Hush vs Rap Maestro - {Hush wins}

[Meth]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League



Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Tuesday,
June 25th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Friday June 28th at 11:59 PM PST.
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Hush Rap Maestro

[Rap Maestro]

I love you Meth.. NO HOMO though.. U want to help me develop.. Thanks.. Now, lets get it started.. 12lines

[Hush]

Lmao

[Hush]

Dude can't get a chick in the sack- they see him an vomit
The one time u had four legs in ur bed u threw a chair on it
I stay burning dutches and blowing smoke as I pass in my ride
When u roll up its in ur moms Chevy on the passenger side
That shit u said in your check in had me in tears
Of course u love meth.. U been sucking dick to get it for years
U don't belong near me til u reps a bit bigger
I'm part of the who's who of txt.. Ur more of a who is this nigguh
I'll take off my shades so he can see my eyes before I blast the sucker
If maestros lifting glasses it's time to clear the table after supper

[~RustyGunZ~]

Rap Maestro

[Rap Maestro]

Dude wanna brawl, Even when his name says it all/
he should 'HUSH it' before i give a pound to pay his ball/
leave him mercilessly begging here when he'd lost, having long No's{nose} like he's pinnochio/
dude is deaf and dumb, thats why he's nicked HUSH, so it'll be unfair if i'm to choke yo/
fool, i'd be fast to pull him down like pants that's on fire/
known i'm wack but could still have you drop your jaws at my chants that's on trial/
you saw my 'checks' and cried cause u got served my flows mixed with hot chilli/
your dick just rant dude like an automatic Uzi that couldn't kill a bird{bed} with two shots really

[Greed]

Nothing

Vs

Nothing

Hush got this with a keystyle type verse. I guess Pinocchio, even though its a stretch like whoa, was alright, but overall hush had enough.

V. Hush

[Flow]

Dude can't get a chick in the sack- they see him an vomit
The one time u had four legs in ur bed u threw a chair on it
fresh simple nice
I stay burning dutches and blowing smoke as I pass in my ride
When u roll up its in ur moms Chevy on the passenger side
meh not great slightly on the statement side
That shit u said in your check in had me in tears
Of course u love meth.. U been sucking dick to get it for years
lol
U don't belong near me til u reps a bit bigger
I'm part of the who's who of txt.. Ur more of a who is this nigguh
nice
I'll take off my shades so he can see my eyes before I blast the sucker
If maestros lifting glasses it's time to clear the table after supper
meh poor effort

getting the feeling you spent minutes on your verse (if that) but to be honest it was still fresh an will probably take it. that meth thing was an easy dig but got the lol. liked the opener too was fresh as was the whos who of text

Dude wanna brawl, Even when his name says it all/
he should 'HUSH it' before i give a pound to pay his ball/
....what? Wording was poor and totally took away from any concept this had. punchline was just a shambles
leave him mercilessly begging here when he'd lost, having long No's{nose} like he's pinnochio/
dude is deaf and dumb, thats why he's nicked HUSH, so it'll be unfair if i'm to choke yo/
so forced and little to no direction
fool, i'd be fast to pull him down like pants that's on fire/
known i'm wack but could still have you drop your jaws at my chants that's on trial/
statement no real concept here
you saw my 'checks' and cried cause u got served my flows mixed with hot chilli/
your dick just rant dude like an automatic Uzi that couldn't kill a bird{bed} with two shots really
lol wtf?



Easy key took this for Hush

[Sharp]

Fourlegs and meth were good

Pinnochio/no's coulda been cool but wording/execution were bad. Everything else was cluttered and poorly worded. Lemme know if you want help

V/hush

[Geno]

lmao, hush easy

way soft but far more than enough layed bACK SWAG TO CLOWN DUDES HORRIBLE VERSE

[Meth]

4 legs

Vs

Nothing

V: hush ,maestro is not one.

[Rawn M.D.]

Lol, or this is easy

hush u just came arrogant lol between the chair n love Meth it was done... Lifting glasses kinda played, but w the set up it was decent cuz the bleed
.. The rest was more so clowning the ne thing else

maestro organize ur thoughts more and the only bar that resembled a punch was the hush nameplay n u used it on the most basic sense, no creative spin really, n then worded it bad. The rest was meh, n btw trial n fire doesn't really rhyme. Keep trying tho.

V/hush

[~RustyGunZ~]

Dude can't get a chick in the sack- they see him an vomit
The one time u had four legs in ur bed u threw a chair on it
I stay burning dutches and blowing smoke as I pass in my ride
When u roll up its in ur moms Chevy on the passenger side
That shit u said in your check in had me in tears
Of course u love meth.. U been sucking dick to get it for years
I'll take off my shades so he can see my eyes before I blast the sucker
If maestros lifting glasses it's time to clear the table after supper

was cool. whos who was statementish but not bad. opener and closer were the best, nothing heavy though. not needed I suppose

vs

bird/bed? really? lmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoo

v/ hush