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Meth
06-18-2013, 02:11 AM
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Untold Utmost

Untold
06-24-2013, 04:56 PM
Hey

~RustyGunZ~
06-25-2013, 10:25 PM
Utmost Untold

Utmost
06-26-2013, 12:18 AM
forgot about this. need an ext

Untold
06-26-2013, 01:12 AM
Ok. As long as you show

Untold
06-26-2013, 11:26 PM
i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone
u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles
im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution
faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution
the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw
cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off

Utmost
06-27-2013, 02:19 AM
just got in, ill have somthin up by dead

Utmost
06-27-2013, 02:59 AM
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Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key
they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week
Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips
I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula
.
.

Atomic
06-27-2013, 06:05 AM
i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
ha, cool
wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone
u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone
wording hurts it, punch is meh, concept is cool
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles
heh, dece
im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution
faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution
rofl, huge reach but i enjoyed it
the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw
cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off
meh, nah


/./././././

Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key
they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week
wayyy too easy. its aight tho
Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
lol poor wording & the w/p is sketchy. i like the concept tho, not a bad bar imo.
I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips
I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish
haaa, cool
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
don't see how two timing would connect to seconds..so nah, reaching.
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula
.
once again, reach on the connection, decent concept tho.

...

v/ untold. took it w/ fresher wording/harder punches. i know u key'd utmost, & based on that ur verse wasn't bad @ all. but yea, untold took it. cool battle guys.

Meth
06-28-2013, 03:43 AM
LinkedIn
Pro Glide was an almost

vs

two timing and capitilize on u were both almost

V/ Untold

Hits were better. Misses about the same so it comes down to what did hit. two to two on what hit, one quote for told takes it for him. Close battle.

Sharp
06-28-2013, 04:02 PM
i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
almost cool, i just didnt like the way it was done
wit a smart phone, ur a dumb fuck. the irony wit this man alone
u couldn't 'Boost Mobile' votes even if u posted ur verses from that brand of phone
kind of a stretch but alright
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles
nice
im a G wit dimes. it should be a crime! help? i have no free contribution
faggot, u couldn't get LinkedIn to bitches if that site had cheap prostitution
solid
the sites back n all, but these words'll crack ya jaw
cuz when i call u a knucklehead, i'm still referencing u suckin a faggot off
alright idea but kinda eh


Vets said my wordins bad, but its sooooo hard NOT to procrastinate and key
they said I shouldnt 'capitalize on YOU' anymore... well, blame Meth for the matches this week
nice
Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
cool idea
I'll jus key some shit, lock the V and dip - since all ur bringin is the cheapest flips
I mean, fuckin shootin fish in a barrel... this is more like viewin amoeba in a petri dish
eh
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
alright
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula
lol



had it even in quotes, proglide and linkdin vs capitalize and chum bucket and one miss each... untolds nonquotes edged this one for me tho. close battle, cool stuff

v/untold

~RustyGunZ~
06-28-2013, 04:12 PM
i wish this shit mattered. i'll leave this kid battered! im past better
this maybe a battle of the Double U's, but u have nuttin in common wit that letter
i'll shave a little off the top. i aint kiddin when i plot. i prepare chronicles
now watch this ProGlide across ya neck wit a razor that'll cut past ya hair follicles

seen boost w/p before, yours was sloppy. opener was alright, cool nameplay, could've been worded a bit better with the set up and delivery. ProGlide is okay the ending of the delivery wasn't very harsh though, bit predictive. linkedin was a good idea but horrible execution tbh, why would they have cheap pros? closer eh, seen better on my name. you hurt from wording mostly here, seemed rushed you didn't really connect any heavy punches with your concepts.

vs.

Uve neva been a ladies man - so I dont need clues to why this guys tense
Coz every chick that takes the 'PisTold off' approach.. is puttin him one bullet closer to suicide attempts
Plus with chicks ur the worst, all it takes is a wink n shes steppin out
'course ya bitch is 'two timing' you... I hit her up n she doesnt even think for a Second now
G'head, front like ya clap heat - you can ACT hard but please im warnin ya
Coz the only time we'd see this 'Chum Buck it'.. is if plankton got the secret formula

opener ehhh.. basic.. pistold was dope imo. fish nah, just didn't hit for me with the connection. two timing was cool, nothing amazing. closer was cool. bit better wording than untold and lotb so

v/utmost