2013 Hit

[Dope girl]

Delicious is the name
I represent my Legend emcees Legendary music in the game
I'm the Queen of the beat
I'm on fire, be burning them up on the Street
This hood need this Diva get it popping in here
throw your hands up in the air
gonna pour it up like Rhianna
That's how I ballout
I'm really really hot every time I drop wonder hits
We gonna Celebrate 2013 popping bottles
Put your drinks in the sky

[Nigma]

I thought this was very good and read it 13 times. On the first read when you said 'Put your drinks in the sky' I was inspired to run to the kitchen to get a drink then run outside to put it the sky. Outside the air was fresh so I am very thankful that you wrote this to inspire me to go out there

[Dope girl]

Thanks!

[super pimp trillionaire]

dead

[Dope girl]

If I wrote more bars sound better.

[KennyCerealBowl]

I thought this was very good and read it 13 times. On the first read when you said 'Put your drinks in the sky' I was inspired to run to the kitchen to get a drink then run outside to put it the sky. Outside the air was fresh so I am very thankful that you wrote this to inspire me to go out there


Lmaoooooooooooooooooooooo

[Dove Dozer]

this cant be a serious attempt(?)

[Eŋg]

Reasonably amazing.

[Dope girl]

thanks!

[KennyCerealBowl]

I fucking hate you, you suck cyclop cock fucking bitch have a glass of bleach martini and kill yourself

[Dope girl]

What the fuck is wrong with u? Stop free posting with negative comments.

[KennyCerealBowl]

Fuck it i'm done with this stupid bitch.
I'm done with the act i'm done with the joke it's geeting old , your fucking so stupid, on the edge of retarded all your drops is horriBLE! and you. lol. U r so stupid you actually believe these sarcastic ass fuck feeds are honest feeds LMAOO

u really think your the shakespeare of rap. kill urself

I hate u.

[KennyCerealBowl]

U really think nigma read this shit 13times?lmaooooo

[Atomic]

2beautiful dont listen to him. you brightened my day with this masterpiece<3

[Dope girl]

He doesn't realize I don't care what he said, & thanks loves!

[Illume]

To be fair, everyone starts somewhere ...

[Nigma]

U really think nigma read this shit 13times?lmaooooo

I did.

[KennyCerealBowl]

lol the joke is geeting real oldd.. i feel bad for her. shes probably never gonna elevate..

[Dove Dozer]

ok, now this is like the bloopers/rejects from american idol whos parents told them that they could sing beautifully

lmao

[Dope girl]

I'M NOT LISTING TO kEN... I know I got skills & I can sing really good.

[Atomic]

you tell 'em girl i got your back. they just don't understand you. keep spitting that hot fiyah. `1

[Dove Dozer]

I'M NOT LISTING TO kEN... I know I got skills & I can sing really good.

You may be able to sing. However your written lyrics are simple and elementary. You need depth to your content. One word syllable end rhymes just dont cut it. You need to elevate your technical writing plain and simple. People that are telling you its hot, are 1. full of shit 2. After your pussy, or 3. both #1 and 2.

if you can say something with meaning, introduce more than 1 syllable to your rhyming words, change your scheme up to include internal rhymes you will come across much more skilled.

elevate.

[KennyCerealBowl]

I'M NOT LISTING TO kEN... I know I got skills & I can sing really good.

look what u guys did.

[KennyCerealBowl]

Your end rhymes don't rhyme.
here doesnt rhyme with air
air doesnt rhyme with rhianna
rhianna doesnt rhyme with ballout
ballout doesnt rhyme with hits
hits doesnt rhyme with bottles
bottles doesnt rhyme with sky..

[Dope girl]

everyone has a Diff taste in music, but Ya'll don't have to be rude about it.

[StarFaggot]

Nigmas comment leaned me.