's one... take the dick out of ur ass, and if that's TOO hard... Smile less.

Would have been more hard hitting with a LOL but your wording

I know what this site likes to see, some bars over bullshit favoring complexity..
...while Eunuch might not be a geezer, but r still a dickless virgin who wonders how sex would be...

Ok another chuckle out of me for this one

See, your not close... Or even next to me.. You've created ya own personal lane.
...and ur attitude is so angry and depressed.. surprised you don't have ur own cloud w/ personal rain.

Nah

So how u claim to be a boss w/ a verse like that garbage in the SC...
that's about as true a statement as Rawn...saying that he's sexy...

Forced really

so just stop w/ text bruh, really.. Go cry and listen to some Earl Sweat...
...and maybe yah moms'll listen too....at least then u can say u got a girl wet..

Nah

so enough of that talk... I'd rather see you strive to be greater...
...but your SOOo "eh".. and mediocre... Ur even a 'B' hater...(personal)

Ok

Now this is where I'd call u out... for being a wack f@ggot messiah that raps in biblical proportions...
..cuz ur such a longbar bitch, Jesus! I'd bed the virgin Mary wishes she had heard of clinical abortions.

Would have been a hard hit but again your wording


Vs

you do NOTHING best, grab my imaginary guns & buck the tec,
& since X marks the spot, soon i'll have to open his fuckin chest.

Ok

you've always sucked. wack is what you've been, whore.
then i'll fuckin mall you JUST to show you what's in store.

Ok

kid'll probably bite, to beat me he'll have the steal the best flows,
you'd think the faggot was streaking, cuz it's nothing new to see X-pose.

Lol

he's bucking the glock? lmao plz stop frontin your soft,
& beating me? plz try & climb that mountain THEN jump from the top.

Better wording would have made this a hard hit

this creepy fucker gets no pussy, & YES u faggot i'll stay hatin,
cuz every slut told 'em get-away & he bought a private vacation.

Played

you take dick in ur ass & ur not too proud to beg you fag,
it's clear nobody wants nub, we have prosthetic legs for that.

Lol ok

sorry nobody told you, but the point of text is to be ill & just better,
OBVIOUSLY he didn't get the memo, or any fuckin skill whatsoever.

W/ better wording this could have been LoTB

All in all I got atomic taking this with more quotables that hit more than miss.

[Atomic]

3-1... this retarded battle is going to be up forever.

[Atomic]

this battle is asscrack & nobody else is going to vote on it. just close it imo i don't even want to re-read it

[Lotto Smirk]

you do NOTHING best, grab my imaginary guns & buck the tec,
& since X marks the spot, soon i'll have to open his fuckin chest.
you've always sucked. wack is what you've been, whore.
then i'll fuckin mall you JUST to show you what's in store.
he's bucking the glock? lmao plz stop frontin your soft,
& beating me? plz try & climb that mountain THEN jump from the top

vs

I know what this site likes to see, some bars over bullshit favoring complexity..
...while Eunuch might not be a geezer, but r still a dickless virgin who wonders how sex would be...

i was a bit generous with atomics quotes was a closer battle than it looks by quotes atomic concepts were slighty outddated but good but lacked the setup
while xnub ive seen you come better than this you had 2 alright lines that i liked in this battle props to you both

v- atomic

[Atomic]

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