Friendly: oats vs. Vividlyvague (VV WINS BY NO SHOW)

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Verses are due Saturday, June 28 at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Tuesday, July 1 at 11:59 p.m. PT.

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Topic


To Some Ladies


Good luck, oats and Vividlyvague.

[oats]

Cool, good luck

[e11even]

Interesting. G/L

[big baby]

checking in fo oatz

[e11even]

Tips are more important than pointers.
A stake in his fantasy's a drop in the coin purse.
A rhythmic wooing to boost his juices could reward her.
Marriage is that fabled escape where eternity and true love meet borders.
A john is as far from biblical as the acts done with them.
A car note is the note to hit, while his focus is what chokes within.
Open wallets make empty pockets and happy strolls on the strip.
A businessman is a small market venture, where capital is upper, cased in clips.
Cinderella's a deity.
The pious, if the prior is true, get by on the the sleeves of chiefs,
Execs, golden geese, never to press a crease to eat.
Every pair of tail lights is a dream to be,
Because one high flier falls every full moon.
One pump gets returned from that musty motel room.
Two pimps fall for the bottom ho far too soon.
Third times a charm after two rapes have scarred the womb.
They have to make it out the favela.
The hostel can't be the beginning of forever.
That subway basement won't bring true love together.
That STD isn't as contagious as cupid's arrow feathers.
It is all a dream. A long fucked up dream.