Flo Real vs Pryde - {Pryde wins}

[Meth]

NBL
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Due Dates:

Verses are due Tuesday,
June 25th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Friday June 28th at 11:59 PM PST.
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Flo Real Pryde

[Greed]

Knew I was gonna run into your dumb ass again. Stupid.

[Flow]

Ite let's make it 24 lines then faggot

[Flow]

Pryde get yo bitch made ass in here and agree to 24 faggot

[Greed]

The thought of writing 24 lines for this makes me want to retire life

10 or nothing.

[Flow]

Faggot

[Flow]

Fuck this knucky fuck



If I rolled up on your block bitch you wouldn't be hanging around
you fuckin pussy? ......Only when im bringing confrontation an staring you down
Girls love my rough approach n rugged looks, I always go through the back door
If Prys got rugged looks too..its cus mike j fox took to his face wit a hacksaw
Im guessing you don't do well with the oppisate sex...am i right?
I really don't wanna pry....which is the response you get every single night
Your the type to just succumb, fall over and take hits like a pimps slag
you don't swing back which is the only difference between you an a punchbag
You need to evolve, step up to my level, pryde your below par
As a man im 3 stages up from pry, mate << that's all that you are

[Greed]

doing the same punch and calling it fresh... unfortunatley I'm the one that birthed it
I guess I was careless << which is the exact same feeling I get when reading your verses
I mean your whole styles depressin, shit its older then nikas kicks
Yeah sure Ive said flo is progressive...... 's spokeswoman and shit
No this is not a diss bro, your writing SHOWS you have no heaters
I dont EVER think that formula won, but then again i dont like nascar either
We know you ain't getting signed with that style, and your hustling is weak kid
Last time someone gave props for flo... real deal made detour think he beat diz
Player? Lol. Bitches give you chances and you don't do shit
I mean he really just post in the discussion.... and even there he lookin stupid

[Atomic]

If I rolled up on your block bitch you wouldn't be hanging around
you fuckin pussy? ......Only when im bringing confrontation an staring you down
lmao no
Girls love my rough approach n rugged looks, I always go through the back door
If Prys got rugged looks too..its cus mike j fox took to his face wit a hacksaw
meh, good attempt but no
Im guessing you don't do well with the oppisate sex...am i right?
I really don't wanna pry....which is the response you get every single night
lol plz stop
Your the type to just succumb, fall over and take hits like a pimps slag
you don't swing back which is the only difference between you an a punchbag
wack
You need to evolve, step up to my level, pryde your below par
As a man im 3 stages up from pry, mate << that's all that you are
i see what u were trying but it's god awful.

//

doing the same punch and calling it fresh... unfortunatley I'm the one that birthed it
I guess I was careless << which is the exact same feeling I get when reading your verses
meh, bad wording, it's ok
I mean your whole styles depressin, shit its older then nikas kicks
Yeah sure Ive said flo is progressive...... 's spokeswoman and shit
wording took away from it but i like the concept, cool
No this is not a diss bro, your writing SHOWS you have no heaters
I dont EVER think that formula won, but then again i dont like nascar either
haha cool
We know you ain't getting signed with that style, and your hustling is weak kid
Last time someone gave props for flo... real deal made detour think he beat diz
mehhhhh
Player? Lol. Bitches give you chances and you don't do shit
I mean he really just post in the discussion.... and even there he lookin stupid
meh nah

pryde easily, white wash, flo's verse sucked dick

[Analyst]

If I rolled up on your block bitch you wouldn't be hanging around
you fuckin pussy? ......Only when im bringing confrontation an staring you down
ehh
Girls love my rough approach n rugged looks, I always go through the back door
If Prys got rugged looks too..its cus mike j fox took to his face wit a hacksaw
nah
Im guessing you don't do well with the oppisate sex...am i right?
I really don't wanna pry....which is the response you get every single night
okay
Your the type to just succumb, fall over and take hits like a pimps slag
you don't swing back which is the only difference between you an a punchbag
nah
You need to evolve, step up to my level, pryde your below par
As a man im 3 stages up from pry, mate << that's all that you are
nah



doing the same punch and calling it fresh... unfortunatley I'm the one that birthed it
I guess I was careless << which is the exact same feeling I get when reading your verses
coo
I mean your whole styles depressin, shit its older then nikas kicks
Yeah sure Ive said flo is progressive...... 's spokeswoman and shit
lol aiight
No this is not a diss bro, your writing SHOWS you have no heaters
I dont EVER think that formula won, but then again i dont like nascar either
okay
We know you ain't getting signed with that style, and your hustling is weak kid
Last time someone gave props for flo... real deal made detour think he beat diz
lol
Player? Lol. Bitches give you chances and you don't do shit
I mean he really just post in the discussion.... and even there he lookin stupid
ehh


vote-pryde, i thought he took this pretty easily, had a solid verse while flo wasnt that consistant, had 1 or 2 okay punches but definately not enough to get the win

[Rawn M.D.]

If I rolled up on your block bitch you wouldn't be hanging around
you fuckin pussy? ......Only when im bringing confrontation an staring you down
-alright, kinda simple concept, wording coulda been better
Girls love my rough approach n rugged looks, I always go through the back door
If Prys got rugged looks to..its cus mike j fox took to his face wit a hacksaw
-usually i dig redundant punches like this but J Fox is kinda over used to me, and the imperfect rhyme kinda damaged it even more
Im guessing you don't do well with the oppisate sex...am i right?
I really don't wanna pry....which is the response you get every single night
-lol, pretty basic, but funny non-the-less
Your the type to just succumb, fall over and take hits like a pimps slag
you don't swing back which is the only difference between you an a punchbag
-nah, to simple and again the imperfect rhyme hurt
You need to evolve, step up to my level, pryde your below par
As a man im 3 stages up from pry, mate << that's all that you are
-best line of ur verse imo..set up to punch executed right..

doing the same punch and calling it fresh... unfortunatley I'm the one that birthed it
I guess I was careless << which is the exact same feeling I get when reading your verses
-decent opener, simple concept tho
I mean your whole styles depressin, shit its older then nikas kicks
Yeah sure Ive said flo is progressive...... 's spokeswoman and shit
-lol, well set-up is wrong cuz nik b coppin NEW kicks on the steady, this coulda been executed ALOT better, but i get where ur going...
No this is not a diss bro, your writing SHOWS you have no heaters
I dont EVER think that formula won, but then again i dont like nascar either
-no, total miss to me - unless formula is an aka of flo..but if its just formula1/nascar..very fillerish and simple
We know you ain't getting signed with that style, and your hustling is weak kid
Last time someone gave props for flo... real deal made detour think he beat diz
-lol, alright
Player? Lol. Bitches give you chances and you don't do shit
I mean he really just post in the discussion.... and even there he lookin stupid
-bad closer very statement'ish

i unno what yall sayin above...this was kinda close to me...i feel that flow's imperfect rhymes on multi's hurt him alot, but his verse was overall more personal and direct..pryde's verse came off a little more generic n statmentish to me, nothing really was direct...both verses i did feel had lines with a lot more potential but the wording was poor and kinda null'd out the punch effect...i gotta go with the more direct verse tho...

vote - flow

but this was closer then yall makin it seem to me at least.

[Xnub]

flo had some cool lines, he started to fall of towards the end of his verse but his closer was nice to me...

Pryde styled on him here tho, his verse was much more entertaining and everything was hitting for me except maybe his closer.

style preference or w.e... but pryde had the better misses, and Lotb for me w/ his opener, I liked the spokeswoman, nascar, and real deal lines tho too... so easy vote for me on this.

mvgt: Pryde , good battle.

[Sharp]

everyone saying this was a blowout... nah


If I rolled up on your block bitch you wouldn't be hanging around
you fuckin pussy? ......Only when im bringing confrontation an staring you down
played idea, but the way you did it is absolutely right. if you can slide future ideas in like that they'll hit well
Girls love my rough approach n rugged looks, I always go through the back door
If Prys got rugged looks too..its cus mike j fox took to his face wit a hacksaw
more of a lol line than anything else, have to be funny to hit and this was okay, wouldn't quote
Im guessing you don't do well with the oppisate sex...am i right?
I really don't wanna pry....which is the response you get every single night
like this one a lot.
Your the type to just succumb, fall over and take hits like a pimps slag
you don't swing back which is the only difference between you an a punchbag
okay, could be reworded to hit harder
You need to evolve, step up to my level, pryde your below par
As a man im 3 stages up from pry, mate << that's all that you are
not bad, you might actually have done a little much as far as setting it up lol. still hit, but that 'as a man' part of the punch was prolly unnecesary. didn't take anything away from it tho


doing the same punch and calling it fresh... unfortunatley I'm the one that birthed it
I guess I was careless << which is the exact same feeling I get when reading your verses
not bad, probably coulda been worded to work a little cleaner
I mean your whole styles depressin, shit its older then nikas kicks
Yeah sure Ive said flo is progressive...... 's spokeswoman and shit
pretty sure its been done, if it were a fresher idea i'd give it to you
No this is not a diss bro, your writing SHOWS you have no heaters
I dont EVER think that formula won, but then again i dont like nascar either
nice lol
We know you ain't getting signed with that style, and your hustling is weak kid
Last time someone gave props for flo... real deal made detour think he beat diz
lmao solid. lotb imo
Player? Lol. Bitches give you chances and you don't do shit
I mean he really just post in the discussion.... and even there he lookin stupid
was pretty unclear, didnt hit


had dont wanna pry and prymate from flo

forumla won and props for flow from pryde


came down to non quoted for me... pryde had two okay ones that outshone the rest of flos verse. close, can see either guy deserving it but i think pryde edged it

v/ pryde

[Hush]

Flow got this

Punching bag line was tight
So was the pry line


Pride still wack no wonder this nigga lost like 40 battles straight on nc

[Flow]

4 - 2

[Split]

No comment on the vote, but Flo your set ups are awkward

[Slowhands]

If I rolled up on your block bitch you wouldn't be hanging around
you fuckin pussy? ......Only when im bringing confrontation an staring you down
nope
Girls love my rough approach n rugged looks, I always go through the back door
If Prys got rugged looks too..its cus mike j fox took to his face wit a hacksaw
wtf
Im guessing you don't do well with the oppisate sex...am i right?
I really don't wanna pry....which is the response you get every single night
weak
Your the type to just succumb, fall over and take hits like a pimps slag
you don't swing back which is the only difference between you an a punchbag
is this english
You need to evolve, step up to my level, pryde your below par
As a man im 3 stages up from pry, mate << that's all that you are
no]/b]

- shit was worded horribly, punches didn't hit and concepts were ok at best

doing the same punch and calling it fresh... unfortunatley I'm the one that birthed it
I guess I was careless << which is the exact same feeling I get when reading your verses
[b]nah
I mean your whole styles depressin, shit its older then nikas kicks
Yeah sure Ive said flo is progressive...... 's spokeswoman and shit
ok but has a forced feeling on last bar
No this is not a diss bro, your writing SHOWS you have no heaters
I dont EVER think that formula won, but then again i dont like nascar either
good
We know you ain't getting signed with that style, and your hustling is weak kid
Last time someone gave props for flo... real deal made detour think he beat diz
nope
Player? Lol. Bitches give you chances and you don't do shit
I mean he really just post in the discussion.... and even there he lookin stupid
nope

- not sure if you tried, since your opponent sucked. atleast you had structure and punches.

- one sided battle here, Pryde be a long shot

[Flow]

Hold on mister name robber - you make your vote sound
One ended an gave him one line which is good??? Keep the vote no issue with it but how
Do you feel about a name robber ;)

[Slowhands]

Hold on mister name robber - you make your vote sound
One ended an gave him one line which is good??? Keep the vote no issue with it but how
Do you feel about a name robber ;)

one sided as in at least he managed to throw punches, where as you just attempted too. funny how you have issue with my vote but nobody elses, and all because of what you see posted around other places? typical fucking text shit, and yall bitch about RB. it's all the same and this is proof. first vote and dudes crying fuckin rivers. suck my dick you garbage fuck, you both suck tbh

[Meth]

dont wanna pry
primate was dece

vs

formula one

Flo reals misses werent very good, prydes misses were better altho still not to hot. I liked dont wanna pry as the lotb but pryde was more consistent

v/ pryde